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Kitty · 16 July 2007 · Chapter 110: Putting Glorfindel in the Mood

To be honest, I don’t truly know how to think about the matter with Glorfindel. Even if I don’t approve of the challenge, I can still understand him rather well – he felt hurt so much, and after all that happened over the last months, it was a bit too much. I think mostly I feel sorry for him. At least he got to work off his frustration. It says a lot about Glorfindel that it needed four Maiar, I think. And I couldn’t help but snickering about Eönwë recording all these oaths Glorfindel made during the wrestling. Now I only wonder if Glorfindel is truly over the whole matter or if he still holds a grudge.

Kitty · 16 July 2007 · Chapter 109: Further Conversations With the Elder King

"Now I know why Atar returned to Aman... and it had nothing to do with any Doom of Mandos." *ROFL* You know, Finrod could be right! Don’t envy Vorondil for the company of the two most intimidating Valar, even if the outcome was not what he had expected. But what Manwë said to Sador about him made sense – Vorondil is so immature and unsure of himself that he could take the teasing quite wrong, even though he watches the others teasing each other all the time. Well, if he dared to argue with Námo it can’t be too bad. And our dear Vorondil seems to have an issue with folding clothes *snicker*

Nariel · 12 July 2007 · Chapter 108: Artaquetta Findaráto as Manwë

Uh...Sorry! I just forgot to add this to my other review on the same chapter when I had kept reminding myself mentally while writing the main part of the review to add it at the end, but here it is then! Thank you for putting Amarie back in after all my nagging sort of for the past few weeks! I sort of want to see Finrod's actions when meeting up with her again. (Yeah...in a way I have been just counting down for her to yell(maybe not yell) at him...) I cannot wait for the tournament though. Though I keep having a feeling Finrod is going to lose! I just cannot imagine seeing him winning against someone like Glorfindel... Finrod is just, well... TOO much of a scholar type of person (at least to my opinion). Nice Sador! You finally remembered to tell them! I like how you made Sador tell Finrod and Glorfindel about THEIR gift for Amarie right when they were stressed enough. That was the perfect moment Fiondil to add that little note. I cannot wait to arrive at the chapters for the tournaments! Namarie! P.S. this might be my shortest review yet!

Nariel · 12 July 2007 · Chapter 108: Artaquetta Findaráto as Manwë

Hi! I was a bit busy for the past few days (reading and buying quite a few books!), but I do realize you had updated TWO hcapters to your story! Just how does Finrod appear at a place SO fast? It's like he has super speed! It's a good thing Finrod inherited the generous and noble spirit of the Vanyar or else he would be insane by now having to deal with the Valar (...and Namo not least!), being a Reborn, taking up his duties as the ELdest (and only) Prince of the Noldor in Valinor, Glorfindel's recklessness, hostile Eldar, and lastly little Vorondil who happens to cause MANY problems. One more thing to top it off, his oath to make the Valar pay for Elenwe's death! It's nice that you gave the Herald something else to do other than stand before the doors of Ilmarin and wait upon the Elder King. I do like the little flashback you had in the story. It's so emotional and the events were so important but coming at a fast pace at the end of the chapter though that I had to reread the parts over again. You might need to go more in depth with the relationship between Finrod and Elenwe because Finrod's reaction sounds a bit or more than of over-reacting for his cousin's wife even if that cousin was his favorite cousin and also his best friend. I understand that he felt sorrow for all the tragedies and deaths that have been befalling the Noldor and decided to say it after a relative by marriage's death, but there should be more behind their being acquantices for example and that Finrod "saw in her death what the future held for all his loved ones." Fiondil, will you try and add some background info about Elenwe and Finrod? Nice description of the Aurora Borealis!(at least I hope that was an aurora you were describing in the flashback when you described "Above them curtains of lights, mostly red but sometimes other shades, shimmered all around..." Have you ever seen an Aurora though? I wish I could, but I just can't...*Weep* Continue your story please! Namarie!

