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Jansy · 16 November 2008 · Chapter 31: Fana Nírion

It took me a long time but I think i caught up now with all your stories. I love LOVE LOVE your Glorfindel and all the other characters. =D

Kitty · 12 November 2008 · Chapter 30: By the Shore of an Endless Sea Once More

So Manwë has built the Chapel of Stars? I'm as surprised as Ingwion is! But that part made me wonder again if the reason Glorfindel needs to meet Ingwion has something to do with the fact that both lately had encounters with Eru, even before Námo said something similar. I'm really curious to learn more about that. Anyway, glad Ingwion gets along so well with Tiutalion now. And I seem to remember it has not been so long ago that he thought Nienna's place a gaol himself ... He has really changed since he first arrived at Nienna's. Nienna’s expression could only be called gleeful, which, to Ingwion’s mind, did not bode well for anyone. I'm with Ingwion here. Only I'm not sure if to ask "What have Aldundil and Vorondil done?" or "What has Nienna done?" *grin* Even more considering the reaction to Nienna's announcement to have a surprise for them. Aldundil's reluctance to go camping is understandable; it has to bring back difficult memories. Though maybe it would help him to face these, who knows. Particularly knowing that his brother already left Mandos. Anyway, there can be no doubt that Vorondil is more than happy with the camping trip. Hm, what's the Fana Nírion? Seems Nienna has her own plans ... though I really wonder why she (and the other Valar) is so against Glorfindel and Ingwion meeting. Glorfindel can't be *that* bad, so what's the reason behind it?

Larner · 11 November 2008 · Chapter 30: By the Shore of an Endless Sea Once More

Ah--camping. Back to nature; bee stings and fishing; hiking and finding what needs to be found by these, and then an interruption by Glorfindel! Now, to find out why Glorfindel and Ingwion need to talk at this point in time while not interrupting this phase of the recovery of these two. Aldunil's brother....

Agape4Gondor · 10 November 2008 · Chapter 30: By the Shore of an Endless Sea Once More

Delightful chapter - Again!!! I just gigled a lot during the reading. You write your characters so well - I could sense Ingwion's hesitancy. And Nienna's compassion was so very nice to see. Not that I'm sure she can be as 'strict' as her brother... And the idea of camping - good grief - being in 'the wild' can bring about many things... I've got my fingers crossed that the hidden Maiar who will accompany them are well-versed in watching over these children of Eru! I liked the idea of the Chapel of Stars... I liked it when Ingwion was there and when Tiutalion spoke more of its 'creation. And I'd forgotten, again, how very much I enjoy Vorondil! His exuberance and lack of 'tact' just light up the chapter. Great job - can't wait to read more!

Independence1776 · 10 November 2008 · Chapter 30: By the Shore of an Endless Sea Once More

Love Nienna's response to Ingwion just standing there. Well, that beach sounds gorgous to me right now. (I like storms.) That Chapel is getting more and more intriguing. “'I have a surprise for you all,' she said. Vorondil looked wary while his atar simply looked resigned." Oh, I wonder what else has been going on there... Yes, that is a very understandable reason to not want to go camping. *shudders* Letting Vorondil loose on a trail... This is going to be interesting. Fana Nírion? Whatever it is, there's definitely something going on. And I'm not sure whether to shake my head or laugh at Nienna's not wanting Glorfindel near her dwelling. ~ Indy

Sunny · 10 November 2008 · Chapter 30: By the Shore of an Endless Sea Once More

Hm. Vorondil looking wary and Aldundil looking resigned at Nienna’s announcement that she has a surprise for them – does that mean that they have had experience with her surprises already? I can understand Aldundil being less than happy at going camping, since the last time he went camping (so to speak) it was during a war, with all the attendant trauma and general nastiness. “Feels like forever”. It is obvious that Vorondil, being an elfling, doesn’t experience time like adult elves. (Just like human kids, in fact) ;-) And last: Nienna saying that she “doesn’t want that impossible child” – meaning Glorfindel – “anywhere near my demesne”. And she wants Vorondil and Aldundil to get into trouble? It would be sooo much easier if she called in the expert! But then, perhaps she wants to get the two of them (or three, counting Ingwion) to get into trouble the way _she_ has planned. With Glorfindel around, I get the impression that events take off on a tesseract, instead of nicely following the road. :-)

Tari · 10 November 2008 · Chapter 30: By the Shore of an Endless Sea Once More

It's sad that circumstances are keeping Aldundil from enjoying this trip with his son. This should be a time of bonding for them. I can't help wondering what Nienna is up to. Tari

