Reviews of The Rider - Finding Trouble

Fiondil · 21 October 2007 · Chapter 7: By Jay of Lasgalen

A most interesting story. I liked the way it was a group effort yet seamlessly written. There was more than enough heart-stopping moments for even the most angst-ridden soul and the ride of the elves to the rescue, especially Glorfindel appearing to back up Elrohir, was very satisfying. Well done.

Author's reply

Thanks. I enjoyed the challenge, and I think the different parts fit together very well - the other writers have done a brilliant job. I'm glad you liked Glorfindel's sudden appearance - it certainly surprised Elrohir!

mistry89 · 21 October 2007 · Chapter 7: By Jay of Lasgalen

Thank you! Very exciting (I confess, I'm always pleased to see Tales Of The Elflings - if only in Glorfindel's eyes) Cheers :)

Author's reply

Thanks - as you know, I love the twins at any age :>) I love their interaction with Glorfindel too!

Dreamflower · 20 October 2007 · Chapter 7: By Jay of Lasgalen

What an exciting adventure--and very well-done and coherent for a group story!

Author's reply

It was an interesting challenge - and fascinating to get the nearly-completed story back and see where other writers had taken *my* story. All the parts seem to fit together very well.

Raksha The Demon · 19 October 2007 · Chapter 7: By Jay of Lasgalen

A wonderful conclusion to a rousing yarn. Well-written battle scenes; and the reunion of the brothers and their father makes for good reading.

Author's reply

Thanks, Raksha! It felt strange to set up the opening scenes and then leave it to someone else - I kept wondering how Elladan was doing :>)

Raksha The Demon · 19 October 2007 · Chapter 6: By Imagingingma

Elrohir's compassion and decency will lead him to his missing brother after all - I like that. Good chapter; I see that Elladan is still a warrior even without his memory.

Raksha The Demon · 19 October 2007 · Chapter 4: By nautika3

The cavalry is on the way to the rescue, but Elladan is on his own - how frustrating for all concerned. It's a wild ride, alright.

Raksha The Demon · 19 October 2007 · Chapter 3: By lin4gondor

You can't keep one Peredhel out of trouble when his twin is in it! The plot thickens and the game is afoot! Onto the next chapter!

Raksha The Demon · 19 October 2007 · Chapter 2: By Eveningrainfall

Oh dear; Elladan's situation is getting worse! I feel like I'm watching an old-fashioned cliffhanger serial; and am enjoying it immensely.

Raksha The Demon · 19 October 2007 · Chapter 1: By Jay of Lasgalen

Uh-oh; the twins are in a jam! Lay in the bandages and milk & cookies at Imladris! Seriously, lots of tension and excitement here, the story grabs my interest.

Raksha The Demon · 19 October 2007 · Chapter 5: By Lady Branwyn

A fine chapter; Elrond's discovery of the new dead heaped with the old in the burrow was chilling and grievous. I loved the otters; and the leader-otter's viewpoint of the fallen Peredhel. Wonderful descriptions, too.

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