Reviews (87)

Miriel · 15 September 2003 · Chapter 14: A Slip of Tongue

OMG, I love this chapter...ELrond and Gil-galad indeed! (Gil-galad was an elven king...) They kidnapped the bar maid. "Aragorn the Kidnapper." Heehhee. Love it!!

Miriel · 15 September 2003 · Chapter 13: Arda Hath No Fury Like an Angry Glorfindel

The Singing Mumak. I wonder if they will see one by the end of their travels? (I for one would like to see a flying cow...)

Miriel · 15 September 2003 · Chapter 12: Silver Is the Color of Hope

Un-italicised flashbacks. Thoughts are in italics, flashbacks can usually be told simply by how well written the falshback is. Shadowfax's attitude is a source of great amusement for me. Shame on him! (That would have been hysterical for GAndalf to have turned him into a pig!)

Hai · 12 September 2003 · Chapter 15: The Hobbit Wizard

lol, The Shiney. I like that! stupid birds! although this is reminding me of Alfred Hitchcocks (sp?) The Birds. Oh, no now the hobbits are being hunted by Eagles who will probably scare them even more! Now the hobbits have a phobia of birds, that will be nice. I love Borofara! Made me laugh! kidnapping a bar maid. I find it dreadfully amusing! ;) Legolas and Gimli certainly don't seem to be getting along. Glorfindel handled it all quite well I thought, although Gimli baited Legolas further. Looking forward to more! Thank you!

Hai · 11 September 2003 · Chapter 11: The Brilliance of Legolas

Hehe! Good one for Legolas! Though I can't imagine Gimli's horror at thinking Legolas then Glorfindel were eating his brains! Yuck! "Funny, he never realized just how sweet and berrylike his blood tasted", loved it. How will Legolas fare against Glorfindel? Poor hobbits, thinking an Elf Lord is trying to steal the One Ring then running off on their own only to be captured by crebin! The Merry plunging to what I can only hope was not his death! How will Gandalf help them? Thank you for such a wonderful story! I'm looking forward to more!

Miriel · 11 September 2003 · Chapter 11: The Brilliance of Legolas

No fanfic has ever, ever, made me laugh this hard!!!! Thank you for the pick-me-up! (I needed one today!) Please update soon!

Miriel · 11 September 2003 · Chapter 6: The Lion and the Gnat

Just for the record, I think the bird attack is original and exciting.

Miriel · 11 September 2003 · Chapter 5: Flight From Rivendell

OMG!!! LOL!! I have tears coming out of my eyes as the result from Elronds garbled message! Heehee!

Miriel · 11 September 2003 · Chapter 1: Disagreeable Characters

Lovley story so far. Very long meeting indded... BTW, most of this chapter, not just thought, dialgue as well, is in italics.

shirebound · 11 September 2003 · Chapter 11: The Brilliance of Legolas

It's amazing how many stories you're juggling here, bryn. I'm most concerned about the hobbits, but eagerly awaiting updates on everyone!

shirebound · 8 September 2003 · Chapter 5: Flight From Rivendell

It's a mystery why we sometimes wait so long to read a story! I've been eyeing this one for sometime, and just never got around to reading it. Thank you so much for delivering it five chapters at a time! What a wonderfully creative, fun story! There are so many things going on, I don't even want to guess how 'your' characters *ever* become a Fellowship. I've never seen the cultural and emotional differences of this disparate group highlighted so expertly. I don't know where this is going, and I don't want to guess. I'll just eagerly look forward to chapters 6-10.

Hai · 8 September 2003 · Chapter 1: Disagreeable Characters

I bet Gloin wasn't pleased when he realized who Legolas was! The council could have been really messy had the dwarves dredged up too much and it probably wouldn't have gone well had Gandalf been gone. lol, looking forward to more! Thank you!