eiluj · 11 July 2007 · Chapter 108: Artaquetta Findaráto as Manwë

Now that the wool’s dyed, it will need to be carded: another job Glorfindel would rather avoid. Or has the wool already been spun (same wool as before)? No matter -- I don’t think Míriel is eager for Vorondil to do anything else for her. Míriel’s making a career of entertaining and feeding kings.... Now all she needs is Olwë and she’ll have collected the whole set.... Hm. Finrod’s been reminded about Amarië twice in one day, and she’s coming soon. Poor Vorondil was promised he *didn’t* have to meet with the Valar. Well, at least (apparently) Sador will be there to hold his hand. Aha! It’s the tale of “Vorondil and the Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very *Wet* Day.” [Possibly obscure children’s-librarianish reference to Judith Viorst’s classic picture book about Alexander’s very bad day.] So now there are additional items to worry/puzzle about -- besides the previous ones: a) whatever reason Ingwion is arriving after everyone else; b) who wins the tournament; c) what happens when the Bad Guys attack; d) the circumstances under which Glorfindel will next see the cloak-pin he made. Now add: 1) whatever Manwë will say to Sador and Vorondil [probably telling them to keep out of the way if mayhem breaks out at the tourney]; 2) Finrod and Amarië [difficult, as Finrod is so busy]; 3) Glorfindel and Ingwë [possibly this afternoon]; 4) what Finrod will do as full-fledged Fëanturinildo [presumably that is a ways in the future; I am imagining something fairly spectacular which shocks Finrod as much as everyone else when he hears himself saying it].

hanci · 9 July 2007 · Chapter 108: Artaquetta Findaráto as Manwë

Finished at last! Alassiel's fate is interesting - Finrod is inventive. Good thing Vorondil isn't allowed a sword yet, he really attracts disaster. - I realise my comments are a bit one-sided, no serious, deeper parts of the story touched. It's easier for me to remark on humorous part because it's the good mood that gets me reviewing; when sad or concerned I need more time to process the feelings... and by then the computer is long since off. - Sorry, my cat is hogging the keyboard, it's time to go.

hanci · 9 July 2007 · Chapter 96: Mallessë Míretanoron

I really, really didn't want to review so soon, but Míriel is sooo good! And those comments of Glorfindel! - sorely needed to distract from the serious rest.

hanci · 9 July 2007 · Chapter 95: Apology and Punishment

It's still as wonderful as in the beginning. Of course, it's a bit more difficult to keep track now (especially after a longer absence), with more people we care about, but it would be pity to miss all those ideas and plots! You are brilliant in picturing different celebrations, binding them together by such details as Námo missing among other Valar...

Kitty · 9 July 2007 · Chapter 108: Artaquetta Findaráto as Manwë

Hmmm ... the Noldóran is taking Glorfindel to meet the other two kings? Now I wonder how our favourite balrog-slayer will take this meeting. Somehow I fear that will not go without some incident ... but maybe I’m too suspicious. Vorondil is a danger to civilization? Finrod could be right *snicker* After the end of this chapter I strongly recommend to keep Vorondil away from any fluids, if even a Maia is not enough to keep an eye on him and him out of trouble! Poor elfling, that was more embarrassment than he can bear in one day! Oh, and I *truly* hope Námo was mistaken and Vorondil doesn’t have to die – somehow I get the feeling if Finrod was threatened, Vorondil would throw himself between his master and any foe. How very sensible of Sador to tell the others finally about their gift for Amarië! What would they do without Sador? And he even helped to convince Vorondil to go out in spite of his ... uh... coloured state. Though I have the feeling he was at least partly to blame for Vorondil getting Ingwion’s clothes wet *grin* I truly wonder why Manwë wants to talk to them, too. As for his meeting with Finrod ... it is unimaginable that Námo designed his symbol *so* early. One truly wonders how much he knows about the future ... it’s a bit ... intimidating – can’t find a better word. And the oath was another turn I’d not expected. Considering the circumstances, it was certainly understandable Finrod uttered it in the first place, but still ... what a shock for him to be confronted with it, as he up to then didn’t even remember it! At least Finrod found a way out of it, and for that I am glad. And even more glad I am this was Finrod and not Glorfindel, as I don’t think Glorfindel could have coped with something like that just now. Can’t wait for more!

Kitty · 9 July 2007 · Chapter 107: Dyed-in-the-Wool

"And, of course, the fact that you might therefore avoid having to help me never occurred to you, did it, Glorfindel?" Yes, that was exactly what I thought! It’s clear Glorfindel knew what Míriel planned for the day, after all. Arafinwë gave Ingwë a piece of his mind, too! :-D I am very pleased, as I still think it was rather unfair to Glorfindel what he did, no matter how useful the whole thing was. Love the idea that Glorfindel was the one to work on Vairë’s commission, as that is quite a honour, and I have a pretty good idea who will wear the pin. Our dear Vorondil now had had more punishment than he deserves, with his hair and skin dyed yellow *lol* What did the poor elfling do to you to deserve *that*?

