Kitty
· 10 May 2009
· Chapter 57: Objections Noted
Very interesting chapter, as it illuminated the way the Tol Eressëans are thinking. Well, one can't fault them for feeling like prisoners on the island; it's about time the Valar allow the first ones to move to the mainland. That would help quite a bit, I think. At least with them - not so sure about certain Amanians. Glorfindel is right, it makes sort of sense that the Noldor, particularly these who turned back with Arafinwë, would object the loudest. Though I wonder about the Teleri, too, after what happened in Alqualondë.
For Turgon to split his people into groups and to establish captains to look after them seems a good idea - so there's always someone to feel responsible for a manageable number of people. Hm ... something along that line might really work for Tol Eressëa, too. If the leaders of these groups would work together with the kings ... It would probably be easier than one leader alone - there will always be some who object, no matter who is chosen, so a group of leaders might actually work better. Maybe they could chose their leader from among them? I'm not convinced it would go down well if the kings just decide to make someone the leader for all Elves on the island. You've given me a lot of food for thought here.
Glorfindel's idea to use the Reborn as an escort is great. I am sure there are many who would do it if asked by Finrod, Glorfindel or Beleg; their names and fame would be enough for many to support that progress. And I think the Reborn have some interest in solving that problem in the long run, too.
Glad Arafinwë had the sense to listen to the younger Elves and to postphone the departure long enough to make some more security arrangements. It might pay off in the end, and what are a few days of delay?
The end left me giggling. Ah yes, what other way to contact Irmo than that? I'm sure there are still some unclad Maiar in the vicinity, keeping an eye on Glorfindel, just in case ... *grin*
Great chapter, Fiondil!
Author's reply
There are so many conflicting agendas with the various groups of Elves that it's hard to tell who is thinking what. Hopefully, things will work themselves out. I think the Teleri are able to put the past behind them better than the Noldor. Even though they did not participate in the 'rescue mission' that became the War of Wrath, they did agree to ferry the Host of the West on their ships. I think Olwe had much to do with this and encouraging his people to let go of the past. The fact that many (if not all) of the Teleri who died in the Kinslaying have been reborn maybe helps.
Whether Turgon's solution will actually work on Tol Eressea is debatable but certainly it is an option that I think the kings will explore.
How many Reborn Irmo will send remains to be seen. Certainly, they will have a vested interest in seeing the situation on Tol Eressea resolved. I think the Reborn as a group have an important role to play in all this, though even they are unaware of the power they have simply by having died and are now reborn.
So, we'll see over the next few chapters how this all works out. Thanks for the review, Kitty. I appreciate it.
Thalanee
· 7 May 2009
· Chapter 56: Return to Tirion
Sorry that this review hast taken so long: university has taken up nearly all my time the last week.
What they said about Arafinwe and the other kings was right: they would have every right to be cynic or bitter about what happened, but they chose not to. Being cynic about something is easier than trying not to lose faith, but if you chose the hard way and fight it, you will be stronger for it... and happier. That is something we easily forget, so thanks for reminding me and others :-)
Our Glorfindel is growing up *sigh* I hope that doesn´t mean that he will stay out of mischief? *grin* but I think we can all rest assured that he will not. After all he enjoys it as much as we do: so I´m already looking forward to whatever scheme our favourite elf will cook up.
Greetings, Thalanee
Author's reply
Hi Thalanee. That's okay. University stuff takes precedence over everything else. Been there, done that, myself. *grin*
Anyway, you're right that refusing to become cynical and not lose faith does make you stronger and happier. I'm glad I was able to provide this reminder to you and others.
Yes, our Glorfindel is beginning to grow up, but I doubt he will ever abandon his inner child. There will always be a streak of mischief in his soul that delights in causing innocent trouble. I suspect that in later years in Imladris, he kept Elrond from getting too serious about himself with his mischief-making. He probably considered it his bounden duty to do so. *grin*
Hope the university stuff goes well for you. Thanks for taking the time to leave a review. I appreciate it.
