To See the Light by Mirach
Virtuella · 18 February 2010 · Chapter 1: To See the Light
I thought this was the most impressive entry at this month's Teitho contest. The tone was fabulous - truly haunted. A real work of art.
Author's reply
Many thanks, I'm really glad that you liked it!
curiouswombat · 17 February 2010 · Chapter 1: To See the Light
What an excellent piece - such wonderful use of language - there is a real sense of how the dead must have felt. I am lost in admiration and must go back and read through again.
Author's reply
Thank you very much for your review, I'm honoured!
Larner · 17 February 2010 · Chapter 1: To See the Light
And so it is that these lost ones are redeemed by the will of one who had no desire to do so, but who must that both he and they might know the peace of what comes next! So wonderful to see them find names and their way opened at the last!
Author's reply
Yes, peace comes next... for them in that very moment, but for him later yet, after many struggles and battles that lie before him... Thank you very much for your review!
Ellynn · 17 February 2010 · Chapter 1: To See the Light
Excellent! I really love how you describe the thoughts of the undead, and their longing for light - perfect! Great story.
Author's reply
Thank you very much, I'm really glad that you liked it!