Larner · 2 November 2010 · Chapter 1
A tragic tale, leaving one wondering who this particular houseless one was, and how it ended up in that valley. But at least they didn't totally lose her, even if she did end up having to leave Middle Earth.
Things That Have Not Yet Come to Pass by Levade
Reviews (4)
Fantasia · 1 November 2010 · Chapter 1
Wow, this is one of the LOTR scariest stories that I've ever read. Great writing!
Author's reply
Thank you so much! I was definitely trying for the shivery feeling. :)
Erulisse (one L) · 1 November 2010 · Chapter 1
OMG - spooky, thorough, heart-felt, wonderful. I loved this story - perfect for All Hallows Eve. Too few stories deal with the unhoused, and having one linger in the area where the orcs resided only makes sense. Thanks for making my Halloween more perfect. - Erulisse (one L)
Author's reply
Unhoused and Halloween just seemed to go hand-in-hand. :) Thank you so much!
BeeGee · 31 October 2010 · Chapter 1
Whew! This was very very creepy! VERY Creepy! Good pacing, excellent characterization, and I like the little twist there at the end, where ugly dolly is still in situ. They need to put that thing in the fire. Poor Lindir! No wonder Galadriel and Celeborn didn't want to visit, if she was forewarned by her mirror. Well written, gave me chills.
Author's reply
I was worried I was going to get yelled at for killing Lindir, but I do like him! And yes, the doll needs to GO. Thank you so much! :)