Larner · 27 October 2009 · Chapter 1: Crossroads of Light and Shadow
Truly a work of art! Magnificent!
Author's reply
Thank you very much!
Crossroads of Light and Shadow by Mirach
Reviews (5)
Raksha The Demon · 23 October 2009 · Chapter 1: Crossroads of Light and Shadow
Now this is a scary story! It's brilliant to bring the shadow-thief and the Mewlips together, for maximum horror. (remind me never to walk in a muddy area in the dark again) I wonder if other Rangers ever met up with either of these dark powers. But Aragorn manages to survive in a way I would not have expected. A darkly lovely Halloween treat!
Author's reply
hank you! I think I'll avoid dark and muddy areas for some time too =) I don't know if other Rangers attract dark powers as much as Aragorn does, but somehow he always manages to survive... Thank you for the review!
Dreamflower · 22 October 2009 · Chapter 1: Crossroads of Light and Shadow
What a fascinating experiment! I loved your use of font and shapes to convey the sounds. And as soon as I "heard" the "squish-flip-flop" I knew it would be the Mewlips! And then bringing in the Shadow Bride, too! Those were really creepy poems! Good job in bringing the creepiness out.
Author's reply
Thank you! I just don't know why SoA doesn't want to save my formatting... And yes, Mr. Tolkien knew how to write a creepy poem when the mood hit him :D Author Reply: P.S: I managed to convince the site to save the formatting! :D
Estelcontar · 22 October 2009 · Chapter 1: Crossroads of Light and Shadow
That is a very original story indeed. It got one of my votes for Teitho. I would never imagine I would see the mewlips featured in a story, much less imagine Aragorn meeting them. Well done.
Author's reply
Thank you Estelcontar! I had great fun writing this story =)
Inzilbeth · 22 October 2009 · Chapter 1: Crossroads of Light and Shadow
Well, that's a first! I never thought to read a fic with Mewlips in it! And the idea of Aragorn coming across them is most original. Very well done!
Author's reply
Thank you! I just can't convince the site to save my formatting, it looks better in FFN... Author Reply: P.S: I managed to convince SoA to cooperation! :D