Kitty
· 4 May 2009
· Chapter 56: Return to Tirion
You know, it's good that Glorfindel has matured quite a bit during these weeks with the Maiar, but I find it more entertaining when he's not going to be always all adult and responsible and sometimes the child is coming out a bit to play. Life is just more fun that way - not only for Glorfindel.
Interesting conversation about Arafinwë. It's true that he - and the other two kings - aren't as bitter as they could be, and that's amazing, considering all that has happened. But I do understand why Glorfindel is uncomfortable with the whole Tol Eressëa thing; he knows that not all are as friendly as Gilvagor or Laurendil, and he's too much a warrior to not see the risks. Well, I trust that between him and his gwedyr they will make sure that the kings are well protected and every possible safety measure taken. (Not that it would prevent them from having a few adventures!)
Oh, I think Glorfindel will need his refresher now and then. Was just yesterday thinking that on the one hand they want Glorfindel not to depend on the Maiar, but on the other hand, Finrod was the only one able to keep up with Glorfindel's fighting skills, and even he will now not be able to do that. And as probably no one will allow these two to spar again, Glorfindel will need his Maiar swordbrothers anyway to keep his form. And to be honest, I'll miss Glorfindel's teachers; I really like these Maiar.
It's good that Glorfindel can think of the good times in Gondolin, too, even if it is sad to remember how it ended. And I loved that explanation of 'stupid' *grin*
Even if it did not work properly, thanks to his training with the Maiar, it was still touching that his friends wanted to give him a surprise welcome. And it is good that he is thinking of them as his family.
Very nice, peaceful chapter - probably the calm before the storm ;)
Author's reply
I doubt that Glorfindel will ever fully grow up. He will always nurture his inner child no matter where he is. Hopefully the measures Glorfindel and the others take to ensure Arafinwë and Olwë's safety will be enough, but of course, there is no guarantee. At least Glorfindel's new skills should come in handy especially when no one knows what they are exactly. *grin* I'm sure that Glorfindel will continue seeking out his Maiar friends for refresher courses while he's still in Aman. I doubt any of them will be able to stay away for too long, either. I rather like them myself. *grin*
After the revelations about his own parents, it's nice that Glorfindel does have 'family' to rely on. And unlike before, he has lOTS of brothers to play with. *lol*
I'm glad you liked the chapter, Kitty. Thanks for letting me know. Yes, the calm before the storm, but you knew that, didn't you? *sly grin*
Tari
· 4 May 2009
· Chapter 56: Return to Tirion
Who wants to mature completely? It’s much more fun to have the child inside surface every now and then. The Maia have now evolved from his enemies to his friends. Friends he will definitely miss. (I’m sure they’ll miss him too.)
I love this Glorfindel. Unfortunately for his family, a surprise welcome was impossible given his training. Nevertheless, it was a most joyous occasion.
Author's reply
Hi, Tari. We all need to celebrate the inner child in all of us. I don't think Glorfindel will ever fully 'grow up'; there will always be that little streak of mischief in him, part of the legacy of being a Reborn, I think. And the Maiar have now evolved into his friends and mentors rather than his enemies, as you say. That will stand him in good stead in the future, I have no doubt.
Hildigrim
· 4 May 2009
· Chapter 56: Return to Tirion
Lest you feel that your sign-posting had gone unnoticed by your loyal readers (and reach for a bigger two-by-four to cure the problem), I want to acknowledge the two pointed references to Alassiel's presence .... I felt you rolled a cannon on stage back in Chapter 102 of Book One, but more or less refrained from setting it off to this point.
Author's reply
I had to go back to chapter 102 as I'd forgotten what that chapter was about. *lol* We'll see just what the 'sign-posting' leads to. There is a reason for Alassiel to be in Tirion at this time, and not necessarily as a handmaid to Amarië either. Glad you are still reading this story, Hildigrim. Thanks. I appreciate it.
Agape4Gondor
· 3 May 2009
· Chapter 56: Return to Tirion
Ah ha! I finally realized why I have felt such peace reading these last few chapters.... It's because, even though Glorfindel's had some 'adventures' and a few scrapes - he was with the Valar / Maiar and so - I guess I figured he was safe......................
