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Fimbrethil · 31 December 2025 · Chapter 18: Rohirric Remedy

Oops! I meant “I thought Éomund went with Indis, Faramir, and Co.”

Fimbrethil · 30 December 2025 · Chapter 99999: Cast of characters in order of appearance

I am not exactly sure how this is organized, but again, Éomund is brother-in-law of Théoden King.

Fimbrethil · 30 December 2025 · Chapter 99999: Extensive Author's Notes

More Angbor, yes! Éomund, I guess, is like the SoE in that when they see orcs they forget all else and fight with a vengeance. But what will that do for the Men (or Elves) under them—say Théodred, Estel? Now, what will happen in 3019, especially with Théodred and Boromir (and Denethor) already dead?

Fimbrethil · 30 December 2025 · Chapter 9999: Epilogue

“I must go to Edoras, Boromir, as heir, and do my duty to my people. I will not, however, forget Faramir, nor be inconstant in my attention to his welfare. However, Indis is with him - and he has his Uncle Imrahil, who is most devoted to him. I am putting aside my own regret at not being able to be next to Faramir for the rest of his life, but understand that, even if you still lived, you would not be able to do that either. Duty calls us to different paths.” Ah, I see. That explains much. And I was wondering what happened to Théodred. he isn’t mentioned in the last chapter or two. “I liked Aragorn very much. You would have too.” T. doesn’t know he is Aragorn, I think, and I suppose Boromir does eventually love Aragorn, and presumably liked Thorongil in a two year old sort of way. Oh! He burns the letter! That actually makes it more meaningful, somehow. I do like them dying within a day of each other though, especially if they were brothers-in-arms and good friends.

Fimbrethil · 30 December 2025 · Chapter 47: There Is Comfort Here

“Ask them!” Erkenbrand said simply. He stooped over, picked up one of the bound guards with one hand, and thrust his face directly into the man’s. “Are you for Denethor or for that other scoundrel?” Elrohir laughed aloud. “Well put. Now, if he has half a brain, he will know which way he should speak, if only to save his life!” Heheh…why am I begining to think Erkenbrand is my favorite character? Ho, Borondir will take Ragnhild to Minas Tirith! “Erkenbrand walked with them until he saw Éomund. “My Lord!” he cried in distress. “I am recovering under Siriondil’s care,” Éomund said quietly. “Do not be concerned. Sit with me, Captain, and tell me how you aligned yourself with such as these.” so that is how that meeting went. “Aragorn turned from the Rohirrim and greeted his brothers warmly. “Now, I am most happy to have you meet the Lady Indis, woman of Gondor, daughter to Ecthelion, and sister to Denethor.” The Elves stood and bowed. “Much is told of your wisdom, Lady Indis,” Elrohir said quietly.” Nice. Faramir!

Fimbrethil · 30 December 2025 · Chapter 45: In The Arms of Friends

I was just thinking how many people will you kill off that we actually like? Not Elladan! Wow, *someone* is in love with Ragnhild.

Fimbrethil · 30 December 2025 · Chapter 44: To The Rescue

When we began this journey, I rode behind Estel. I am unsure how one holds onto an Elf?” Elrohir, despite his concern, laughed aloud. “The same, Captain, the same.” hehheh ho! Someone recognizes Thorongil!

Fimbrethil · 30 December 2025 · Chapter 41: Healing and Horror

“He began softly singing a lullaby that Finduilas had taught him many years before. His mind wandered to Minas Tirith, to the garden off her chambers, to the gentle sun filtering through the trees, to the exotic smell of transplanted flowers from Dol Amroth that wafted in the sweet summer’s breeze, to the touch of a boy’s hand on his cheek. Tears fell silently. Boromir, beloved child, full of joy, wonder, life and laughter, was dead. His mind reeled as he finally had a moment to open his heart to the grief that he had pushed to the back of his consciousness, the grief that now flooded him, body and spirit. He had placed his focus entirely on the journey to bring healing to Faramir. Now, in the quiet warmth of the cave, he paused and reflected.” awwww. “In deference to her husband, Finduilas, who had been friend, had severed all ties, and Aragorn was no longer allowed to visit and hold Boromir. Of all the sorrows that had assailed him in his long life, the loss of the love of these three hurt as much as the loss of his mother.” Oh oh! …and his father, somehow, I am sure.