6336 · 10 November 2008 · Chapter 30: By the Shore of an Endless Sea Once More

Just what is Nienna up to? Namo seems to know but is not saying! Sneaky Vala! I am sure it is going to rain, with the storm out to see like that, it is bound to, no fun camping without rain! Just how many dimensions does Ilmarin contain? We have the Chapel of Stars and Eonwe's Book Room, what else? Why does every one keep picking on Glorfindel, he can't help it if he attracts trouble like a two year old attracts dirt?! Poor Ellon! Well he and Ingwion have to meet sometime, perhaps a large, open field with lots of Maia in attendance, plus all the Valar! More please, Lynda

GoldenFlower · 10 November 2008 · Chapter 30: By the Shore of an Endless Sea Once More

Wow. Nienna reminds me of my grandmother in this chapter, oddly enough. -blink- Wonderful chapter though, as usual. Update soon! ~GF

eiluj · 10 November 2008 · Chapter 30: By the Shore of an Endless Sea Once More

'Nienna’s expression could only be called gleeful, which, to Ingwion’s mind, did not bode well for anyone' -- Nienna in this chapter has something about her of the quintessential Big Sister (though, mind you, not all older sisters are that type -- I certainly wasn't). Just to let you know: we are all going to die of frustration until we find out who the first elf was.... '“I have a surprise for you all,” she said. Vorondil looked wary while his atar simply looked resigned' -- I'm glad Nienna is enjoying herself. Somehow I'm sure the weather forecast includes rain. Looking forward to seeing what type of havoc eventuates when Glorfindel makes his appearance. “Is that all you have to say is ‘ah’?” -- There should only be one "is" in that sentence; the second can be replaced by a colon. Or you could keep the final "is" and replace the initial "Is that" with "So."

eiluj · 8 November 2008 · Chapter 29: Afterwards

“I don’t really regret it... giving up the crown, I mean, but I ... sometimes I miss it" -- Oh golly, tell me about it! I never expected retirement would be so totally discombobulating ... mostly a case of things I *never* expected to miss at all, let alone miss so much ... and a really surprising number of them related to supervisory matters. “Why did you get a copy?” Ingwë asked, sounding almost angry. / “Why didn’t I get a copy?” Glorfindel demanded. No one paid any attention to him -- Silly elves! "Inviting these particular people to the Judgment sent a double message: We know who you are and if we will not spare even one of our own, do not think yourself immune" -- As you said, Manwë is devious indeed! "First I will stop at Lórien and make sure Celepharn has done the flet correctly" -- *snicker* And I hope we get to see it. Glorfindel was such a delight in this chapter. Well, *everyone's* characterization, really, was delightful, but particularly Glorfindel. And Námo (who more than most of the Valar seems to have developed the knowledge of when to keep silent into a fine art). And Finrod. And Ingwë. And Arafinwë.... The big question: will Nienna let Glorfindel come? I hope so -- I'd like to see it! -- but there's no denying that I'm expecting her to have to put her foot down on at least a few occasions (not that she's not perfectly capable of that). And the poor Maiar will be telling tales of this time for ... well, whatever is an appropriately enormous number of yéni.

SurgicalSteel · 4 November 2008 · Chapter 29: Afterwards

An enigma wrapped in a mystery, eh? Nice obscure political reference, that. ;)

Larner · 2 November 2008 · Chapter 29: Afterwards

An interesting transition chapter. I like the quiet discussion with Namo and the realization of who had been invited as observers. Definitely an object lesson. Sorry to be so far out of step with your writing, but things are progressing with my current client, which is not always the best thing to hear when one is dealing with Alzheimer's. Hope your own studies and teaching are going well.

Kitty · 2 November 2008 · Chapter 29: Afterwards

Ah, now I am beginning to understand. Manwë *is* devious – to invite these particular elves was an interesting move. And even Ingoldo and the others? THAT was a surprise! You are an enigma wrapped up in a mystery. *grin* Well, that’s saying something, coming from Námo! But our dear balrog-slayer is certainly not the easiest being in Arda to deal with. Hm, so it might not have been Lórien but Ingwion Glorfindel was drawn to? Interesting! I’m really curious what is coming next!

Tari · 31 October 2008 · Chapter 29: Afterwards

Sometimes showing someone what could happened if they do not mend their ways can alter their course in a positive way.. The way the Valar handled the situation is what I would expect of them. As for Glorfindel; I'll just have to wait to see what happens next. I think he's handling himself quite well considering all he's been through. Tari

Independence1776 · 30 October 2008 · Chapter 29: Afterwards

I don't blame Finrod in the slightest for doodling his titles. I would have probably done the same thing. The Valar are devious indeed. I hadn't even considered them "inviting" malcontents. “'Maybe we can run away.' Finrod stared at Glorfindel in disbelief. 'Run away where?' he cried. 'Hmm.... bad idea?' Glorfindel asked. 'To say the least.'” The above made me literally laugh aloud. Of course Namó would come in at precisely the wrong time. I wouldn't want to see the punishment the Valar would come up with if Glorfindel had pushed the issue. And someday, Glorfindel will discover why they aren't leaving him alone. Ooh... this new development ought to be interesting. :) ~ Indy

