To Cross a River by Hai Took
Agape4Gondor · 4 January 2007 · Chapter 1: To Cross a River
Oh I just enjoyed this thoroughly. I was most pleased with the fact that you had them stopping right before sunrise per the book - unfortunately, you then talked about it being night instead.... BUT - the fun with the sneezes and sniffles and such made up for it. Delightful little tale....
ponypetter · 2 January 2007 · Chapter 1: To Cross a River
I love it! I can just see Pippin trying to repeat this just to get Gandalf to stop for an extra meal. Looks like he has his hands full.
Author's reply
Pippin does seem the type to take advantage of a situation ;) At least Gandalf has had so much time to get to know hobbits! Thank you for taking the time to review!
Dreamflower · 2 January 2007 · Chapter 1: To Cross a River
Oh, I remember this! Delightful to see it again!
Author's reply
Thank you for reviewing it again! :)
Larner · 2 January 2007 · Chapter 1: To Cross a River
Hypothermia and colds! How typical of the season!
Author's reply
It is, isn't it? I think I have already had two colds! Thank you for reviewing!