Reviews (43)

Bakoneko · 4 October 2016 · Chapter 10: Loss and Profit

I love this whole seties so much. It's been a couple of years since I came back and reread it, and it's always a treat. Hoping that one day there will be more chapters so we can make sure Frodo and Henna will be all right! (I mean, obviously, with Frodo, but I still want to see how things will progress.) Love all the Gamgees, love the Brandybucks and the Tooks, and even the Sackville-Bagginses - in a "love to hate them" sort of way! I know how hard it can be to return to old writing, but I will keep hope alive and keep watching my alerts! Hope that life is treating you well!

PSW · 5 January 2016 · Chapter 10: Loss and Profit

I'm sad that this isn't finished, but even so, it was so worth the read. I have really enjoyed this series -- it has been just what I was hoping for when I started it. Thanks so much for writing!

Bitsay · 13 October 2014 · Chapter 10: Loss and Profit

I have read all three of the Making of a Ringbearer series and they are exceptionally entertaining! Well crafted and the 'voices' of the characters are really true. Thank you so much for the mnay hours of entertainment you have given me and ai do hope you will be finishing 'Aweigh' very soon! Please, please, please, please! 😄

Eef · 4 March 2013 · Chapter 10: Loss and Profit

Are you still writing about this? I'm awful ashamed I only recently discovered your work. I can seem to get enough of Tolkien-lore, or Lord of the Rings-lore, to be exact, these months. I have been restless, and restless still: almost disturbed that the enthusiasm will ward off with time, and I personally don't want that; I relish Professor Tolkien's works with high heart, so I am currently indulging in some 'fanfiction' as they are called, which are, almost tied to the book's plot formula. And it has been hard and exhausting search, 'cause I may say so, most of them are just to satisfy the 'fan'- nature of the most dedicated and passionate readers, and I find their plots too much of an exaggeration of the story. But so far, I have read a couple most decent, but from time to time can still make me... well... wince; I may be a bit prejudiced because we all have our preferences, but that is always a woe of a reader. And by my likes so far, yours seem to fit the best, and I just don't mean that out of my great adoration for your writing style, but also, you have kept the essence of every character rightfully. Especially Sam Gamgee's; I could feel the taylor of his character development very similar to Tolkien's expression of his Sam in his letters, and I would very much love to read more of this development in the future chapters. I also loved Merry and Pippin's, and oh, the rest of the bunch! Even those trivial characters! I do like your straightforward approach with the writing style and take on their personality profiles, and I am most thankful of yout craft and effort! But admittedly, I miss the two veteran folks in your earlier chronicles, those are Gandalf and Bilbo. I became even more fond of the elder hobbit because of you! Though I am sure you are just doing what an amicable writer should, and that is to keep a firm noose on their original nature as was reflected from the books. I also loved Gandalf passing in and out of their lives, then turning up once more, in a most unexpected time! I hope I should read about them again, even just glimpses. Oh well, I will leave that to you! Thank you so much again, and I hope I am not causing some inconvenience. I also apologise if my english can be a little about the bush, or altogether vague and confusing; it's not my first language you see, but no mqtter; just want to drop my cents off your table before you start writing again. Take care and God speed my good fellow!

Luthoriel · 23 February 2013 · Chapter 10: Loss and Profit

I've really enjoyed reading this series. I'm guessing that Frodo is going to get sick again, so maybe after he recovers he should go into the Old Forest. In the Fellowship of the Ring, Merry mentioned Frodo going into the Old Forest.

Bakoneko · 11 February 2013 · Chapter 10: Loss and Profit

I'm so glad you're continuing with this story, as it's always such a treat to get a notification about a new chapter. And I am so in love with your Frodo, Sam, Merry, Pippin, the other Gamgees, and just all the characters. More domestic adventures, please!

Dreamflower · 29 December 2012 · Chapter 10: Loss and Profit

Thank you for such a lovely birthday mathom! It's delightful! I like this look at a Frodo left on his own for a change--it had to have happened, and more than once in seventeen years! But it's seldom mentioned or written of. (We hobbit enthusiasts tend to prefer interaction.) I do hope that Henna pulls through. And Merry the mushroom enthusiast! I love it! And also, pardon my nosiness, but it looks to me like there is a little foreshadowing of some Frodo h/c coming down the pike?

shirebound · 29 December 2012 · Chapter 10: Loss and Profit

“I came to say good-by, and to ask if there is anything I can do to help.” He knew the Gamgees would never accept his money, but occasionally he could persuade them to accept some other form of aid. Bell looked at the young gentlehobbit fondly and gave his arm a squeeze. It's little details like that that give your story such a homey feel.

Larner · 29 December 2012 · Chapter 10: Loss and Profit

Merry's getting along well. And I fear that Frodo is becoming ill, poor lad!