NOW - he's back and my stomach is already churning at the thought of what on earth - er Arda - is going to happen to him next.
Thanks for the time of respite - my stomach appreciated it! : )
Author's reply
You're most welcome, Agape. I hope you have some alka-seltzer handy now that Glorfindel is back in Tirion, if your stomach is already churning and nothing's happened yet. *lol* At any rate, I'm glad you've been enjoyging the respite and the chapters. I hope you continue enjoying the ones to follow in spite of your stomach. And just remember, even though the Maiar/Valar aren't visible to anyone doesn't mean they are around keeping an eye on things... and GLorfindel.
njomo
· 3 May 2009
· Chapter 56: Return to Tirion
It is just so good to see Glorfindel relaxed and enjoying just being with his family. Would that it could last longer for his sake, as I expect life will get "interesting" again soon with the Royal Progress looming on the horizon!
I found Glorfindel's conversation with Eönwë regarding Arafinwë very enlightening. The Darkening would have been a pivotal time in the history of Aman. Any society finding itself in the middle of such an upheaval--the actions of Fëanor and his judgment, the theft of the Silmarils, the killing of Finwë, along with the departure of a significant portion of the population--would create a challange for any society. For Arafinwë to return with his "remnant" and to plunge in to learning to be king while dealing with all the inherent problems faced at that time would not be easy.
It is good that Glorfindel has gained the maturity and equilibrium to begin to understand some of what has made Arafinwë as he is in the present. That should stand Glorfindel in good stead as he helps plan for the royal progress.
I thought it telling that the one Maiar Glorfindel is especially sorry to leave behind is Nyéreser, but maybe I'm reading more into that than I should. I'm still trying to figure just what Nyéreser's usually doing: he rarely interacts with the Children and he states, "My... interests lie in a different direction..." I'm still curious after all these chapters, and hope we'll meet up with Nyéreser again.
So now (on the light side) I have only a few things to ponder this week: what was the "thing or two" that Glorfindel was able to teach the Maia, and what are Glorfindel's favorite dishes, anyway!?
Author's reply
Hi Joanne. Nyéreser is as much a mystery to me as he is to you (and presumably the other readers). He literally just showed up where I least expected anyone to do so and he wouldn't even tell me his name at first! *sigh* I think there is a connection between him and Glorfindel, or at least Glorfindel feels one, but what it means I'm not sure yet. I think Nyéreser is too good a character (from a writer's pov) to discard. I'm sure he'll be showing up sooner or later when least expected. Perhaps his 'interests' have now changed. *grin*
As for Arafinwë and the Darkening... definitely the Amanians experienced grave upheavals in their societies and I hope to explore that issue in another story that begins with Fëanor's trial and banishment and continued on through the Darkening until the first rising of Ithil. It will be some time though before that story is ready for posting but hopefully sometime later this year, so keep your eyes open for it.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate it.
Hel
· 3 May 2009
· Chapter 56: Return to Tirion
As happy as I am that Glorfindel feels he has a home and a family in Valinor, it will make his leaving for Middle-Earth much, much harder. For him as well as for the others. I wonder how he and his family will react when they come to know about the intention of the Valar.
But is good to see that he matures and that he has started to practice what he has learned during his time with Olorin.
I wonder what the elves in the country would think about the whole affair with the Reborn and the Returnees from Middle-Earth and if they even heard about the problems in the cities and on Tol Eressëa. The opinion of the "elf in the street" so to say.
I like the idea that Arafinwë has choosen to stay unprejudiced in his dealings with others even if some think of him as naive or weak.
Author's reply
Hi, Hel. Yes, I think you may be right that when the time comes for Glorfindel to leave for Middle-earth, there will be tears aplenty on both sides. Still, by the time he's told about it, he will have matured to the point where we see him in LOTR (or nearly so).
