Reviews (34)

ChasingLiberty · 7 September 2003 · Chapter 1: An Unpleasant Encounter

OH WOW! LMAO! That was so funny! Poor, poor Elrohir... It was very cute though. I can't wait until Elladan finds out. I wonder what his reaction would be. :)

Marnie · 6 September 2003 · Chapter 1: An Unpleasant Encounter

ROTFL! Oh, I can so see it. Poor Elrohir! (Unless it was Elladan all along, in which case, serves him right). *and* poor Lenniel. Girls may be yucky, but I know exactly how she feels. A great start to what looks like a very entertaining fic!

Jay of Lasgalen · 6 September 2003 · Chapter 1: An Unpleasant Encounter

What a lovely story. Poor Elrohir! I rather like 'storm Lenniel', but I hope Elrohir gets his own back! And what about Elladan when he finds out? Whose side will he be on? I love little twins fics (although in my own stories, Elrohir is the one chasing the girls, very sucessfully too!) Jay

xsilicax · 6 September 2003 · Chapter 1: An Unpleasant Encounter

Oh poor Ro, I guess he hasn't quite reached the age where kissing women is fun yet. Now isn't that Elleth just a wonderful stroppy girl *g* she reminds me of a young me I think. Though quite why she wants someone two years younger to kiss her... Hehe, lovely start, I can't wait for more, Cathy. xx

Nilmandra · 5 September 2003 · Chapter 1: An Unpleasant Encounter

I love it - storm Lenniel! Poor Elrohir - to be attacked by an elleth who wanted to kiss him!! Well, a day will come when he wil be a bit more open to such behaviors. For now - well, I hope Nana finds Elrohir and gives him a hug. And if Elladan is smart, I think he will stay hidden! Very cute, looking forward to more. :)

coonzalas · 5 September 2003 · Chapter 1: An Unpleasant Encounter

Very cute! Elrohir was adorable with his repeated 'I'm Elrohir!!!'

Antigone_Q · 5 September 2003 · Chapter 1: An Unpleasant Encounter

Funny! I especially liked Elrohir's unenthusiastic:"May the Valar bless you on this special day." Where does the term "elleth" come from? I haven't seen it used that way before.

daw the minstrel · 5 September 2003 · Chapter 1: An Unpleasant Encounter

This made me laugh out loud. I was particularly amused by Elladan/Elrohir's horror that this elleth is going to make him kiss her. She should have brought friends to hold him down!!

Karri · 5 September 2003 · Chapter 1: An Unpleasant Encounter

Aw! Poor Elrohir! That really stinks (speaking as a twin here.) I hope the little elleth gets her comeuppance - not to mention Elladan, for promising to kiss her and therefore getting poor Elrohir into the mess in the first place. Adorable first chapter. Thank you for the entertainment.