Missing by TopazTook
Lindelea · 19 January 2007 · Chapter 1: Many Happy Returns
O my. Took a running leap into LJ this morning (no time for more than a gulp, to mix my metaphors) and saw this recommended. Ooo, nice setup! What makes me think that Pippin's gone to look for Bilbo?
Author's reply
Thanks. As for where Pippin is (or gets to be, since right now he's running into Merry at the food table), only time will tell...
Beruthiel · 18 January 2007 · Chapter 1: Many Happy Returns
Just one nitpick. The summary says this is 1412, but if Bilbo's party wasn't long ago and Pippin is twelve years old, it should be 1402. Off to a very promising start!
Author's reply
D'oh! My brain must have been on vacation there. I fixed it. Thanks!
Pearl Took · 17 January 2007 · Chapter 1: Many Happy Returns
Off to a grand start, Topaz! I'm looking forward to finding out what's next :-)
Author's reply
Thanks! I hope to get the next chapter posted in the next week or so.
Pearl Took · 17 January 2007 · Chapter 0
OOOO! Good intriguing opening!! Onward!
Author's reply
Thanks!
Grey Wonderer · 17 January 2007 · Chapter 1: Many Happy Returns
Now, I hadn't thought of that. Frodo wouldn't exactly be thrilled with birthday parties after Bilbo left, would he? This is very interesting all around. I find myself wondering if Merry insisted Frodo come along or if Frodo was simply invited and didn't feel he could refuse? Looking forward to more.
Author's reply
I think it may have contributed to Frodo being a "loner." And I suspect that Merry can be pretty insistent.
Grey Wonderer · 17 January 2007 · Chapter 0
Oh, that's excellent! Hook me right from the prologue on this one. Off to read more. (Love when you write the accent into the story by the way. I just love that accent.)
Author's reply
Yeah, I love the accent, too. :)