War Now Calls Us by Elvenesse
khazar-khum · 6 September 2003 · Chapter 1: War Now Calls Us
This is a very tightly-wound poem. The rhyme scheme, usually so elusive, is well-done, and lends itself beautifully to the theme.
Author's reply
Oops, I don't no how I missed this review. Thanks for reviewing and I’m pleased that you think the poem worked, as for me it often seems to be a matter of chance more than anything else.
RavenLady · 5 September 2003 · Chapter 1: War Now Calls Us
Wow. What a beautiful and moving poem!
Author's reply
I'm sorry I'm replying so late, but I'm glad you liked my poem and thanks for reviewing.
Citrine · 4 September 2003 · Chapter 1: War Now Calls Us
Hey, I'm reading it-and I am very impressed! This is excellent! Please don't let lack of reviews stop you from writing, or make you think that no one cares. There are many, many times when I should review something I've read, but I'm just too darn lazy, and the chance escapes me. Keep writing!
Author's reply
Thank you for reviewing and I'm glad you like it. This site's good because you can see how many people read your work, even if they don't review.