Ada's Pain by Esteliel
Marianel · 21 May 2020 · Chapter 1: Ada's Pain
So lovely little story! So good they have each other❤️A few tearsr from my own heart escaped from my eyes from remembered losses in my life as I read this,older and newer ones alike. And as Elrond I sometimes get lost in thought and memory.I too take joy from my own son and we comfort each other. Thank you for the story. Best regards from Sweden
LisaG · 23 May 2010 · Chapter 1: Ada's Pain
Aw. *sniff!* Very sweet.
Earosse · 11 April 2009 · Chapter 1: Ada's Pain
Oh, this is wonderful. I love it.
Marethiel · 8 January 2009 · Chapter 1: Ada's Pain
This made me cry. ~Marethiel
Larner · 21 October 2007 · Chapter 1: Ada's Pain
Sweet, although a bit young for a five-year-old.
Author's reply
Thank you, Larner, for reviewing! In which way do you mean 'a bit young for a five-year-old'? Do you mean that Estel was too young with his five years to be offering this kind of comfort? Or do you mean the exact opposite - that you think his behaviour too 'young' for a child age five? For both possible explanations of your comment, I would have the same answer: I work with five-year-olds and have a few of them living around here. In my opinion, if there is ever a vast difference in the development of children of the same age regarding the 'maturity' in their behaviour, then it must be among the five-year-olds. As an author, this gives me great liberties. ;) However, I do not write anything that I have not once seen a five-year-old do You are free to have your own opinion, though, and I thank you for leaving your praise and your criticism! It always helps, I appreciate it! Have a great week! ~Esteliel