Fimbrethil · 30 December 2025 · Chapter 39: Hope Is Kindled

“I have a further errand for you. Ragnhild is in Tarnost. She must be told of Dagnir’s death. Lord Dagnir’s son must be arrested, if she believes he is part of the conspiracy. Take three companies with you; I am uncertain of the force you will meet, and arrest Lord Minastir, take their holdings and place them in trust for the Steward, then return to me. Also, take Angbor with you. Once you have accomplished this task, send him to Edhellend. He need not return here with you.” oh! Well, they will join with the others!

Fimbrethil · 30 December 2025 · Chapter 37: Not Dead?

Well, Théodred and co. are in good hands. So are Éomund and Faramir.

Fimbrethil · 30 December 2025 · Chapter 35: Action Begun

Oh oh! No! Or are those Gorlim and..

Fimbrethil · 30 December 2025 · Chapter 32: Despair Most Deep

“‘I am only an hour’s ride from Calenhad. If I push myself, I might be able to make it there by midnight. If the leg will hold me. If I do not bleed out and faint. If I am not followed and killed on the spot.’ He dug his fingers into his palms. Hysteria threatened to envelope him again. ‘I am tired and hungry and afraid. It will pass,’ he told himself.” hmmmm. Faramir! I hope not! “Elladan, sensing the smell of Orcs, forgot Aragorn’s promise to Elrohir; all memory vanished but the pain-filled face of his mother. His skin prickled as anger and hatred drove all other thought from him. Clenching his teeth, he swung his sword slowly in an arc, preparing to avenge her once again. He began to shake as battle lust filled his fëa. The predator stepped forward, the Elf left behind. He had become a killing machine again.” Uhoh. Especially id it is Éomund.

Fimbrethil · 30 December 2025 · Chapter 31: Hope Beyond Hope

“Swearing to himself, he continued on. ‘If the Orcs smell the fresh blood, all hope will vanish.’ He crawled over the body of the dead Orc and breathed a small sigh of relief. Tacky black Orc blood covered his hand. He wiped it on his wound. It would probably become infected but he didn’t care. He needed the coppery scent of human blood to be erased. And foul-smelling Orc blood was best.” hmmmm

Fimbrethil · 30 December 2025 · Chapter 29: Death Is Not So Bitter

Oh! So Aragorn felt that fight? “We will be in Gondor’s domain soon, but the problem will be the same for my people.” Erkenbrand crooked an eyebrow at that. ‘His people?’ He noted Aragorn’s eyes were looking into the distance. ‘I thought this man was from the north.’ Elrohir took in a quick breath. He had hoped, when he heard Aragorn’s words, that the captain would not notice. But he had. Aragorn’s anxiety was great to have let that information slip. Elladan nodded at his brother’s grimace. “Estel,” he called. But Aragorn’s thoughts were not on the plains of Rohan.” I dare say. “hoping that an opportunity would arise to help Indis, Théoden and Faramir.” I think you mean Théodred.

Fimbrethil · 30 December 2025 · Chapter 28: All Is Lost

"Let them come," the Prince of the Mark said.” I do like Éomund and Théodred fighting together, but Théodred’s father said that 20 or 30 years later to bad results. Well, I guess they eventually won. Not here though,—Gorlim? Éomund? Théodred? Indis?

Fimbrethil · 30 December 2025 · Chapter 27: A New Ally

“Long have I been stationed in the Eastfold. I trust my men at the Mering. May we not stop there, stay for one night with Faramir in a real bed, eat warm food and refresh ourselves before we turn north?” hmm Uhoh. More orcs.

