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Larner · 21 October 2009 · Chapter 80: The Second Day in Avallónë

Now, this should liven things up a good deal! Heh!

Sunny · 20 October 2009 · Chapter 80: The Second Day in Avallónë

I see that some people - the ellith in particular - are suffering from Garment Envy ;-) My answers to my own bouts of that condition is to engage my creativity - with an eye to possibly incorporating the interesting details in some future sewing project. Perhaps there will now be a subtle shift in the local fashion towards whatever is currently fashionable on the mainland? ;-) It was interesting how the mainlanders gently scr**ed up their hosts' careful arrangements by choosing to ignore seating precedence. This may well produce some fallout - at least if one is to judge things by Lord Morcocáno's affront at not being seated by one of the Kings. And then the Nandor show up!! (And I suppose that lots of confusion will ensue from this. What fun!) ;-)

njomo · 18 October 2009 · Chapter 79: Reaction

Hi Fiondil, I've felt for some time that Sador was just too quiet. Maybe that's not quite the correct word to use. For all his being reborn roughly the same amount of time as Glorfindel, he's always seemed very level-headed and able to cope. Seeing the difficulties Glorfindel had at times, I wondered if Sador was just somehow more mature than Glorfindel, or if sooner or later he would reach a breaking point. I thought more the latter--and sometimes one wishes that what one expects won't happen. But Sador has many around him now who are able and willing to help him through this time, if he will let them. While Glorfindel's aside to Finrod is amusing, I was heartened by his analysis of the situation of the progress at the moment. His question, "should we be worried?" might really be funny if circumstances were different. I'm glad that while the maiar were amused the rest of the party took him seriously. I don't know for sure what you intended, but I felt that this was more than just a "smart" remark on his part. I also enjoyed Olwë's honesty about what he thought the progress would be like. I've been in that situation before--not being able to say what I thought a situation would be like but never-the-less insisting "not like this". And Ingil's reply to Olwë's comment: “We have no advice to give you except to continue as you have," must have been very frustrating to hear. Not encouraging at all. I hardly dare to think what might happen next! Thanks Fiondil. Joanne

Tari · 14 October 2009 · Chapter 79: Reaction

Watch out for the quiet ones, hmmmm. We are not dangerous. I’m with Beleg. Problems, problems, but what to do? What a day they are having indeed. It’s enough to make anyone tired. Those Maia must be pretty strong if even the females can carry an elf effortlessly.

Larner · 14 October 2009 · Chapter 79: Reaction

They keep seeing such emotional setbacks. Hopefully the presence of Laurendil and Manwen so far has managed to put the rumors to rest among the thoughtful.

Ellie · 13 October 2009 · Chapter 79: Reaction

It would be nice if the Valar actually did tell people WHY every now and then. I feel so sorry for Sador and his lonliness. Looking forward to more answers to pressing questions about WHY? WHY? WHY? *stomps foot and pouts in honor of Sador and L & M. Another fine chapter!

6336 · 13 October 2009 · Chapter 79: Reaction

Hm, well that was intersting and very explosive! I can understand how everyone is feeling, more than one Valar has finger in this pie! Let's hope that Laurendil and Manwen make it back to Lorion in time and that Sador recovers from his breakdown. Would still like to hear Ingil's tales though!:<) More please, Lynda

njomo · 11 October 2009 · Chapter 78: Iaun Araw

Hi Fiondil, I can understand to some extent what happened to this group of Nandor over time-understand, but not condone. To that point, Elennen's explanation makes perfect sense. What I can't quite rationlize is the long lives of the elves and their memories. Of course, over such a long life, one could choose to remember-or not, and pass along-or not-certain memories and customs. Their stubborness seems to almost match the intransigence of one well-know elf of Valinor. I guess what I'm trying to say is that they come by their "blind spot" quite naturally... If this is a sample of their hospitality, no wonder they seem to have been left to their own devices on the Lonely Isle. If they have kept such reverence for the memory of "Lord Araw" over so many long years, one hopes the appearance of Oromë in their midst will help his words take root. Yes, Beleg is one to keep his head in a crisis, as is Sador. I laughed at Sador's reply to Ingwion's question “Why would Lord Ithildor have weapons?”: “Who cares?” Sador exclaimed. “Come. We are wasting time." And trust Glorfindel to have the situation well in hand... Thanks Fiondil, as always. Now to see what other mischief will arise. Joanne

Hel · 11 October 2009 · Chapter 78: Iaun Araw

So it is a sacred place. Maybe the Nandor could put a sign at the pool "Swimming in the holy pool only after apointmet with Lord Orome". Then he can´t felt left out and only very, very few people will go bathing there which will make the Nandor happy. But it is interesting that a whole settlement of elves could live right next to a city without having contact with the peolpe there. After the meeting with Orome I think that will change. And if I guess that was the reason Orome enticed the group around Olwe to go bathing and "meeting" the Nandor.

