Moth to a Flame by Primsong
Cuthalion · 3 April 2008 · Chapter 1: Moth to Flame
Brilliant idea! *applauds* Very, very good. Cúthalion P.S.: Would you mind if I translate this into German? You can have a look at my site with translated Tolkien-fanfiction here: http://www.cuthalionsbogen.de/stories.html
Edlyn · 2 April 2008 · Chapter 1: Moth to Flame
What an utterly scary possibility! Wonderful description.
Antane · 1 April 2008 · Chapter 1: Moth to Flame
Well, wasn't that an interesting twist! Namarie, God bless, Antane :)
Dreamflower · 1 April 2008 · Chapter 1: Moth to Flame
*shudder* What a scary prospect! But it leads one to wonder--what if a bird or something decides to eat the "Ring-moth" before it reaches its goal? Would the bird then be enthralled to it? You really have the potential for a lot more here!
Larner · 31 March 2008 · Chapter 1: Moth to Flame
Aii! Truly a moth to a flame here! And now we knows, we does! A horrible possibility, of course, and using that unforeseen icon from the movies! Wonderful, Primsong--truly wonderful!
Agape4Gondor · 31 March 2008 · Chapter 1: Moth to Flame
its proboscis uncurling to taste the sweetness of it. only the Ring remained, yet now it had wings. completely in its thrall, beating its wings in whispering blur it rose up, up OOOh - and this line was chilling.... it shimmered only once as that white face slid across its curving beauty. Poor Frodo!!! Very very nice - You do wonder why the Ring waited all this time, when It could have talked a slug in the caves of the Misty Mountains to take it long long ago! LOL