The Memory of Moments by Peredhil lover
Nieriel Raina · 10 February 2008 · Chapter 3: Retreat
I really like this one a lot. The rhythm really made it work well. You really captured Elladan's thoughts fabulously. I now blame you for being unable to stop writing twin fics! *grin* Great short!
Author's reply
Thanks, NiRi, I’m glad you like how it turned out in the end. If I am to blame for inspiring you to write twin fics, then I am most pleased with myself! :)
RS · 4 February 2008 · Chapter 2: Withdraw
How does one get over this? I can feel his anguish and helplessness. You've done such a good job in carrying his state of being over to your other stories. Poor Elladan!
Author's reply
Thanks so much for reviewing again, RS! I’m glad that I’ve managed to show a little of what Elladan was going through at this time, and how it affected his behaviour in my later stories. I still plan to write one more of these short ficies if I ever get around to it. peredhil lover
RS · 4 February 2008 · Chapter 1: Touch
Shock and Horror! OMG..The poor twins. This is very distressing.
ellie · 5 December 2007 · Chapter 2: Withdraw
very powerful. full of helplessness and hopelessness. poor elladan! well done
Author's reply
Thanks for reviewing, ellie! I'm glad to know that you found this to be effective. peredhil lover
Larner · 20 March 2007 · Chapter 1: Touch
How horrid a thing to find, and reassuring that they have at least found her alive. And I see I'm joined in another who's chosen that title for a collection of stories. I learned it had been used several times on FFN.
Author's reply
Actually, I wrote this one quite awhile ago and didn't plan to even post it here, but a couple more ideas for short snippets from Elladan's POV just sprang to my mind today. They will tie into the current story I'm writing, so I thought I would throw them together under one title and post them. I didn't give the title too much thought, but since it's already been used a few times, I've changed it. Thanks for reviewing, Larner.
Bodkin · 20 March 2007 · Chapter 1: Touch
Poor twins. Poor Celebrian. And Elrond. Again his family is ripped apart - and yet, one way or another, they all survived. And healed. After a fashion.
Author's reply
They did all heal, but despite Elladan's hope at the end, their family never was whole again, was it? The twins fate is a matter of debate, but we do know that at least Arwen never saw her mother again. It's so sad, and something that I see as a pivotal moment in all their lives. Thanks for reviewing Bodkin.