Tari · 7 October 2009 · Chapter 78: Iaun Araw

How scary. All they wanted was to enjoy a quick dip. What they found was a group of elves surrounding them with bows notched. Where the Nandor did get the idea that they were supposed to guard pools for Lord Oromë? None of the Valar would withhold something like this from the first born. Beleg dropping the seashell brought to mind Pippin dropping his broach, both of which were an excellent idea. There is always someone alert enough to find anything to help them in their search.

Sunny · 6 October 2009 · Chapter 78: Iaun Araw

I suppose this would be an Adventure by the standards of Olwë, Lindarion and Elennen. Those who once lived in Middle-Earth might have a somewhat different view of such things. Although perhaps some standards will change now that Glorfindel is reborn ;-) Although the Nandor probably found their “visitors” casually asking if they might not ask Oromë for his opinion of the matter rather mind-boggling – and Oromë just as casually appearing and giving it even more so!!

Larner · 5 October 2009 · Chapter 78: Iaun Araw

Ah! Valarin object lessons are always instructive! Heh! Most satisfying as the Nandor are reminded that they are Elves first and need to deal with that, rather than setting themselves apart as somehow special and different.

Kitty · 5 October 2009 · Chapter 78: Iaun Araw

Ha, I had been wondering if maybe that pond was seen as sacred by the locals, and my guess was correct! Beleg's reaction to the spear was great, though, of course, the others weren't as good, so it didn't help. Couldn't help but shake my head when they were talking about killing the four. As Olwë said, that's plain kinslaying. And to disregard the fact that they could not have known *and* to not even want to know who their prisoners were was plain stupid. So I enjoyed it immensely when Glorfindel, Finrod and the others turned up and then called Oromë. To imagine the looks on the faces of the Nandor was fun! And I hope they think about what he told them. No matter how they feel about that pond, they were overstepping all boundaries with their intent to kill the four swimmers.

Kaylee Arafinwiel · 5 October 2009 · Chapter 78: Iaun Araw

And all I can say to that, Atar Fiondil, is thank Eru for Lord Araw...*shudders* And I'm glad Beleg thought to drop that seashell! Yes, it is time the Nandor began learning lessons about compassion for others. I'm surprised I didn't think of the Nandor being on the island... Something else for me to ponder. Now, back to last-minute studying...have my medical terms down, but the accounting part is ick. :( *sigh* Tye-melin, Kaylee!

Hel · 4 October 2009 · Chapter 77: The First Day in Avallónë (Part II)

Eyes in the woods. Mysterious and creepy. I wonder in what kind of trouble they are know. The pool is not by chance some kind of sanctuary to some elves? I hope the search in the archive brings some news of Sador´s family. Could it be that the Lord Irmo has sometime a rather warped humour? He must have had a very good time watching Brethorn´s and Saelmir´s first meetings with their families. At least we know now why he normally waits for the arrival ot the families of the reborns before releasing them.

njomo · 3 October 2009 · Chapter 77: The First Day in Avallónë (Part II)

Hi Fiondil, Aahh, the suspense is thick here. I just don't know which "clues" are really important to the story. For instance, is it important that Beleg learned how to back float? Will Brethorn figure somehow in the story to come? Yes, and then add the mystery of Ingwion, the question of who or what was watching the pool, whether / when Sador will finally learn about his family, how did Glorfindel learn about Ingwion's "mystery" or what exactly did his comment to Ingwion mean...the list goes on...and on. You never cease to amaze. Waiting on the edge of my seat for the next chapter. Thanks Fiondil! Joanne

Sitara · 3 October 2009 · Chapter 77: The First Day in Avallónë (Part II)

No privacy whatsoever in Valinor, as far as I can see. Patches of thin air start suddenly to shimmer, revealing one or another of the Ainur, the hills and clearings have now ears to listen...Maybe a revolution would really be in order, don't you think? "lol" I think this chapter may be setting the stage for further events. You piled up more mystery on top the already existing one, after dropping that huge hint in regard to Ingwion's issues within the last chapter, Fiondil. Well..that's it. I just have to find somewhere a bit of patience, although I don't know where..."lol" P.S. You're the only writer I know who didn't leave himself to be deterred about his work and commitment towards his readers by technical difficulties. Just for the record.

Kitty · 29 September 2009 · Chapter 77: The First Day in Avallónë (Part II)

Olwë is a hopeless case when it comes to ships, really *shakes head, amused* Though now you have me wondering if there is something wrong with that pool ... but at least they had fun playing there. That archive collecting news about people is a good idea. Over time, it will be of great help for many who lost their family, be it because they died or because they were separated during the wars of Beleriand. I hope they will find out something about Sador's family. Love Brethorn's story about his and Saelmir's reunions with his relatives *eg* Really wicked!

