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Kitty · 25 February 2007 · Chapter 45: Slipping the Leash

I’d love to see these rooms myself – it sounds truly beautiful. But I’d prefer them without Valar around, they’re a bit too intimidating ;-) Poor Glorfindel! I’m getting even more curious what’s the matter with him. Though I was glad that he this time only sought to reach his friends. This examination seems rather frightening for everyone save the Valar themselves.

Kitty · 25 February 2007 · Chapter 44: The Spiral Maze

Fourteen guards for two persons seems a bit excessive – no wonder Ingwion was a bit irritated. And I was amused about the way Glorfindel used to convince Ingwion that Námo isn’t so bad. You have a way to end chapters ... *shakes head* I am glad there is already more, so I don't have to wait and worry.

Bodkin · 24 February 2007 · Chapter 43: Meeting With the Elder King

Splendid Valar - clearly they are very clothes-conscious! Varda seems to have gone the other way - and realised the effectiveness of simplicity contrasting with all that bling. And Glorfindel is better sticking to the juice - and keeping his wits! Especially after having been distressed to see Ulmo. His apology for something he had no possibility of controlling is very sweet - but he can have no blame for that and I'm glad Ulmo acknowledges it. Shame that the Valar won't give Glorfindel a smidgeon of information about Tuor, Idril and Earendil, though, even if they don't bring him up to date. Just to know that they escaped from Gondolin would help him and that there had been some purpose to his Balrog-battle. "B-but you’re... you’re Valar! You’re suppose to understand everything!" Elfling! That is just such a young response! And the Valar are playing a dangerous game - I hope they know what they're doing!

Bodkin · 24 February 2007 · Chapter 42: An Appointment in Valmar

I love the inn being called the Laughing Vala. Such a great name. The clothing - and the setting - are beautifully done, but I think the thing I liked best was Ingwion's revelation of the details of his first visit - and the image of little Ingwion sitting on Varda's lap and playing with one of her stars. Even if it was only a very small one!

hanci · 22 February 2007 · Chapter 41: A Slow Recovery

What a surprise, new chapters already! I'm really curious. Just wanted to thank you for your answers. Ingwion is great! It's good to have such friends, Glorfindel is a lucky elf.

Ellie · 22 February 2007 · Chapter 43: Meeting With the Elder King

Love the clothes on the quite fashionable Valar. I think it is fascinating seeing the world from their point of view - it is so different from what I had expected and I'm glad that they don't' always see themselves as high and mighty. I'm very creeped out by the ending. Can't wait for the next chapters!

Ellie · 22 February 2007 · Chapter 42: An Appointment in Valmar

I love the way they dressed up Glorfy! And poor Ingwion with his first experience there! Too funny! I really like the way you are depicting Ingwe's family (the nice, reasonable ones who don't take themselves too seriously anyway). Wonderful chapter!

Kitty · 22 February 2007 · Chapter 43: Meeting With the Elder King

Impressive image of the house. I can see it before my eyes. How typical for Glorfindel to apologise to Ulmo! As if it was his fault that Turgon was so stupid and arrogant! "but I will not answer any questions concerning Turgon or his family.">/i> That's hardly fair, if you ask me, considering what Glorfindel went through to protect Turgons son and his family. I wonder why everyone seems to avoid the topic so careful. Why should Glorfindel not know that Tuor, Idril and Eärendil escaped and what happened then? It was a very emotional day for Glorfindel, and considering the end of the chapter, I fear it was only the beginning. Just *what* have the Valar planned? Or whoever it may be. I have to admit I'm rather suspicious now ... Can't wait for more!

Kitty · 22 February 2007 · Chapter 42: An Appointment in Valmar

Two updates at once :-))) "I will leave it to you and the other ellyn to protect the denizens of Valmar from Glorfindel." *LOL* Well, Ingwë is learning fast, isn't he? Poor Glorfindel, it is understandable why he is so nervous. I'd probably *die* from nervousness ;-( Nice image of Ingwion's first visit there, not screaming only as long as he was allowed to play with Varda's star. I'm sure Glorfindel will tease him a bit about that later.