eiluj · 9 July 2007 · Chapter 107: Dyed-in-the-Wool

Well, I’m not as imaginative as you are. My idea for Vorondil’s punishment was that since Glorfindel will need someone to help him with his armor during the tournament, Vorondil would have a ball doing that (and would drive everyone crazy talking about it). Instead, you’ve dyed him yellow and invented dark hair with blond highlights.... And with that short haircut ... oh, good grief, it’s worse than I thought! Punk adolescent elves in Valinor ... *winces* "Well, if anyone deserves being attacked by an elfling, it’s certainly Lord Lassezel" -- Not merely attacked by an elfling, but *subdued* by an elfling! He may never live it down. Re. the dyeing, since Míriel had 2 kettles going, I’m assuming yellow wasn’t the only color she was dyeing, which means you missed a wonderful opportunity to turn Vorondil bi-colored.... Punk elves indeed.... Glad to hear that Arafinwë scolded Ingwë. Ah -- I’ve just reread Glorfindel’s meeting with Eönwë. Thanks for the hint.

Nariel · 9 July 2007 · Chapter 107: Dyed-in-the-Wool

This chapter was great! I can't believe it is your 107th chpter though. That really proves your dedication to your stories! I really do love it when I come a upon an author who writes a lot, but also has very few or no grammar mistakes. It's really hard to find those types of authors sometimes, but on this site it is SO easy. My favorite part here had to be where Vorondil is exclaiming over how soaked he is with dye and how his Master is going to kill him! It was so funny; I could easily picture what you probably wanted your readers to see when they read that passage of your story. I am taking it that the Laurelaiquamire is for Mandos. 1) Earlier Vaire you said something about Vaire making a green cloak for her husband, so that means it will match the outfit. 2) An owl is often the symbol of Athena, the goddess of wisdom in Greek Mythology; and Mandos is sometimes referred to in the HOME books as Mandos the Wise. Am I right? OR, could it be for Yavanna who will then somehow give it to Olorin who will give it to Galadriel as the Elessar stone? I am taking that from the HOME books if you are wondering. Just wondering is the reader supposed to see the Laurelaiquamire as a greenish-goldish stone? Namarie!

ellie · 9 July 2007 · Chapter 108: Artaquetta Findaráto as Manwë

Wasn't expecting the whole oath thing, though loved the ending with the most recent oath to be added. What an odd and interesting and sometimes painful job oath recorder must be! Your portrayal of the majesty of Eonwe and Manwe is exquisite and almost tangible. Poor Finrod always having to cope with so many things from the past that keep cropping up just things seem to be settling down, but I guess that once he reaches a certain point in his healing he is ready for more healing to take place. I do have to wonder though is perhaps Namo misread what he foresaw concerning Vorondil - I think that that kid will send those around him to Mandos loooong before he goes there himself - if he ever does. Keep up the most excellent work!

Ellie · 9 July 2007 · Chapter 107: Dyed-in-the-Wool

Glorfindel is cruel in the whole wool dying punishment, but very clever as well. I love it that he was caught in the act of "delegating: the nasty duty as a punishment for another. Too funny! Arafinwe is an excellent atar. I really like the the way you portray him. The part with the stone was exquisite as was the lesson in being capable of creating as well as destroying. Wasn't expecting the one who comissioned the piece to be who ti was though. Intersting! Poor Vorondil with the whole dye incident. What a wonderful story this is!

Beruthiels Cat · 9 July 2007 · Chapter 108: Artaquetta Findaráto as Manwë

Awesome. In light of what has just happened between Finrod and the Valar I have to wonder if a former playmate is about to make an appearance. Manwe's interest in Vorondil is also cause for speculation-hmmm...I can easily see him sacrificing himself for Finrod's wellbeing if circumstances warranted such a choice, at least in Vorondil's way of thinking. He is indeed very young... BC

Beruthiels Cat · 9 July 2007 · Chapter 107: Dyed-in-the-Wool

Intriguing! Still loving this story...and wondering who the pin may be for, although I have my suspicions, lol... BC

eiluj · 4 July 2007 · Chapter 106: Catching Up

“I told Ingwë that you were likely to do something ... precipitous, given half the chance.” -- There’s an understatement! I’m sorry to see poor Glorfindel is still so distressed, and I'm still unhappy with Ingwë about that. I’ve an idea of what Glorfindel might have in mind for Vorondil’s punishment. If I’m right, Vorondil will be thrilled. So can Finrod see where Manveru is, or is he inferring that the normal place would be behind Glorfindel?

