This Shining Ember Burns my Hand by Primsong

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Larner · 20 January 2010 · Chapter 1: This Shining Ember Burns my Hand

Indeed a perfect gem--both the love given him and this drabble, Primsong. Beautifully written.

Lindelea · 20 January 2010 · Chapter 1: This Shining Ember Burns my Hand

Beautifully rendered, as delicately constructed as the thought behind it, sweet and fraught with sorrow in the same moment.

Author's reply

As is your review! Thank you.

shirebound · 20 January 2010 · Chapter 1: This Shining Ember Burns my Hand

That's very beautiful, very poetic.

Author's reply

Thank you - they lend themselves to poetry, don't they?

Dreamflower · 19 January 2010 · Chapter 1: This Shining Ember Burns my Hand

Oh! Oh, this is just beautiful! Indeed, she was of far more value than the jewel he'd taken to win her, and far more ephemeril-- and yet their love would last forever.

Author's reply

I don't think he could ever quite comprehend the value of what he had, but being loved when we 'don't deserve it' is really what Love is all about, isn't it?