Pearl Took · 17 February 2007 · Chapter 1: Between Friends - A poem
Wonderfully unique, at least in my reading experience. It's haunting. Well done, Agape!
Between Friends by Agape4Gondor
Reviews (7)
Queen Galadriel · 15 February 2007 · Chapter 1: Between Friends - A poem
The summary caught my attention, and I had to read. Very chilling, and very well done. God bless, Galadriel
Author's reply
Thank you and for the blessing besides!
Daynawayna · 15 February 2007 · Chapter 1: Between Friends - A poem
THAT was SO COOL. You summed it up so beautifully A4G. Very well written.
Author's reply
THANK YOU!!!
Larner · 14 February 2007 · Chapter 1: Between Friends - A poem
I read this on the list, and am very impressed. Oh, poor Smeagol, to have lost that love in such a way. Heart deceived by the Ring made by the Deceiver.
Author's reply
Thank you, Larner. *blushes* not used to writing poetry but that's what I 'heard' and so it was written as heard... poor Smeagol???? LOL - poor Deagol! And didn't Smeagol end up being the Deceiver - to himself, to Deagol, to Sauron, and to Frodo...
Linda Hoyland · 14 February 2007 · Chapter 1: Between Friends - A poem
A very chilling twist at the end, I liked this.
Author's reply
Thanks Linda - that last line was most difficult to figure out - but well worth the time spent on it!
Elflingimp · 14 February 2007 · Chapter 1: Between Friends - A poem
Well I guess that was sweet considering who you were writing about!LOL Happy Valentines Day!
Author's reply
When I first 'heard' it - I thought it was too whimsical and sickly sweet - until that last line of the first stanza... then I realized why I was being asked to write.... Happy Valentine's to you to! And thanks for the comment! Appreciate all...
Raksha The Demon · 14 February 2007 · Chapter 1: Between Friends - A poem
Well, Gollum's one true love was that little band of gold. Valentine's Day must have been very odd for them all those years; what does one give the Ring that has your soul? Original idea and nice poetry.
Author's reply
Oh - I like that Raksha - I had the idea that the Valetine was for Deagol - but it probably was for the Ring - for did it not hold his heart and soul!?! *shivers*