I'm not sure if the country elves would be too impressed by all the bally-hoo in Tirion or elsewhere. That's why Glorfindel gave his name in Quenya, because trying to explain "Sindarin" to them would be useless. I'm sure that even the doings of the Valar are mere rumors to them, never mind what is happening among their own people.
Arafinwë, as Eönwë tells Glorfindel, suffered gravely during the Darkening, as did Ingwë and Olwë. All three kings came away from the experience scarred but in the end they made a conscious decision not to let that destroy them. Harsh lessons for all of them, but they are better kings for that, I think.
Sitara
· 3 May 2009
· Chapter 56: Return to Tirion
It seems to be a "transitional" chapter, if I can say so, signalling the ending of the first stage of Glorfindel's training and the beginning of a new one. Perhaps this time the others would be also involved in this matter, especially Finarfin, Finrod and Ingwion. But it remains to be seen.
I do hope that Glorfindel was able to appreciate the beauty of the lanscape and the harvest in particular, despite the painful memories awakened by this sight. If he did, he has all my respect. "bitter smile" The depiction of the view was much appreciated, especially the one regarding the sunset's light bathing Tirion's walls.
As for the choices of Valinor's Eldarani during the Darkening...I have yet to be convinced. But, in my opinion, the issue will be approached in the near future, either in this story or in your next one. Finarfin's trip to Tol Eressea may have something to do with this, if I'm to start assuming things. But, as I've said before, it remains to be seen.
Looking forward to read more, I wish you a pleasant afternoon,
Sitara
Author's reply
Yes, this is a transitional chapter as we move from one phase of the story to the next which will revolve around the Royal Progress through Tol Eressëa. I'm glad you appreciated my descriptions of the views. I like to give readers a sense of place without bogging the story down too much with descriptions that end up sounding like a travelogue.
It's dangerous to assume anything where Elves are concerned and where this writer is concerned. *grin* I think you've read enough of my stories to know that I don't always follow a straigt course and like to give unexpected twists to the plot and the characters. Just a friendly warning. *grin*
Thanks for your comments, Sitara. They are thoughtful as always and I wish you a pleasant day as well.
Larner
· 3 May 2009
· Chapter 56: Return to Tirion
A nice return of the prodigal! No, it would be difficult now to fully surprise Glorfindel, or so I would expect as well.
Author's reply
Yes, the others are unaware of Glorfindel's special training, so they're rather disappointed that their surprise didn't work.
Sunny
· 3 May 2009
· Chapter 56: Return to Tirion
What, no bragging about all the fun he has had? But then, certain kinds of fun are best recalled over a few glasses of wine – or perhaps some of the ale he arranged to have delivered – and only with an audience that appreciates that sort of thing. So I suppose Glorfindel will wait until he has his gwedyr alone before telling about his encounters with the monsters – both the cat-things and the bear-things. Even Elven males would feel the effect of testosterone in their bodies, I think. :-D
Has Lisselindë learned her lesson now? If she hasn’t, yet, I suppose this little adventure has helped a lot. _Now_ she actually seems quite likable. And if she isn’t _quite_ rehabilitated yet, I think being a part of tutoring Glorfindel’s otornor will do the trick, since I am sure they will want a bit of the same fun _he_ had. Well, and the chance of developing their warrior skills. Though if the Maiar aren’t quite ready to take on new pupils as yet, the Valar will ensure that Lisselindë is gainfully employed.
I liked the farmer’s definition of “stupid”. :-)
Author's reply
Well, I'm sure that Glorfindel will brag a little to his gwedyr in private, but at the dinner, especially with the ladies present, I'm sure he decided descretion was the better part of being in polite company. *grin*
I think Lisselindë has learned what she needed to know from Glorfindel and that her rehabilitation is coming along quite nicely. I doubt we'll see her all that much now and I have a feeling that she'll be sent back to Lórien in good standing fairly soon.
I'm glad you liked the farmer's definition of 'stupid'. I thought it rather clever myself. *grin*
Thanks for your review, Sunny. I appreciate it.
