Lizzy50 · 22 December 2023 · Chapter 1: Tears on the Battlefield
This is hilarious! I love it!valar
Tears on the Battlefield by Alassante
Reviews (8)
Larner · 3 April 2010 · Chapter 1: Tears on the Battlefield
It is said that madness is hereditary, but that we get it from our children.... Nice illustration of that principle!
Raksha The Demon · 23 March 2010 · Chapter 1: Tears on the Battlefield
Oh, this is all too funny; especially the reference of the crusty First Age guys to Legolas as the "Ai, A Balrog" whiner in Moria. And will Feanor get in touch with his inner child, or get a thumping from Fingolfin? Love it!
Author's reply
I'm a little afraid of what Feanor's inner child would be like lol I doubt he's ever been too sweet of a guy.
Elflingimp · 23 March 2010 · Chapter 1: Tears on the Battlefield
Aw! I can't stop laughing!!! "Are you crying?" There's no crying in battle!" Now where did I here that before?? Thanks for the wonderful laugh today! Hugs The Imp
Author's reply
Shamelessly stole from Tom Hank's mouth! Glad you got a laugh out of it!
6336 · 23 March 2010 · Chapter 1: Tears on the Battlefield
Sounds like a severe case of pre-battle nerves, once the fighting starts they will be the deadliest bunch of you-know-whats you have ever seen! Liked it, More please, Lynda
Author's reply
If you like my crackpot humor on this - you might like my Singing Silmarils drabbles lol Thanks!
Shemyaza · 23 March 2010 · Chapter 1: Tears on the Battlefield
I think your story has only just proved to me that I probably wouldn't follow any of them to the toilet, never mind into battle! Only kidding, as a former soldier of eleven years who has seen action, they sounded just like any bunch of soldiers getting ready to go into action. Bad humour, ripping the crap out of each other and making with the insults. Yep, pretty much like any soldier I've ever known...including myself!
Author's reply
Oh I don't know. Following them to a bar might be entertaining :) I can only imagine seven brothers, especially the seven plagues of Feanor, would be the type to rag on each other all the time.
Midnight Promise · 22 March 2010 · Chapter 1: Tears on the Battlefield
Uh-huh, that was supposed to be "much". .. I really need to stop reading/reviewing when its late at night. -_- Again, good job. :)
Author's reply
Much or mush - glad I made you laugh :) Thanks!
Midnight Promise · 22 March 2010 · Chapter 1: Tears on the Battlefield
I just found myself snickering the whole time I read this - a mush needed laugh, so thank you. :) Haha! Ending was perfect - loved it! In other words, please write more? :D Hope everything is going great! --Midnight Promise