Agape4Gondor · 30 October 2008 · Chapter 29: Afterwards

A very interesting chapter - espeically since Finrod Felagund is one of my most favoritest characters - except for Boromir :) There is something about his friendship with Men that has always endeared him to me. And the fact that he gave up his throne to help Beren... I do so love the Elf... Thanks for a little glimpse into what he lost... hopefully, at some point in time, he will be happy! It will be interesting to 'see' what on earth is happening between Glorfindel and Ingwion. Great chapter - as always!

GoldenFlower · 30 October 2008 · Chapter 29: Afterwards

Wonderful chapter, very funny, loved Glorfindel being all like, " But what about meee? Aren't you listening?" in some parts xD. LOved it as always, update soooooon! ~THOTGF

6336 · 30 October 2008 · Chapter 29: Afterwards

Oops! I meant Vorondil, not Viondil, forgot to check my charector list, darn! Lynda

6336 · 30 October 2008 · Chapter 29: Afterwards

Hm, I wonder if Finrod and Glorfindel could not see Ingoldo and company because they were watching the trial on closed circuit Osanwe? Some how I don't think Nienna will want Glorfindel to come to her, I think she would rather send Ingwion to him, she has enough on her hands with Adundil and Viondil and Ingwion she does not need Glorfindel added to the mix! Unless of course Manwe loaned her a contingent of warrior Mair! Talking of Viondil, how is Uncle Viondil coming along, I know it will be some years before he is released from Lorien, but an update on him would be nice? More please, Lynda

harrowcat · 30 October 2008 · Chapter 29: Afterwards

Glad to visit that fountain again - it sounds lovely. And Finrod occasionally misses his crown does he? *grin*

ellie · 30 October 2008 · Chapter 29: Afterwards

I love the intrigue and FInrod missing being king. The other kings are most understanding though. Glorfy does get away with saying quite a bit in the presence of the three kings, I must admit. It is amusing. I am curious as to what will come next.

Kaylee · 30 October 2008 · Chapter 29: Afterwards

Hmm...so this was a lesson for all the elves who attended besides the "lots of kings" and queens, was it? Hmmm...interesting, meldonya! And Ingoldo was there?! Good thing he wasn't seen or he would've been squished by Finda and Glorfi, lol. Ah, so Finda was just doodling to see what his name looked like. I figured it was something like that when I found out he'd only used his titles that wouldn't be recognized. And back to that fountain they found! I loved how Namo just showed up and surprised them, lol. He likes to do that, doesn't he? Anyway, so for Glorfi it's to Nienna's to see Ingwion...as soon as he checks on the flet, of course. Can't wait!! Namarie meldonya, Kaylee!

harrowcat · 27 October 2008 · Chapter 28: Judgment

I enjoyed the trial scene a lot, especially the fact that they just had Glorfindel there to keep an eye on him. I think, however, that he was good for Finrod.

Kitty · 26 October 2008 · Chapter 28: Judgment

Sorry for the late review, RL has gone crazy again. "He doesn’t have very good handwriting, you know. Sometimes it’s hard to figure out what I’m supposed to be writing." *rofl* Good that Lindorillë doesn’t know that she said that in front of so many people! Well, as it was inevitable to have her as a witness, I think the Valar handled it well, taking care that she is going to not really remember anything about this. Can’t help but thinking Lisselindë’s reasoning a bit weak. That a letter is signed doesn’t necessarily mean it’s being sent – I’ve ripped enough signed letters over time. Though I love the bit about the signature and it’s invalidity. Anyway, Lisselindë would benefit from spending a bit more time with Elves in general and Reborn in particular; she seems not to know much about them. Olórin, on the other hand, really was more intelligent in that. Well, I am not too surprised that he understood that – I could not believe that he would make such a mistake, too. All in all, I think the punishments for both Maiar are okay. Olórin and Námo will work well together, and ... uh, will Lisselindë have to deal with Vorondil and Aldundil and Ingwion? Well, *that* could be a punishment ... *lol* "My brother and I merely wished to keep you in our sights. You are much too dangerous to be left on your own." *snicker* And here I thought Glorfindel and Finrod have already proven that they can get into a lot of trouble even surrounded by all of the Valar, as we have seen at the Tournament! Somehow I’ve got the feeling the Valar aren’t infallible as elf-sitter, either ;-) And I absolutely love Glorfindel’s answer and Irmo’s reply to that!