Kitty
· 1 May 2009
· Chapter 55: Mornaringwë
Hm, so that was the lesson Olórin was teaching? I can see why he said it was better showed than explained. At first look it might not seem like a real lesson, but I think it showed that Glorfindel did learn something about himself, particularly that he's harder on himself than on others. And it proved that he has relaxed quite a bit since he came to Nienna's first and has learned a bit of patience, too. For that alone, this trip was worth the time.
Loved the little goat kid, that was cute! And the place itself sounds lovely, too.
Author's reply
Some lessons can only be shown rather than described and this is one of them. As Olórin points out, even if Glorfindel never achieved the actual lesson intended, the fact that he has found some internal peace and is feeling more whole from his stay there is a positive thing and so his time hasn't been completely wasted by coming to Mornaringwë. Self-reflection is something we all should do on occasion, though few of us bother as it can be somewhat uncomfortable and, of course, in our busy lives it's hard to find the time and space to "go to ourselves". It's a worthwhile journey to take and I wouldn't mind spending a few days in Mornaringwë myself, though the goat kid had better stay away from my hair, as well. *lol* Thanks for the review, Kitty. I appreciate it very much.
Larner
· 27 April 2009
· Chapter 55: Mornaringwë
Certainly learning to see oneself objectively is a valuable lesson at any time.
And nothing like having just a descriptive name for the place! Heh!
Author's reply
Yes, indeed, on both counts, Larner. *grin*
Tari
· 27 April 2009
· Chapter 55: Mornaringwë
This was a most unusual lesson for Glorfindel, certainly not like anything he experienced in the past. Still, I think it had the most impact on him. Being to hard on one’s shelf is something we are all guilty of. It made him seam almost human. Of course, the bowl reminded me of Galadriel’s, as I am sure you intended. I think our dear Elf just took a giant step forward.
Author's reply
Very unusual, to be sure, but most effective, I think. I believe Glorfindel has taken a giant step forward as well. We'll see in subsequent chapters just how well he integrates his lesson. Thanks for your review, Tari. I appreciate it.
Thalanee
· 27 April 2009
· Chapter 55: Mornaringwë
I didn´t realize that I haven´t reviewed for such a long time...
So that was the lesson (I hadn´t even com close in my guesses as to what it would be about)
The Mornaringwe as you described it would be one of the most beautiful places on earth. I´ve never been to the mountains (the closest of the bigger mountain ranges would be the Alps), but I imagine it must be very peaceful up there...
I wonder what´s happening with Finrod, Sador, Ingwion and Arafinwe in the meantime though *hint, hint* ;-)
Greetings, Thalanee
Author's reply
Hi, Thalanee. I'm grateful that you decided to review this chapter. Thank you. I doubt too many readers came close to guessing the truth of what kind of lesson Glorfindel would have with Olórin. Even I didn't really know what the lesson was going to be about at first, not until Olórin gave him the bowl and told him to fill it. *grin* Actually, I've been expecting to hear people say something along the lines of 'Shades of Galadriel's Mirror!'. *lol*
We will be seeing, beginning with the next chapter, what is going on with the others. The Royal Progress to Tol Eressëa is almost upon us and many of the other characters will be involved with that. It's time for Glorfindel's lessons to end and for him to take up his duties at Arafinwê's court.
Agape4Gondor
· 26 April 2009
· Chapter 55: Mornaringwë
A very good lesson to learn..... I like watching him grow.
Author's reply
Thanks, Agape. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Watching Glorfindel grow is a real treat since we know where he's headed.
njomo
· 26 April 2009
· Chapter 55: Mornaringwë
Interesting that you place Glorfindel and Olórin in a setting that is very
special to me. Mornaringwë as you describe it is similar to some favorite places of mine in the mountains near where I live. Mountain goats reside in the mountains here also but I've never met any as inquisitive and friendly as Glofindel's young goat friend!
