Silvertree · 20 December 2005 · Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven
Great Job Londea!Can you suggest any topics for my first story? Spread the word will you? Thanks!Any help will be greatly appreciated
A Shot in the Dark by Iawen Londea
Reviews (23)
pipinheart · 5 July 2005 · Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven
Loved this! A great story of the twins love for one another. Elledan was able to forgive them after all... Love to hear you write another story on the twins... You did great.....
Radioactive Bubblegum · 6 March 2004 · Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven
Wow! Great story! I really loved it! I hope to see the prequels soon! Rad O.o
Estelle · 6 February 2004 · Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven
Yes precious!!! You've left it so long that I've forgotten all about it :P But that was a sweet ending :D And Elrohir pulling that prank on Elladan... hee hee hee. Bad bad Elrohir :P
Author's reply
LOL. You're the only one to say anything about Elrohir's prank, everyone else was enthralled with Elladan's revenge prank, lol, but I rather thought Elrohir's was much worse. =D I'm glad you liked the end. P.S. You are still more evil than me.
xsilicax · 10 January 2004 · Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven
Hmmm, was I reading this fic? I forget... Well that was just a nice satisfying ending. It's good to know that arrows, bad words and pranks won't get in the way of brotherly love...even if the pranks get a little out of hand. Elladan seems to have the art of fussing while not being overbearing about it...a very useful skill in this ill-begotten family. So...when do we get the prequels? Cathy, xx (Finally! Caught up to it *g*)
Author's reply
Wow I thought I replied to this review. LOL!!! Thank you so much for beta'ing this fic for me, you were an wonderful help to me. *many huggles* I'm glad that you liked the final chapter. The prequels... aren't coming for a while, but they are coming lol.
Grey Wonderer · 12 December 2003 · Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven
Just like the rest, this was wonderful. You have me looking forward to the prequels now! The line in the last chapter that summed it up for me was: “Elves are not supposed to die,” Elrohir said softly. I think that is why this story was so mesmerizing for me. It is very difficult to think of an immortal feeling the grief and pain of death. I also like the fact that even though he tried to kill them, they felt the loss of their former friend. Now how bout those prequels?
Author's reply
LOL, it will be a time before the prequels come, sorry. And thank you, I am glad you liked my story and that you liked how I handled Elladan and Elrohir's feelings about Celedur's death, even though he did try to kill them both lol. I didn't want them to just be like "Yeah, it's over." They were once really close to him. LOL.
Sivan · 11 December 2003 · Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven
Funny chapter. LOL. I can't wait to read the prequel. I love what I read.
Author's reply
Thank you!! I had a hard time with the pranks and such, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Estelle · 29 November 2003 · Chapter 10: Chapter Ten
*Ahem* I've been waiting and waiting and waiting for months for you to finish chapter 11. Where is it? Huh?? *pokes you* Give me chapter 11! *pokes you again* NOW!! :P *pokes you with evil mithril box* *eg*
Author's reply
The final chapter is sitting in Cathy's mailbox, where it has been for over a week. So I'm just waiting for her to send it back. Go bug her about it. LOL.
Grey Wonderer · 21 October 2003 · Chapter 10: Chapter Ten
You must finish this soon! I must know how it turns out. LOL You have got me hooked.
Author's reply
TY TY. Unfortunately chapter eleven isn't coming along so well. Well maybe if you put up more of yours soon I will feel inspired. LMAO.
Grey Wonderer · 21 October 2003 · Chapter 6: Chapter Six
Still enjoying this very much. I hope you plan to write more stories in the future. Also, you made me think about how it would feel for Elrond to know that he would out live Aragorn. It was a very sad and touching moment when Elrond was thinking about that event.
Author's reply
Wow, thanks for saying so! That scene was more meant to be about how Elrond is NOT supposed to outlive Elrohir, because Elrohir isn't supposed to die. I'm glad you took another meaning to it though because that makes me feel good about my writing, lol. *pokes you about updating your fic* LOL!