eiluj · 3 July 2007 · Chapter 105: A Gathering of Heroes

So Finrod has ensured that the Bad Guys can’t break into the encampment or shoot into it from the trees. That just means they’ll have to do something *else*! I’m no tactician, but I postulate a bit of mayhem at the end of the tourney, when everyone’s tired and some are injured.... Maybe when everyone’s attention is focused on the same spot.... Ingwion arriving at the last minute -- Hm. Wondering what that portends (not so much for Ingwion, but why the sneaky author needed to have him arrive separately from the majority). Glorfindel still pulling lint out of his hair from carding wool -- That made me laugh, as originally and etymologically “lint” pertains to linen or flax. [Have the Valar been exploring genetic engineering? Does Aman have sheep that grow linsey-woolsey?] Arafinwë was dismounting with the intention of wiping the ground with the insolent elf -- Good for him! And I rather regret that we didn’t get to see it.... [Hm -- now we have a fancy password to post reviews! Have spiders or bots or AI's or whatever been trying to review stories here?]

Nariel · 2 July 2007 · Chapter 106: Catching Up

Magnificent description! I could imagine every little bit of the tent. From the rugs to the firepit. Finrod sure is sneaky. Advising Ingwe to take advantage of Glorfindel's foolishness to turn him into bait. Ooohhh....Finrod better stear clear of Glorfindel whenever someone brings up the subject of GLorfindel's thralldom for a yeni at the least...Even though Finrod is my favorite character, I think that Glorfindel has FULL rights to beat Finrod for takling and dealing about him behind his back. Finrod had no right to do what he did no matter how much good it might do. He and Ingwe should at least have forewarned Glorfindel about what they were going to do... *Sheesh...What does it take to get some respect around here?* Why wouldn't GLorfindel rebraid his hair for the New YEar and the Tournament? They are just braids since he is already a full-fledged warrior. Also what was GLorfindel talking about when he asked Finrod whom he would have given him to? Who is the person he did not want to be given to anyway? I agree though that Finrod would never hurt any person who is below him and that is basically all the Eldar of Eldamar unless they REALLY deserved it. He just isn't that type of elf. When you research the elven descendants of Finwe(not counting the half-elven) you see that there are different qualities that define each of them. This is going to be in Quenya though. Maitamo, Tyelcormo, Carnistir,the 2 Ambarussas, Findekano, even Aredhel, Angarato,and Aikanaro are all basically warriors. The best of them being probably Maitamo, FIndekano,Angarato,and Aikanaro are always considered strong and fierce in battle. Whereas in the other group are Turakano, Findarato, and Alatariel who are better known as the diplomats and *the wise*; those who do not like to fight with use of arms. Yeah, I guess that is all to back up that Finrod wouldn't beat up Vorondil. *WOW! I think I need to shut up, but I am very sorry I just CAN'T!* WHAT IS Glorfindel planning for him and Vorndil to do. Is it a plan to take revenge on Finrod? Or anyone else for that matter? OR am I just trying TOO hard snooping around your papers? I am going to take a wild guess though that it has to do with the tournament or the New Year like everything else is. Once the tournament ends it will be SO much easier to predict because it will most likely take place at something big and that leaves the New YEar, which gives moi a higher chance of being correct! *Yay Me!!!!* How powerful is Finrod now? Could he equal a Maia's? That is only because something keeps telling me that an elf gets stronger after coming from Mandos. Another, was Alassiel born during the Tree Years? It's so confusing with ages...*Moan* Okay, this will be the last bit. Will, which I do hope, find out what they were discussing at the end? Or were they just 'Catching Up' on what had happened to them while seperated? Does it have anything to do with Prince Ingwion? Namarie!!!!!!!! P.S. Fiondil, SEE!!!! >_< *Look* This review is not like my one with all the afterthoughts!!! HA-Ha!!!

Kitty · 2 July 2007 · Chapter 106: Catching Up

*sigh* It’s as I had feared – Glorfindel didn’t take it very well to learn how much Finrod actually knew and that he was the one to advice Ingwë to use Glorfindel as a bait once again. I am glad Finrod didn’t allow him to walk away like that. To be reminded of the mólanoldor through his thralldom ... poor Glorfindel. But it was absolutely sweet of Vorondil to go to Glorfindel and try to comfort him. Now I’m curious what Glorfindel has in mind for him. And it is nice to know the friends are together again and have time to catch up on everything.

