The Well by Independence1776

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anonymouse (newly christened Maglor fangirl) · 2 April 2020 · Chapter 1: The Well

Okay, I'm saying this in advance: sorry for the rambling 3 AM review. But this is straight-up BEAUTIFUL! Tolkien and Christianity always subtly went hand in hand, but now they're prancing through the meadow holding hands! I LOVE IT!!!!

Author's reply

I'm glad you enjoyed it! (I sincerely mean this: I hope what I have to say next will not diminish your enjoyment of the story. But I'm not interested in discussing this fic. I wrote it as literally the last gasp of my Catholicism over a decade ago. I'm now very happily Jewish.)

Radbooks · 29 August 2010 · Chapter 1: The Well

This is a wonderful, wonderful story! I started reading your newest story and am enjoying that so I decided to see what else you had posted and I'm so glad I did. Very nicely done.

Author's reply

Thank you! :D I'm glad you liked RAFA enough to check to see what else I'd written. It's a huge compliment!

Mîdhaer · 16 August 2009 · Chapter 1: The Well

Amazing. Short, simple, and touching. Worthy of a MEFA. Great job.

Author's reply

Thank you very much!

Galimeril · 4 August 2009 · Chapter 1: The Well

That was beautiful.

Author's reply

Thank you!

BM · 4 August 2009 · Chapter 1: The Well

That was beautiful! Thanks so much for sharing it! My only curiosity was who was waiting for him at the boat! BM

Author's reply

Thank you! *grins* I have my own ideas, but feel free to imagine who yourself. I think if I specified, the power of the story would be lost. ~ Indy

Silmarien · 3 August 2009 · Chapter 1: The Well

Simply ... awesome.

Author's reply

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.

Sitara · 3 August 2009 · Chapter 1: The Well

Well, although I had reviewed your story when I read it first time posted on ff.net, I like it too much to not review it a second time. It looks like I cannot get enough of it. So moving, so beautiful and, as you said, it's not at all AU, due to the exchange between Finrod and Andreth. The image of Eru-as-Man rocking Maglor in His Arms is the most awesome thing one could imagine, in my opinion. Well, maybe there is an exception, something even more moving...the same image, only having Maglor replaced with his father. "smile" Thank you again, Indy, for sharing with us your precious little story. Kindest regards, Sitara

Author's reply

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing it a second time! I'm so glad you think it's worthy to do that. Well, I don't have any plans to write one, but Nieriel Raina has one as the first chapter in her collection "NiRi's Narrations" here on SoA. You're welcome-- and thank you again for rereading! ~ Indy

Larner · 3 August 2009 · Chapter 1: The Well

I am certain I have read this elsewhere--perhaps on HASA. It is definitely a worthy one, and one I delighted to read then and again now. Yes, definitely thought-provoking. Thank you for posting it here.

Author's reply

You probably have, on either SWG or ff.net, but not on HASA since I don't post there. I'm glad you find it thought provoking! And thank you for reading it again. :) ~ Indy

Cairistiona · 3 August 2009 · Chapter 1: The Well

Oh, I liked this immensely! I like to find redemptive themes in Tolkien, even though it was not written in any way as allegory for Christianity. It can be hard to combine Christian themes into Tolkien because of that, but this is an intriguing possibility that you've explored with touching eloquence (as soon as I saw the stranger spoke Aramaic, I knew something good was afoot!). I really enjoyed reading this!

Author's reply

I'm glad you liked it! I'm quite glad Middle-earth isn't an allegory, as I… dislike… them. But I got the idea for the fic after the first time I read _Athrabeth Finrod ah Andreth_, and Tolkien mentions in there some of the First Age Edain believe that Eru will someday enter into Arda. So it isn't completely uncanonical to imagine something like this occuring. I grinned when you mentioned the Aramaic-- it was a last minute addition to make the location a little clearer. Thank you! ~ Indy

Alassiel · 3 August 2009 · Chapter 1: The Well

Yes! Yes! Yes! This is exactly what Eruanneth_Luin and I tried to say in our tale Makalaurë, but you have said it succinctly and with grace. Of course He would have forgiven Maglor, as all who understand the consequences of their deeds are forgiven. Thank you for this wonderful reminder to us all. Blessings, Alassiel

Author's reply

Thank you so much for your kind words! The story came to me in a flash after the first time I read _Athrabeth_, and I changed very little in the editing. as all who understand the consequences of their deeds are forgiven. That's not quite what I believe-- I believe He forgives, period-- but the sentiment remains the same. ~ Indy