MithLuin · 21 February 2007 · Chapter 43: Meeting With the Elder King

I'm going to start to think that you update just for me :> You are a very thoughtful author! I suspected that something serious was up that they weren't talking about, but I have no idea what their plan is. It was good to see Ulmo, and until you detailed the mansions, I'd forgotten that Namo is married! Why don't we ever see his spouse? Your descriptions of their outfits is much fun (I am a novice costumer/sewer). I particularly liked the image of a 10-year-old Ingwion playing with one of Varda's stars, and I'm suspicious of Namo's wine ;).

Rhyselle · 21 February 2007 · Chapter 43: Meeting With the Elder King

Ooooh! *rubbing hands with glee* Intrigue and mystery abounds! I feel so bad for Glorfindel right now... he's such a confused elfling! The descriptions of Valmar and the mansions, particularly Manwe's mansion were exquisite. I had a very clear mental image of the rooms you described, and of the appearance of Manwe, Varda and Namo. I read your story and when I finish the chapters it is almost a shock coming back into the mundane world of today! Well done! :)

Kitty · 21 February 2007 · Chapter 41: A Slow Recovery

Just finished reading through the whole fic. It’s already too long to review every chapter, so I can only pick up some points now. Hadn’t read anything similar before and was fascinated about the story; it’s rather exceptional in my opinion with the detailed description of Glorfindel’s time in the Halls of Mandos and his slow maturing after the rebirth. During the time before his rebirth, I felt particularly touched by the care Glorfindel showed for Elured and Elurin and later for Sador. (Somehow now I hope the twins are released only when Glorfindel is back after Sauron’s fall and they are fostered in the household of Elrond, but at least I want Glorfindel to be there for them) I love the way you describe the Valar, and particularly Namo and his relationship with Glorfindel. Though by now I am tempted to say they finally sent him back to Middle-earth partly to get a reprieve from all the excitement surrounding him *grin* As for our favourite balrog slayer himself, poor Glorfindel has lost much, and I think what he needs now most is to feel needed and to have friends. So I am glad he has Finrod and Sador, and now probably Ingwion as well, not to mention their fathers. They recognise his qualities as well, I think – his loyalty and protectiveness towards these he loves and trusts. And I think it is about time someone tells him more about Eärendil and that his sacrifice wasn’t in vain. Maybe he even could meet him? Now I look forward to more!

Bodkin · 20 February 2007 · Chapter 41: A Slow Recovery

An invitation to tea! Well, that might stimulate Glorfindel out of his depression ... I only hope it's in a good way! Poor elf. So much has happened to him since he has been reborn - and there he is with the emotional maturity of an adolescent, trying desperately to cope and seem grown-up at the same time!

Bodkin · 20 February 2007 · Chapter 40: Damage Assessment

Poor Glorfindel! He really didn't need to wake to find himself tied to the bed. But still - he seems to have found a good friend in Ingwion. And if even the Valar are confused and left scratching their heads, what chance to the Eldar have of understanding what happened!

hanci · 19 February 2007 · Chapter 40: Damage Assessment

The Valar's analysis of the situation is very interesting. And Lirulin was a special case indeed. I just love that Eru laughed with them at Varda's joke, it somehow makes His presence, and caring, more real. More real than all the manifestations before, if that makes sense. Glorfindel's waking didn't go well. Tying him... they could be glad they didn't understand Sindarin. A pity there was no one to handle it better. Ingwion will be a good friend. Third stage in their existence? What do you mean?

Rhyselle · 19 February 2007 · Chapter 41: A Slow Recovery

Oh, I dearly wish that I could just sweep Glorfindel up in my arms like Namo does and comfort him. I'm so glad that he has Ingwion in his camp, even if it takes him time to realize it. And now he's been given a summons to speak with Lord Manwe.... The socio-political issues between the various Elven races and the way the societies react to the Reborn has been fascinating, and watching the development of the friendships and relationships that Glorfindel has in his life even more so. It occurred to me that in a lot of ways, Namo is treating Glorfindel as a son--loving him and disciplining him and caring for him. And our lovely elfling is reacting so much like a teenager to a parent! I love how Glorfindel is slowly realizing that he is not alone in Aman and that he is loved by many. He has a need to be needed... and I'm looking forward to seeing just what needs he will be able to fulfil in the future--after he's gotten to talk to Lord Manwe! :) I went back and reread all of the chapters before reading the most recent two, and I wondered if it was my imagination, or are there hints that Glorfindel ultimately might just find that Alassiel has a special place in his heart? Maybe it's wishful thinking on my part, but somehow I rather wish that when he is done with his mission in Middle Earth, and returns to Aman that she would be waiting for him. :) I'm a hopeful romantic! :) Lovely, lovely work; well written and a joy to read... and I like the idea that the Valar DON'T know everything! :)