I'm glad that Glorfindel was gifted with this interlude, especially with a companion such as Olórin. A gift of time as well as place, to come back to himself as it were. I have had similar experiences over the years spending time in the mountains. For me, being in the mountains is very calming and healing, and it seems the same has happened to Glorfindel. Of course, I've not had the extra help of the bowl, as Glorfindel has, to help with one's reflections. But I think that this medium is very helpful to him. Afterall, whatever he sees is between him and the bowl, so to speak, and even Olórin does not pry into the details of the experience. And it seems it's much easier for Glorfindel to take the lesson to heart in this manner. Would that we could always be "shown" instead of "told." But I think also that Glorfindel is definitely growing and maturing, as evidenced by his willingness not to dismiss any of what he sees of himself, however long it may take him to integrate what he has learned.
Thanks very much for this Chapter, Fiondil. I tried all week long to imagine what form this lesson of Glorfindel's would take, and never in a million years would I have guessed correctly! Now to think on what's in store for us readers next week--with nary a clue! Haven't a chance, but I'm sure you will please and surprise us as always!
Joanne
Author's reply
Hi, Joanne. Well, as I told another reviewer, I modeled Mornaringwë on a particular place in the High Tatras of Slovakia, though I made some changes to it. I love mountains, too, and have always enjoyed trekking through them when the opportunity arises. There is a serenity to them that defies description and I tried to convey that here, at least in part. I'm sure Glorfindel will take this lesson to heart and accept it fully in time. And I'm glad (from a writer's pov) that your guesses as to what sort of lesson Glorfindel might have did not come close to the reality. Keeping the reader guessing and remaining interested in what will happen next is sometimes hard to do and I'm glad when someone tells me that I'm doing it right. Thanks again for your review. I appreciate it very much.
Radbooks
· 26 April 2009
· Chapter 55: Mornaringwë
Ah, very nicely done. A lesson we all could profit from I think! We are usually much too hard on ourselves and give more grace to others than we give to ourselves... well, at least I tend to do that. :) It certainly sounds like a beautiful place to go and I'm so glad that Glorfindel is finally relaxing a bit and settling down from all of the upheaval in his life over the past months, he definitely needs that. Love the baby goat, not that I would want one in my hair when I woke up in the morning! :)
Thanks so much!
Author's reply
Hi, Radbooks. Yes, we're often harder on ourselves than we are on others. We are, in fact, our own worse judges and rarely allow ourselves the same measure of grace as we give to others. I modeled the location on a mountain tarn I came across while hiking through the High Tatras of Solvakia many years ago. That particular place was far more desolate than Mornaringwë which I softened with an alpine meadow. Of course, when I came upon the particular tarn in the High Tatras, it was October and it was snowing so perhaps in spingtime it's much more lovely, but even then there was a serene beauty to the harshness of the landscape that pierced one's soul to the very core. It's a place I will never forget. Someday I'd like to return there.
I'm glad you liked this chapter, Radbooks. Thanks for letting me know.
Hel
· 26 April 2009
· Chapter 55: Mornaringwë
So the whole trip was to teach Glorfindel something about himself: to be nicer to himself and not put to much pressure on hiself. And that he feels more centered, will shurely help him. And as his training is about to start again, we will see if he will apply the lesson.
And Lisselindë has had time to replenish her store of bandages.
Author's reply
Some lessons in life are self-reflective, teaching us something about ourselves, either something we didn't know before, or something we have forgotten and of which we need reminding. Of course, the trick is to apply the lesson once it's presented to us. That is something Glorfindel has to do next. I'm sure Lisselindë welcomed the respite as well. *grin* Thanks for your review, Hel. I appreciate it.
6336
· 26 April 2009
· Chapter 55: Mornaringwë
One of those bowls could put a lot of analists out of buisness!
Let's hope that Glorfindil takes this lesson to heart, he is too hard on himself at times and when he fails he spends too much time beating himself up! He should let the Maia do it for him!
Hay! He managed to go a whole week with out hurting himself, Lisslinde will be so pleased!
More please,
Lynda
Author's reply
Yes, one can only hope that the lesson will stick. I'm sure, though, that Glorfindel is at least going to try to be less hard on himself and shower a little of his compassion for others on himself.
