To Risk It All by White Wolf
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Tithenaru
· 3 July 2008
· Chapter 2
Missed this the first time so am playing catch up.
I really enjoyed this story from the battle of wills between two long standing friends (...."It won't work".... " I know"....), to the saving of a life and the saving of an elf from the torment of sea longing.
Wonderful.
Tithenaru
Author's reply
Better lat than never. :o) L & A know each other so well, it's easy for them to predict the other. I'm glad you enjoyed all the elements of the plot.
It's great when a reader tells me a story of mine is wonderful. It's always nice to hear that I've given someone a good read.
mistry89
· 4 May 2008
· Chapter 2
Thank you for this - There must have been many in similar situations to C (whether or not it became personal), and you dealt beautifully with the sealonging-too-soon problem!
I trust the rest of this mission was successful? *g*
Thank you again, and Cheers.
Author's reply
You are most welcome. I'm very glad that you liked the way I dealt with the problem of the sea longing being awakened in Legolas too soon. It was a rare and special gift he received from Ulmo. Too bad he won't remember it. :o)
I like to think the mission went well. Cheers.
Idril Celebrindal
· 28 April 2008
· Chapter 2
Oh I am glad I came back to this story!
Thank you.
Idril
Author's reply
I'm glad you came back, too! :o) Thank you for reading.
Larner
· 26 April 2008
· Chapter 1
And what about his sojourn in Gondor earned him this, I wonder? I suppose we will learn that as the story unfolds....
Larner
· 26 April 2008
· Chapter 2
Ah, but it is quite a gift given Legolas here.
And the Man from Gondor has bitterness but little wisdom, I see. Too bad he had to find his end in this way; but Aragorn will be needed for a time yet, after all.
Author's reply
It's a rare gift. Too bad he won't remember it. :o)
Chandur didn't understand the responsibility of command and let his grief turn his heart to that enduring bitterness. We do need Aragorn for many years to come, so all ends well, in this case.
Linda Hoyland
· 25 April 2008
· Chapter 2
A lovely ending to an enjoyable story. I always want to visit the sea when I hear the gulls!I'm glad the Valar took pity on Legolas.
Author's reply
I'm happy that you liked the ending and enjoyed the story. I've spent many a day at the beach in Florida, and the gulls remind me of those times.
So am I. Legolas needed their blessing and Ulmo's help.
mistry89
· 25 April 2008
· Chapter 1
Of all the names he could have "dredged up", he chose the one that someone knew (and hated). Oh dear, this mission seemed fraught with problems before he was decked.
Thank you, looking forward to more.
Cheers :)
Author's reply
I think it was more a case of Aragorn himself being recognized, however, Chandur would have easily recognized that name, even if Aragorn hadn't been.
Oh yes, the mission had problems from the outset. Cheers. :o)
Linda Hoyland
· 21 April 2008
· Chapter 1
What a great cliffhanger! Very exciting,poor Aragorn!
Author's reply
I'm very glad you liked it. Poor Aragorn, indeed, in trouble again. :o)
demeter d
· 19 April 2008
· Chapter 1
Oh, my! The tense begginning of yet another of your "Roller Coaster Tales"! I shall be watching my in-box. I suppose Thorongil probably did make a few enemies along the way.
Author's reply
I'm happy you like the tenseness of the beginning and that you'll be waiting for more. I think anyone in command of others during war inevitably make enemies.
avidreader80
· 18 April 2008
· Chapter 1
nice beginning. impatiently waiting for the next chapter!
Author's reply
Glad you like it so far and that you're wanting more.
Anonymous
· 18 April 2008
· Chapter 1
Eagerly waiting more..
Author's reply
I'm happy you're eager for more. :o)