Grey Wonderer · 21 October 2003 · Chapter 3: Chapter Three
I have to know if Elladan shot his brother and if so why! Just started reading this one after getting your reviews on mine. I was curious and I am enjoying this very much. This is very entertaining and I love the relationship between Legolas and Aragorn. Well, back to reading.
Author's reply
Thanks for replying!! I'm glad you like it, I appreciate it =D
Mysterious Jedi · 11 October 2003 · Chapter 9: Chapter Nine
Excellent so far. Now you just have to find a way to retie all the bonds. :)
Lirenel · 10 October 2003 · Chapter 8: Chapter Eight
Wow. Good story. Please update soon!
Author's reply
Thanks! I updated lol. I'm glad you like it.
Lady Larien · 9 October 2003 · Chapter 8: Chapter Eight
Awesome story so far! Continue soon! God bless, -Sara
Author's reply
Thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you like it and I hope you like the chapter I just put up. *hint, hint, lol!*
Estelle · 7 October 2003 · Chapter 8: Chapter Eight
Sneaky you. When did you post chapter 8?? :P Elrohir is awake!!! You didn't kill him!! *hugs and squishes you* Don't you dare kill any of them or I'll kill them off in my fic just to get back at you. LOL!!
Author's reply
If you kill off you characters I will kill off more of mine!!! Do you understand! And who said I was killing Elrohir??
Estelle · 7 October 2003 · Chapter 7: Chapter Seven
Whoa! `Dan kicked some butt!! :D Yays!!!
Lyn · 2 October 2003 · Chapter 6: Chapter Six
Excellent! It's good to find another author to trust. May fate bring you innumerable story ideas for the future!
Author's reply
Wow, I'm very flattered that you consider me an author to trust! Thank you very much! I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
Estelle · 1 October 2003 · Chapter 6: Chapter Six
See? Not Elladan! *happy dance* Elladan is innocent! *huggles Elladan* Now make Elrohir better!! *directs you to your computer and ties you down to the chair* Post! Now! :P
Author's reply
Nope, not Elladan. Of COURSE not Elladan! LOL! =D
Coreinha · 30 September 2003 · Chapter 4: Chapter Four
GAH! update! Now! (very good ficcy so far, though! I'm really enjoying it!) XOXO Cor
Author's reply
TY Cor! I need to go read all of your fics, I have been meaning to get to them I promise! LOL! ~Sparx~
Estelle · 30 September 2003 · Chapter 4: Chapter Four
I know I've read it before but it still gives me the creeps LOL! Go girl!! Post! Post! POST!!!!! :D *huggles Elrohir and runs off with Legolas*
Author's reply
Gives you the creeps?? Is that good or bad! LOL! TY for the review! =D
Elvenesse · 5 September 2003 · Chapter 2: Chapter Two
Well, there's not much chance that Elladan would shot his brother (at least not on purpose), so I'll have to wait to see who did it!
Author's reply
...Yes what exactly happened when Elrohir was shot? *shrugs* Who knows? Oh, yes, I do. Mwahahahaha. Thanks for the review. =D
Lady Jaina · 4 September 2003 · Chapter 2: Chapter Two
Surely Elladan did not try to kill his brother on purpose?! I sense much angst if he did not, and if he did! This story is excellent and has great potential!
Author's reply
Thank you! Sorry I took so long to reply, I didn't even know we COULD reply. *is new to Stories of Arda, lol* I hope you're still reading lol.
Cathy · 30 August 2003 · Chapter 1: Chapter One
*SQUEALS* that was a nasty place to end it! I insist you stick up ythe next chapter, and make everyone better!! Cathy. xx *hugs*
Author's reply
*hugs* I didn't realize you could reply to people's reviews lol. Thanks for reviewing here even though you did at ff.net and you beta'ed! *more hugs* ~Sparx~