Kitty · 29 September 2009 · Chapter 76: The First Day in Avallónë (Part I)

Hm, it's probably true that at least part of the reason Eärnur was sent had to do with Lasgalad. Though I guess it's not the only reason, too. But I am glad he was there and could help. Yay, Pelendur and Haldir finally got to talk! I am so glad to see Pelendur is coming along. It may still be a while until they can be close again, but at least they do spend time with each other and seem to be on the path to reconcilation. And it is good that they are going to talk about the time since the Noldor rebels departed; I think both need this knowledge to really understand how much has changed, including themselves. *lol* Findegil tricked them nicely, didn't he? Nice to see him again :) I feel so sorry for Ingwion. The reason for his sorrow is probably the often hinted at and never explained one, right?

Tari · 29 September 2009 · Chapter 77: The First Day in Avallónë (Part II)

If I were Beleg and company, I would be very leery of this quiet clearing. Something so beautiful should have someone around somewhere. I hope they are not in trouble again. I have to wait a whole week to hear Finrod’s story? I think we’ve probably heard it before, but as far as I'm concerned, I can never hear it enough. I’m beginning to like your Finrod almost as much as I like Legolas who is my favorite Elf.

Larner · 28 September 2009 · Chapter 77: The First Day in Avallónë (Part II)

I am curious, of course, as to who is spying on Olwe's party. And I love Finrod's welcome in Brethorn's home. What a thing to have done to Saelmir! And now to see if any information comes from the visit to the archive.

Sunny · 28 September 2009 · Chapter 77: The First Day in Avallónë (Part II)

That pool sounds very pretty – and an invitation to skinny-dipping! Lindarion’s complaint that ”this isn’t much of an adventure” sounds like he is _inviting_ an adventure to come and find them. (And I like this definition of it, which pops up fairly often in Fantasy and SF books: An Adventure is _somebody else_ in deep sh*t long ago and far, far away.) ;-) Arafinwë’s attempt at incognito didn’t quite work, I see. Just his luck, encountering someone who remembering him from the War of Wrath. I suppose Sador will find his kin _eventually_. Though it may take time – but what is time to an Elf? When he _does_ meet his kin again, I suppose it will be a nicely dramatic scene. And if it is not one you have scheduled for EI, perhaps you may throw this thought to your Muse, and see what he makes of it? IMO it may make for a better story if their reunion takes time: Then they can be properly awed at each others’ fates – and there will be lots of reciprocal admiration of elflings and such. *Sniffs at Finrod* C’mon, Finda, you really _should_ have kept up with your old friends from Lórien. You are a prince, after all, which means you should be able to afford an army of social secretaries to keep you updated on the toadies and politicians at your father’s court, while _you_ kept tabs on the important people! ;-) Were the Valar and Maiar hanging around invisibly to enjoy the show when Brethorn met his relatives again? I hope the Flying Spaghetti Monster keeps the Gremlins away from your computer and internet connection – and that it keeps its pseudopods over the techs’ hands and tools – and software – as they work at connecting you! Oh, yes, and Murphy, please stay away! Go pester the CIA or somebody else who deserves it!! ;-)

Hel · 27 September 2009 · Chapter 76: The First Day in Avallónë (Part I)

I´m a bit at a loss about the last scene. There is something I miss about Ingwion and Ingil, which I can´t exactly place at the moment. So I wait for part two in the hope of a solution of the situation and a reason for Ingwion´s emotional outburst. It´s good to see that Haldir and Pelendur are talking and solving their problems.

Sitara · 27 September 2009 · Chapter 76: The First Day in Avallónë (Part I)

Hmm..It looks like Findegil's slip of the tongue would make this particular chapter extremely interesting for anyone who loves mystery. And who doesn't, actually? "lol" Ingil...Ugh, taking into account my poor knowledge in regard to the HoMe books, I think there is a version (earlier, perhaps?) according to which Ingil was the name of Ingwe's first born son. But, somehow, I don't think this would be all the mystery, if I'm to judge also Ingwe and Elindis' reaction during Vorondil's trial. Here seems to be something more than that and I wonder myself whether it'd be about an "Ingil" or an "Ingoldo".....Don't mind me, I'm crazy. I also have to wonder what is that Glorfindel seems to know and whether he knows how Ingwion feels having someone dear currently residing in Mandos or he actually knows the identity of our mysterious Elf. I' d rather take the former. Well, since I don't actually believe you're going to spoil the surprise in this story (meaning, spill all the beans or at least, part of them "lol"), I'll try to be patient.

Ellie · 24 September 2009 · Chapter 76: The First Day in Avallónë (Part I)

So much happens in each of these chapters it is difficult to know what to comment on. I this I am most intrigued this time by what has upset Ingwion so much and how Glorfindel knows what it is. I realy like the picture of the cities that you create. They seem so real as if they could be just down the street. NIcely done! Can't wait for more!