harrowcat · 8 June 2008 · Chapter 1: I give you a rainbow
This is really lovely Golden. I love your descriptions of colours.
Author's reply
Thanks for reading and the nice review harrowcat! :)
I give you a rainbow by Golden
Reviews (14)
aliensouldream · 8 June 2008 · Chapter 1: I give you a rainbow
That was so lovely and a very thoughtful tale. Pippin is very inventive and playful and full of kindness.
Author's reply
Yes, that he is! Thank you for reading Aliensouldream! :)
julchen11 · 8 June 2008 · Chapter 1: I give you a rainbow
What a wonderful and heartwarming story. The beauty of your words made me weep, my dear. Thank you for this wonderful treasure. Love and hugs, Julchen
Author's reply
*blush* Thank you for this very nice review Julchen! :)
Addie71 · 8 June 2008 · Chapter 1: I give you a rainbow
This was a delightful story. I love Pippin's thoughtfulness and ingenuity in helping Evergreen to understand about colors.
Author's reply
Thank you Addie! Glad you liked it! :)
Rhyselle · 8 June 2008 · Chapter 1: I give you a rainbow
*sniffle* Oh, this was so very very beautiful. I'm on my way to church, but I just had to tell you how very much I liked it! It's going on my favorites list for certain!
Author's reply
Thank you so much for this nice comment, Rhyselle. I am happy you liked the story that much! :)
cathleen · 7 June 2008 · Chapter 1: I give you a rainbow
Golden - This is wonderful! I love the way you have shown Pippin as such a tender-hearted lad. Very sweet, and very well conceived story! Cathleen
Author's reply
Thank you Cathleen! I am glad you liked it! :) Speak to you soon! :D
Andrea · 7 June 2008 · Chapter 2: Ich schenk dir einen Regenbogen (German)
Das war wunderschön, Golden! Pippin ist sehr kreativ, wenn es darum geht, Farben zu beschreiben. Und er brauchte nur eine kurze Bedenkpause, um sich in Evergreen hineinzuversetzen. Mancher Erwachsene hätte auf eine solche Frage keine Antwort gefunden! Und der "Regenbogen"-Blumenstrauß war eine großartige Idee :) P.S.: Schön, dass auch noch andere Leser die "German Version" mitverfolgen. Denn Deutsch ist eigentlich eine schöne Sprache, nur wahrscheinlich schwieriger zu erlernen als Englisch.
Author's reply
Danke Andrea :) Freut mich das dir Pippins "Farbbilder" gefallen haben und danke, dass du die deutsche Version immer mitverfolgst :) und das dieses mal sogar noch jemand Zweites sie liest ist natürlich auch ganz wondervoll. LG Golden
Kitt Otter · 7 June 2008 · Chapter 2: Ich schenk dir einen Regenbogen (German)
Ach, so gut! : ) And the sweetest story I've read in a while... the descriptions are brilliant, from the narration to those by Pippin. I could feel each of the colors; gladly so could Eve. I am impressed by anyone who can write well, especially in more than one language. Wundarbar Geschichte! -Kitt
Author's reply
Hallo Kitt Otter, vielen Dank für deine Review. Es freut mich sehr, dass dir die Geschichte gefallen hat. :) LG Golden
Agape4Gondor · 7 June 2008 · Chapter 1: I give you a rainbow
That was absolutely lovely. A clever little Hobbit is our Pippin...
Author's reply
*g* He is, isnt´t he? Thanks for reading Agape! :)
Garnet Took · 7 June 2008 · Chapter 1: I give you a rainbow
Oh, Golden, this was just wonderful. What Pippin did was very creative, and so believable. I remember trying to convey the idea of color to friends. We weren't quite as imagitive as Pippin was though. Oh this story just brings back really cool memories for me. Thanks so much for sharing it.
Author's reply
:) I am glad that the story brought back nice memories for you Garnet! Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing.
Maaya · 7 June 2008 · Chapter 1: I give you a rainbow
Sweet! I liked the various ways that Pippin described colours. It reminds me of a short story I read in a lesbian authors' anthology, about how a deaf woman has different sorts of music described to her. Either way, this was a very warm scene.
Author's reply
Thanks Maaya! :) I don´t know that short story, but it does sound very interessting.
shirebound · 7 June 2008 · Chapter 1: I give you a rainbow
How beautiful! I absolutely love howw Pippin describes colors to Evergreen, especially 'white' and 'rainbow'. What a loving, marvelous story.
Author's reply
Thank you so much Shirebound for this review! :)
Dreamflower · 7 June 2008 · Chapter 1: I give you a rainbow
Jana, dear, this is absolutely wonderful. Yes, that is our sweet, imaginative and generous Pippin!
Larner · 7 June 2008 · Chapter 1: I give you a rainbow
Very sweet and effective. Evergreen's eyes sound like those of my friend Jenny, who's also been blind from birth--her cornea is almost totally occluded.