Sunny
· 26 April 2009
· Chapter 55: Mornaringwë
The kid thought Glorfindel was mama? Or perhaps it was the golden hair that was so enticing? ;-)
The lesson was definitely something different – and certainly not something Olórin could explain beforehand. Let us just hope the lesson takes!
Author's reply
Probably thought Glorfindel's hair would be good to eat. *grin*
And, as you can see, it really wasn't a lesson that could simply be explained. I think Glorfindel will take the lesson to heart, though that doesn't mean it won't take a bit for the lesson to sink in.
Agape4Gondor
· 21 April 2009
· Chapter 54: Training Days
What a delightful, if strenuous, beginning. I loved the 'cheating' comment. Seems plain to me too; they are cheating.
As for Glorfindel's questions, and I know this might sound like blasphemy, but he reminds me of Pippin .... : )
Ok - so The Manveru Toss is a new ride at Cedar Point???? I don't particularly think it was very nice.... but, oh my! the thought that everyone of the Valar was ready to come to his aid... very nice touch indeed. Almost made me weep.
I can't say exactly why - but I found this chapter quite heartening.
Thank you for sharing this tale. It has been such fun - though a real roller-coaster of a ride for Glorfindel AND your readers.
Bless you!
Author's reply
Hi, Agape and you're welcome. It's been my pleasure to share this tale with you and everyone else and I'm happy that you found this particular chapter so delightful and heartening.
I don't think it's blasphemous to compare Glorfindel to Pippin. *grin* I think they have a lot in common, including an irrepressible joie de vivre if I got my French right.
Thanks for your reviews. I really appreciate them.
Rick
· 21 April 2009
· Chapter 54: Training Days
Hi,
This is for the last several chapters since/including 52 - see, I was tickled pink when Glorfindel's "evil detector" was long-range! good for him. And the ambush thing worked really well too. Now I'm liking the training - do you think the Valar will let him have a re-match with Finrod now that they're less likely to tie & end up heaven-knows-where? So Olorin is going to haul him off into the wilderness (farther, that is) for something - can't wait to find out what the something is.
Keep it up - don't worry about trivial things like food/work/family...
Author's reply
Hi, Rick. I'm glad you've been enjoying the last several chapters. I really doubt the Valar will let him have a rematch with Finrod, that would be 'cheating'. *lol* We'll see in the next chapter where Olórin takes Glorfindel and what the lesson is.
And I'll keep in mind that food/work/family/sleep... are indeed trivial. *grin* Thanks for your comments letting me know how much you are enjoying this story. I appreciate them.
Hel
· 20 April 2009
· Chapter 54: Training Days
Glorfindel wants to fight better than the Maiar? It´s good to set yourself a goal an try to achieve it, but you can overdo it. On the other side the Maiar seems to forget from time to time that Glorfindel is not one of them. It´s ok to plunge someone unwarned into a lake who can see some minutes into the future but if you can´t it is only frightening.
I can understand that Glorfindel gets angry at the notion that his oponents will know his next strike. For him it must look like he has no chance to win a fight because his opponent will see beforehand what he will do.
I´m wondering what Olorin has in store for Glorfindel.
Author's reply
I think Glorfindel is a bit of an overachiever, at least in this stage of his life. I'm sure he will learn that there are some things he simply cannot do. The fact, though, that even with the Maiar's added advantage, Glorfindel is still able to surprise them and that's a good thing. We'll find out soon what Olórin has in stor for Glorfindel. Thanks for your review, Hel; I appreciate it and I'm glad you are still enjoying the story.
Tari
· 20 April 2009
· Chapter 54: Training Days
I wondered if Elves ever experienced lighting strikes. Now I know. Since the Maiar are higher beings than the Elves, it is only natural that their skills would be on a higher level. No matter how hard Glorfindel tries, he can never equal them. Hopefully he will understand some day.
This next lesson should be very interesting.
Author's reply
Hi, Tari. Not sure about lightning strikes but you're correct about Glorfindel's limits. I'm sure he'll adjust to the idea soon enough.