Fimbrethil · 30 December 2025 · Chapter 26: Division and Doggerel

Yet, I hold great hope for this journey. I too have heard of a healer in the north.” “There are such rumours in the Mark?” “Aye. But the journey is long, Indis. We must turn north when we leave Edoras. The direction we seek is west of the Misty Mountains.” “That far?” she gasped. “That far. But we will change horses in Edoras and make good time.” ”We cannot go to Edoras. We must turn north at the Mering Stream.” He paused before answering. “I understand your need for haste, Indis, but we need more supplies and fresh horses if ever we are to reach our goal.” “Horses and supplies will be useless if Faramir is dead!” she hissed. “There are horses there, Rohirric horses at the garrison, bred to travel these snowy plains.” I see. Nice. “Take your nephew and go to Edoras. I will not! I will starve, freeze to death, before I take Faramir to Edoras. Aye! He will die! But I will do everything in my power to find this healer quickly. Even if I meet him with a corpse on my hands!” Ohhhhh. “He took her arms and held her tightly. Teeth clenched, he whispered, “Faramir will not be the only corpse with this folly you plan. Do you call me coward? Do you say I fear death? I do not fear death; I fear haste and rash judgment. Faramir need not die without comfort. In Edoras, he will have comfort. He will die amongst friends.” Hmmm…and I thought Éomund was hasty and rash to an extent. “A Hobbit is a cinquain type of poetry,*” Elladan fluidly lied. “It is poetry taught to the youngest Elves. Very simple. Let me make one up for you, Captain Erkenbrand. Now, let me see…. First a noun. That is easy enough - Captain. Then the description. Another easy task – Wise while wary. Oh! I like that. Next is an action. He protects and forgives.” “Aragorn smiled at him. “He does indeed, Elladan. And we thank you, Captain for forgiving our rash actions, our subterfuge.” “Uh-hmmm,” Elladan cleared his throat. “I am not finished. Now, a feeling. And fills us with feelings of shame. Does that satisfy you, Estel? Last – a synonym of captain. Commander! That does it. Here you are, Captain Erkenbrand. A Hobbit Cinquain for you. Captain Wise while wary He protects and forgives And fills us with feelings of shame Commander.” Elrohir clapped quietly. “Excellent Hobbit Cinquain. The best I have ever heard.” He bowed his head, keeping his laughter as much to himself as he could.” hahaha.

Fimbrethil · 30 December 2025 · Chapter 25: Risks Taken

Erkenbrand is coming with them? He will be doubly glad to see Éomund and Théodred. Ragnhild’s plan is interesting.

Fimbrethil · 30 December 2025 · Chapter 24: Trust Repaired

“After a little gentle persuasion, the captain showed me their supply tent. The horses are ready and packed.” Ah. “He is a good man. Forgive us.” Erkenbrand snarled. “I will not.” I hope he will, when he realizes what they are doing. If not, Éomund or Théodred (or Théoden?) might make him forgive them. “It is still against my king’s law, but I will do it. Though I be sentenced to death, I will help you. Still, I will not allow my men to be part of this. They cannot be punished for my actions. We will play false and say that you are indeed taking me against my will; they will be protected by that.” Well, at least he knows what they are doing. “Do any of your men read?,” Aragorn asked. At Erkenbrand’s nod, he stood and grabbed parchment and wrote, ‘We are taking your captain as a hostage. Do not follow us, else he die.’ He used a knife to stab the note onto the table. “That should protect them and might keep them from following us. At least for a time. Come, now, we must be away. Night is here and time is not our ally.” I guess that will work.