Kitty · 2 July 2007 · Chapter 105: A Gathering of Heroes

Ah, finally the tournament! *beams* Glad to know at least Haldir’s mother is showing sense and welcoming her son back – I hope his father did use his exile well to think about his behaviour. And it’s nice that Mithlas is with them, too. Not to mention Vorondil reunited with his parents. I can imagine the encampment so well – all these tents, banners flying, and all ... must be wonderful to be there. It as fun to watch Finrod taking over. He is perfectly right, of course – if the remaining baddies who are still free do plan anything, this large gathering would be a good occasion, so more guards are certainly no luxury. Why do I get the feeling if anything is about to happen, the Amaneldi have to rely on the Tol Eressëans for their own safety, as they themselves are not primed for it? I’d not minded if Arafinwë had wiped the ground with this arrogant Vanyar, but the reaction of Finrod and the others wasn’t bad, either. And Vorondil ... *shakes head* Honestly, if you’d have told me around the trial he would be so overeager to defend Finrod, I’d questioned your sanity *grin* He’s a sweet elfling, and somehow I’m not convinced he deserves punishment at all - he was trying to protect Finrod, after all. Even if he shouldn’t have attacked the elf, I don’t mind the beating Lassezel got. He was rather condescending, and he should have guessed from the way others obeyed him that Finrod is no common elf and have been more cautious.

Nariel · 2 July 2007 · Chapter 105: A Gathering of Heroes

Finally! Thank you so-so much! Muchas gracias! You have updated and the tournament has come at last! Who will win? What though is the prize? Does it mean that elf goes back to Endor? It just came to me, HOW and WHEN will Glorfindel go back to Endor? Fiondil, I do hope it is not soon though. I am ECSTATIC about this story! It would actually have to be in 2nd place in my Top5 favorite fanfics. I liked the description at the beginning. It was easy to imagine the gray, rainy weather turn to sunny fine weather fit for the tournament. I am glad there is a tournament for it will force the elves in a way to get to actually know those, in particular the Amaneldi, whom they have treated unfairly and cruelly toward the Reborn and the Tol Eresseans. *_* AAAAWWWW... How sweet! Vorondil who I just remembered is only an elfling gets to be reunited for a short while with his parents. And ALassiel has changed immensly. When you first introduced her when GLorfindel went to Vanyamar for the first time to now where she is under the care of her older cousin. Finrod is making great use of Vorondil. HE now has his own washer and dry cleaner for FREE!!!!!! Now isn't that useful? I wonder shouldn't he learn that chore because I am sure Amarie (If they wed) does NOT want to be the one taking care of the laundry all the time till DAgor Dagorath. He would probably annoy her to death with his ignorance of housecleaning. I do hope though that his image of elleth is better because he does not seem like the type of elf to think Elleth BELOW him. What's your opinion? My favorite part here would have to be where the VAnyarin lord grabs Findarato's arm and Finrod reacts by pulling a hidden knife and putting it at the Lord's throat. I could see it clearly when I read the words. ANother reason I like this scene is because Vorondil comes up and starts beating and shouting at the Vanyarin Lord. It's SO adorable. I do have to disgree with Finrod on one thing and that is punishing Vorondil no matter how fun the punishment might end up. It is unjust. All Vorondil was doing was PROTECTING his MASTER from someone who was trying to HURT his MASTER. What came next though was funny. When Ingwe asks his fellow Kings if they have anything to say hten Arafinwe sort of randomly asks his son " 'What's a double patrol?' " It's funny at least to me because when you read the previous lines it comes out a bit...well... different... from what the reader expected to hear from the Noldoran. Did Sador tell at the end line that he had given Amarie a Begetting Day Gift while he was off frolicking (just kidding...) in Lorien? Namarie...

Radbooks · 1 July 2007 · Chapter 106: Catching Up

Oh, very tough for Glorfindel to hear that Finrod had a part in or at least knew that something might happen with him AND that he would have let him be a thrall if it had been the only way to catch the others. One of the tough things about being a king, though I suspect this might be part of his responsibility as a servant of Irmo and Namo. Vorondil trying to comfort Glorfindel was priceless and made me smile and it seemed to work, which was the best thing. :) I'm glad that the group of them had the chance to finally have some time together!

Radbooks · 1 July 2007 · Chapter 105: A Gathering of Heroes

I do so love when Finrod becomes 'kingly'. :) That his father, uncle, and grandfather are all non-plussed by it makes it even better - I especially liked that Arafinwe was amazed that Finrod didn't need to monitor his people to make sure they were doing his bidding. It tells you that he needs to, which is interesting. In dark and desperate times you have to depend on people completely and you can't be watching them every step of the way - what's the point of that? You may as well do it yourself! Alassiel and Vorondil are going to have an 'interesting' time at the tournament and I don't envy either one of them, especially Alassiel as no one knows what has gone on with her and I doubt she'll want to tell them. Looking forward to seeing how that plays out. :)

Nikara · 1 July 2007 · Chapter 106: Catching Up

Aww.. The boys are all back together again. I can't wait to see what Glorfindel's idea of a punishment is. That should be fun.