Visions by Calenlass

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Beruthiels Cat · 8 May 2007 · Chapter 1

Interesting twist...It makes you think Elros could have died with doubt in his mind. Love his admonition at the end! BC

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It was a good thing he didn't have any doubts. This is when foresight comes in handy! :) ~Calenlass

Nessa · 8 May 2007 · Chapter 1

Excellent. Keep them coming....you have poetry in your soul... Nessa

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Poetry in my soul... I like the sound of that. :) Thank for the comment! ~Calenlass

shirebound · 7 May 2007 · Chapter 1

That's wonderful. Who's to say Elros wasn't as foresighted as his brother? I'm glad he can see far enough ahead to know that some of his line will stay true.

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I couldn't agree more. ~Calenlass

Larner · 7 May 2007 · Chapter 1

Alas that such as Elros should foresee such things! Adunaic doesn't have much of a vocabulary provided for us to peruse, does it?

Author's reply

I think I would've died at that moment, seeing what will come to pass. And no, it doesn't. *frowns* I managed to find a dictionary, but it's also very limited. At least I was able to find "Elendili" and "Endurance." :) Thanks, Larner, for commenting on everything I posted. I appreciated them! ~Cal