Fimbrethil · 30 December 2025 · Chapter 23: Danger Lies Ahead

“Erkenbrand is the key,” Elrohir whispered. “Take him with us and they will not follow, fearing for his safety. If somehow I can persuade him that he will be released as soon as we reach the borders of Gondor…” hmmm “Listen to me, Estel. He has visited this tent many times since we were brought here. We have spoken often while you lay asleep, healing. I tell you, I trust this man. There is a goodness about him. Besides, if we escape with horses, he will bear the punishment. I cannot let that happen. I will not be able to persuade him to come with us willingly, but once we are gone from here, I believe I can persuade him to try not to flee. He has shown great wisdom and honour in his speech.” hmmm maybe. “Aragorn lay back on the cot, his hand covering his eyes. He knew the Rohirrim to be a wise and honourable people, but duty came first. Erkenbrand’s sense of duty would not allow them to escape. But perhaps his sense of honour would allow him to accept his fate once they brought him with them, allow him to travel with them without their having to fear treachery.” I see. huh. That is rather a bad omen if you believe such things. But then, none of the SoE have died.

Fimbrethil · 30 December 2025 · Chapter 22: Suspended

“We will turn north at the Mering Stream. Head towards Fangorn Forest. I only know the healer is said to live in the North.” Smiling, she said quietly, “The North is a very large place.” hmmm

Fimbrethil · 30 December 2025 · Chapter 21: Spies

“If only I had not sent Éomund to Pelargir. I knew Indis wanted to leave as soon as possible. Now they are separated when I wanted his full strength with her. But who could have known the woman would set out so quickly!’ Ah. That us where he was. Ah yes, the healers and Targon to go with Ragnhild, good! Lol she is quite the spy!

Fimbrethil · 30 December 2025 · Chapter 20: Ally or Enemy

“None questioned him at the various garrisons, for was he not newly wed to Théoden King's sister and messenger of Rohan. The orders he carried were signed by Prince Imrahil himself, stating that all aid should be given to him, and fresh horses supplied to him.” Ah, so he is married to her. "It was the wizard, as far as I can tell. The cold, the shock, something freed me. I no longer can feel that presence. I am free." He leaned back and smiled broadly. “We may now continue our journey." Nice. “He is very young, but has wisdom. I like him and would spend time with him, if we were able. I know that is not possible, but mayhap in the future our paths will meet again." Elrohir smiled again. "However, the challenge will be to either sneak away from this camp with stolen horses, or leave the Riddermark completely." Yes and hmmm.

Fimbrethil · 30 December 2025 · Chapter 19: Ice and Snow

“He stripped his cloak off and let it drop. Now he knew which way was up. He kicked off his boots and, sadly, clawed at the belt that held his sword and scabbard, released the buckle and let them fall. Taking off his tunic, he kicked furiously, his arms desperately reaching for the surface. His hands were growing numb; he only had a moment left.” That is sad. Erkenbrand! “Erkenbrand stood stunned. ‘Something is amiss. Elves do not ask for help.’ He put his hand to the pommel of his sword and stood straighter.” No they don’t. “What manner of help need you?” he called back. “We found a man fallen into a lake. We have rescued him, but he needs warmth and dry clothes. Please,” Elladan begged as he came near the camp, “please help us.” Hmmmm. Disguising it, I see. I wonder should he have said he was not of Rohan? *Whistle* Théodred is growing up. He would have made a good king, with Boromir (or Faramir) beside him. However he did his best at the Fords. And is Gorlim really letting Théodred drive?

Fimbrethil · 29 December 2025 · Chapter 18: Rohirric Remedy

*me trying to figure out why Aragorn’s horse uses a bit* “Imrahil waited for him to approach the Chair, waited for the anger to subside, waited for the Captain of Rohan to recover his comportment. He noted wryly that the Guard allowed the man to bring his spear into the Great Hall.” heheh, but I thought Rome went with Indis and Faramir and co. Ooh, he will be able to catch up with them! “Imrahil laughed himself. “If you would take a few more of Gondor’s finest with you when you follow her, I would be most grateful. Once you are on the road, she cannot turn them back.” Ah. Might slow Éomund down, though. “Unfortunately, there are none here who I can offer to you, but the Captain of Amon Dîn has courage and his loyalty to Lord Denethor was complete. Go to Amon Dîn first, take these orders with you to a Captain Durahil, and he will follow you, along with whomever he chooses. I think that is the wisest course.” Maybe you will find some of yours there.