Anonymous · 17 February 2007 · Chapter 40: Damage Assessment

Ingwion is handling her nervousness quite well. Poor guy! And poor Glorfindel! It is so nice to see the overwhelming love the Valar have for the Eldar. What a beautiful tale you are telling!

Ellie · 17 February 2007 · Chapter 41: A Slow Recovery

Ingwe refusing to even acknowledge the presence of Namo? My, we are hacked, aren't we? Yikes! I'm glad that his son had more sense. This is such a great story. Can't wait for more!

Agape4Gondor · 15 February 2007 · Chapter 1: Here At the End of All Things

Well, I have now ready everything else you've posted here at SoA and now I am ready to read the one story that I came here to read... Elf Interrupted.

Rhyselle · 14 February 2007 · Chapter 39: Rescue Mission Into the Past

Oh, I don't know what to say... there's so much about this story that just grabs my heart and wrings emotions from me. I bow in utter respect for the vision you have of the death and rebirth of Glorfindel, and how you describe the Valar--particularly Namo and Manwe. I look forward to your continuation of this tale--and will avidly pounce upon your next update. :)

hanci · 14 February 2007 · Chapter 39: Rescue Mission Into the Past

Time dilation, wow. And they are able to map it! And they plan a rescue mission! But I don't think everyone would go to Cuiviénen, I suppose they would flee to a safe place of their past, so those born later would (have to) run elsewhere? As always the conversation was just great, "I doubt if I could repeat the performance..." and "We may have a problem..." :o) Glorfindel's first reaction is to arm himself, it shows that he has had different life than Ingwë (or perhaps had had fits better). Passing through the mountains? Interesting. Why bother going over them when through is faster? :o) The care the Maiar have with him, it's almost funny to see how many Maiar it takes to handle him. It's a closure, to see Gondolin dead. Perhaps he needed to see that, just as Laurendil and others needed to see Finrod. This story is wonderful, surprise in every chapter.

hanci · 14 February 2007 · Chapter 38: Ingwë Alone

Ingwë is like a prince in certain fairy tale, except this is his city (and no roses around). I was relieved with Ingwë when he saw the Maiar guarding his people. I know they are in Valinor but... Ingwë's fleeing is like a nightmare, fear without reason and need to run. And he ran to Cuiviénen! After all these years, he still considers it his home. Of course, given he is running from his home in Aman, there are not many places to go, but still, it's nice. Good thing that the next chapter, hopefully with explanations, is already posted. (Now I know why Glorfindel isn't in this chapter; what a good reason indeed!)

hanci · 14 February 2007 · Chapter 37: An Ancient Lullaby

Homesickness... even Glorfindel has missed Gondolin already, he's not that different from other fosterlings. Glorfindel and Alassiel friendly, what will her anamillë think? :o) Lirulin... that was great. I hope the talking to will help. The change in Lirulin was probably so slow, so gradual that no one noticed. Námo must be relieved now. Námo's lullaby is not Námo's. I love the idea of Eru singing to elves at Cuiviénen, but a lullaby when they are waking? Why not, at least the waking isn't abrupt (terrible!). Nevertheless, what a nice first sound to hear.

Bodkin · 12 February 2007 · Chapter 39: Rescue Mission Into the Past

And, somehow, I'm neither surprised by the fact that Glorfindel was similarly affected, not by his choice of destination. Sad to return to the destroyed Gondolin, though, and walk its streets again. But, perhaps, necessary. Sometimes we need to confront the past before we realise that it is past and we have moved on. Maybe Glorfindel will trail less grief for Gondolin after this.

Bodkin · 12 February 2007 · Chapter 38: Ingwë Alone

Goodness! Ingwe has been very powerfully affected. Although it's very interesting to see his return to Cuivienen. It must be very odd to be as old as Ingwe and yet revert to infancy in the presence of the Valar. Although I suppose he's used to the Valar effect.