Tari · 19 November 2008 · Chapter 2: Another Perspective (A Thousand Words)
Tell me it is not Glorfindel who did this horrible thing to Frodo. That would be beyond aweful. This is so excellent; I do hope there will be more.
I Will Take It by Agape4Gondor
Reviews (16)
Tari · 22 September 2008 · Chapter 2: Another Perspective (A Thousand Words)
What a burden for Elladan to bear. Knowing that he probably saved Frodo's life and the Ring from falling into the wrong hands did nothing to ease the guilt he felt in having to kill one of his own. It seems that it just couldn't be helped. Tari
Author's reply
No, Tari, it couldn't be helped... if Frodo was to survive. Never mind the Ring. Personally, I don't think Elladan gave much thought to the Ring, but more to the Ringbearer... supposedly safe in his father's care... Elladan will survive this... but will be changed... as will all Imladris!
Tari · 22 September 2008 · Chapter 1: I Will Take It ( A Thousand Words)
An Elf did this! Well, I know it wasn’t Legolas or Glorfindel. Once again I find myself drawn into a tale you are writing. This absolutely amazes me. You must be writing at least three full length stories now. How do you do it? Tari
Author's reply
Oh good grief, Tari - this is NOT going to be another long story if I can help it - though Sam is grumbling - he wants his own chapter... Merry and Pippin will probably be at my heels, begging. But I must remain firm and finish some other things first.... like Ten Thousand Years, and My Sword Trembles, and Days of Darkness and Despair, and What Enemy Is This................. Thank goodness, A Cat In King Elessar's Court is finished! *shakes head wearily*
Antane · 21 September 2008 · Chapter 2: Another Perspective (A Thousand Words)
I'm glad you have continued this! And that Frodo has been found!! Yea! Please write more soon! *hugs Sam for raising the alarm* Namarie, God bless, Antane :)
Author's reply
Oh dear - I really, really cannot start another story... though Sam HAS been grumbling that he'd prefer a chapter all to himself.... if the Muse will let me finish one of my other stories, perhaps we'll get a third chapter... Oh good grief, if I give Sam his own, then Merry and Pippin will want one too! Never ending mess! Bless you though, and thanks ever so much for reviewing!
Soledad · 21 September 2008 · Chapter 2: Another Perspective (A Thousand Words)
Well, that was chilling. Especially the conclusion - but again, have not all Kinslayings started with the best intentions?
Author's reply
I am sure those involved would say that, Soledad.... *chilling thought* Thanks for reviewing - most appreciated!
Kitt Otter · 21 September 2008 · Chapter 2: Another Perspective (A Thousand Words)
A scary what-if. I don't want to know who the Elf was, really... The way the ring corrupted his mind - gradually, then rapidly - felt so true-to-life. Again, scary. Possibly I shall not read that part of the book again without some bit of dread at the might have beens! This second chapter was a good addition; at least he did not get away with his deed. But poor Elladan! That was a sad ending… but perfect. -Kitt
Author's reply
Thanks, Kitt. Most appreciate your comments. I keep trying to 'see' who the Elf was... it is disturbing... but the Muse refuses to let me know - perhaps some day??? As for might have beens - they can be horrid.... or good (Boromir lives???) Again - thanks for reading and especially for commenting!
Jay of Lasgalen · 21 September 2008 · Chapter 2: Another Perspective (A Thousand Words)
Ai, poor Elladan! No matter how much he *had* to do what he did, he will always feel the guilt. And the nameless elf would have been long known to the sons of Elrond, and probably a friend as well. This is an excellent addition to the original story! (And a perfect entry for a certain challenge ...) Jay
Author's reply
Thanks, Jay - high praise coming from someone who 'knows' Elladan! I still don't know who the Elf was... but you are correct, he was definitely a friend, a trusted friend... this shook the entire world of Imladris... for they all must have been close in friendship and trust! Bless you for the kind words! (certain challenge?)
Larner · 20 September 2008 · Chapter 2: Another Perspective (A Thousand Words)
A kinslayer, perhaps; but freeing one who had just become enslaved to that which ought not to sully any Elf. Alas for Elladan.
Author's reply
Oh my Larner! I never thought of that - yes, the Elf was freed in death... I hope Mandos treats him with care... Drat! Perhaps that thought might help Elladan heal??? Bless you and thanks for the reply and the new thought!