Imladris · 26 December 2012 · Chapter 9: End of the Fair

Loving it so far - and the way the fire has reconnected Merry to the others, and developed his relationship with Sam, was/is brilliant. Can't wait to see what you write next for these guys! Your creativity is fantastic. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year, I look forward to your next update.

Larner · 22 December 2012 · Chapter 9: End of the Fair

To be a hero in this manner isn't easy for one as self-effacing as Frodo is, but he does deserve the respect he receives. Lovely images here as we see the generous individual he's become.

Dreamflower · 21 December 2012 · Chapter 9: End of the Fair

I am greatly pleased to see a new chapter up! I love that Frodo is still embarrassed at being called a hero. I also got a kick out of Merry's first look at "grown up" Estella! Yay for productive airplane rides!

shirebound · 21 December 2012 · Chapter 9: End of the Fair

"How was the Fair? Did you bring back any news?" What a perfect way to change the subject. I'm so happy whenever I see an update from you. :)

Larner · 29 March 2012 · Chapter 8: Pippin the Grey

It's good to see Merry coming into his own, and Pippin pretending to be Gandalf. Glad he finally accepted that even Wizards will use dish cloths when it's needed.

Dreamflower · 29 March 2012 · Chapter 8: Pippin the Grey

This is so sweet! I love Pippin pretending to be Gandalf! And I am glad that Merry and Sam are finding their way into friendship... But Frodo needs to watch out pushing things too fast!

shirebound · 29 March 2012 · Chapter 8: Pippin the Grey

Poor Frodo, in so much pain. But he's surrounded by many folks who love and want to help him, and that makes me happy. “If I was really Gandalf, I would magic you back to your bed.” Awwww, that's so sweet. Thank you for another chapter of this delightful story.

mews1945 · 6 March 2012 · Chapter 7: Assessing the Damage

Everyone is so in character, and the interactions are so appealing. Poor little Hob, feelings so guilty, just like Merry. This is such a pleasure to read.

Larner · 5 March 2012 · Chapter 7: Assessing the Damage

Aha! A good dose of H/C for our beloved Frodo. I laugh to see Merry chased away from the stove for letting the porridge burn, and rejoice to see how seriously Pippin's taking his instructions to make certain Frodo rests.

Dreamflower · 5 March 2012 · Chapter 7: Assessing the Damage

This is such a sweet chapter, all of them doing their best to help one another. Merry really is learning. Growing up is hard, and he's done it faster than most his age, whether by temperament or by his station in life or both. But Frodo's confidence in him is well-placed as we know. Pippin is so cute, too, falling asleep on Frodo like that. Aww...

shirebound · 5 March 2012 · Chapter 7: Assessing the Damage

“I wish I could see Mr. Frodo, an’ say I’m sorry,” the wretched Hob went on. “My tummy thinks that might make it feel better, if ye follow me.” That's one of the sweetest things I've ever read. :) Dear Merry, at least he's unburdened himself. And Frodo is eating well, and everyone is being taken care of. *happy*

Larner · 28 February 2012 · Chapter 6: Sudden Reversals

It's good that all pulled together, and hopefully Merry, Pippin, and Sam will work tirelessly to care for Frodo now that he's safe and recovering from his smoke inhalation and his burns.

shirebound · 27 February 2012 · Chapter 6: Sudden Reversals

This is such a wonderfully hobbity story, I just love it. Dear Pip, and Merry so mature, and Sam so caring, and Frodo so brave, and... *beams*

Agape4Gondor · 27 February 2012 · Chapter 1: Merry Comes to Visit

Agape comes to visit. Saw that this is part three. Saw the great reviews for part one. Intrigued. Just here to tell you I am going to begin part one. See you soon. Have some seedcake ready, if you please.

Dreamflower · 27 February 2012 · Chapter 6: Sudden Reversals

Oh this is nice! I love all the attention Frodo is getting for his heroism-- of course it embarrasses him, but it's well deserved. And I like the way Merry steps up and takes charge at Bag End. This is like the Merry we see in canon, helping Frodo to deal with people. And great news about the updates! I will be looking forward to them!

thedeathchamber · 22 January 2012 · Chapter 5: Disaster

Please, accept my heartfelt thanks for writing this wonderful story. I've been reading non-stop- and yet trying to pace myself so that it would last a little longer- since chapter 1 of Adrift. Truly, I have thoroughly enjoyed every word- marvelously written! The character development has been stupendous throughout, staying true to the characters within the context of your interpretation. I also love the interaction between the characters- lovely dialogue- and the sensitive, realistic approach to complex relationships and emotions. Simply fantastic work. I will certainly re-read this and stay hopeful for further updates- especially with that cliffhanger you left us with! Please, I entreat you, continue- you still have avid readers! It's been a pleasure. May Goldworthy