6336 · 20 September 2008 · Chapter 2: Another Perspective (A Thousand Words)
Oh, Elladan, to liken yourself to one of Feanor's followers who killed their kin at Alqualonde, no child you are not one of them. What you did was done to prevent a greater evil. If you are a Kinslayer, then every Elf who ever killed an Orc is a Kinslayer!(since Morgoth twisted Elves into Orcs) Lynda
Author's reply
Yes, Lynda. It is possible that Elladan will be swayed from such a degrading thought... I believe Elladan's whole being was bent on saving Frodo - not so much the Ring... I think of this Elf as being wholeheartedly good... and to see such a little one, so young in the Elf's eyes, abscounded - Yikes! Bless you for your kind words... the Muse appreciates them as I am sure Elladan does!
cookiefleck · 20 September 2008 · Chapter 2: Another Perspective (A Thousand Words)
This was exciting and an interesting take on things. And, of course, leave it to dear Samwise to be on top of things as usual. ;o)
Author's reply
Of course Sam would notice right away - poor thing to have fallen asleep and then left to berate himself for leaving his Master open to such an abduction! You know he will never forget it and will watch Frodo even more carefully. I see no sleep in the future for our dear Gardener! Bless you and thanks for the kind words!
Virtuella · 2 August 2008 · Chapter 1: I Will Take It ( A Thousand Words)
A chilling tale of how the power of the ring corrupts the mind. Well done!
Author's reply
Thank you. I could just see the poor Elf... and my heart broke. One of many destroyed by the Ring...
Laikwâlassê · 30 July 2008 · Chapter 1: I Will Take It ( A Thousand Words)
Well, I´m rather new to this site, as a member not as a reader. I like this story very much, albeit it´s very awesome but why should elves not be tempted by the ring ? I´m very puzzled over the elf´s identity. I don´t believe it´s one of the younger ones but that would point at Erestor or Glorfindel. ....Yet, Lord Elrond had my loyalty and love...., Sounds as someone rather near to him. Oh, it´s so frustrating. It sounds rather like Thranduil, but he was not present at the council... anyway a great little story to think about. Lai
Author's reply
Welcome as a new member. I really love this site for people respond - and as a writer - I need that response. Thank you for yours! I'm sorry the story has created such angst within you - I really don't know who the Elf is - I only know he has served Elrond for many an age, but harbors a weakness like unto his Noldoran ancestors... If one considers Feanor weak. Nope - I know it's not Thranduil - I do not believe he was Noldoran.
Larner · 29 July 2008 · Chapter 1: I Will Take It ( A Thousand Words)
Aye, too easy indeed. Not Glorfindel, I think, as he was able to dwell in both realms at once. Another from among the Noldor, though. Hmmm. Lindor or Erestor, perhaps?
Author's reply
Lindor or Erestor... Good thoughts... but the answer is ever lost in silence... for the disgrace of it all for The Last Homely House... that such a thing was done whilst Frodo was under Elrond's protection. Yikes!
Jay of Lasgalen · 29 July 2008 · Chapter 1: I Will Take It ( A Thousand Words)
Oh, I like this! Very thought-provoking - and there must have been some who questioned the wisdom of sending a hobbit off to Mordor to destroy the Ring. Whose is the POV? I'm thinking Glorfindel, but it could be Erestor - not that either of them would ever be so treacherous! Jay
Author's reply
Thanks, Jay! Coming from an Elf lover makes the review even more appreciated. I really can't believe that Boromir was the only one with misgivings! I wrote an A/N at the end - after receiving your review... It thought a wee explanation was needed. Are you sure it's not the twins????????
Linda Hoyland · 28 July 2008 · Chapter 1: I Will Take It ( A Thousand Words)
This was truly chilling!
Author's reply
To me too! I really felt bad for the Elf... not so much for Frodo - I think he'll wake up with a headache but that's about it...
Antane · 28 July 2008 · Chapter 1: I Will Take It ( A Thousand Words)
I'm glad the stolen items, shall we say, didn't get far! Or I hope that arrow came from the good guys and Frodo will soon be rescued. Namarie, God bless, Antane :)
Author's reply
I'm very glad too - I got the idea - wrote the drabble - and then there was more and more... Once in awhile, the Muse tells me to leave the ending (and other details) up to the reader...