Armariel
· 21 October 2006
· Chapter 1: The First Night
Awww a new one! I like that it starts out in Elrond's p.o.v. (But I wonder how long they stay in the room before he shoos them out for making a fuss!;))
I look forward to seeing what comes next...........
~~~{~@
Author's reply
Hannon le, my dear! Would you like being Elrond trying to get the hobbits to leave their dearest? I wouldn't!
Namarie, God bless, Antane :)
harrowcat
· 21 October 2006
· Chapter 1: The First Night
This is a great start Antane. I like the way that you are showing the hobbits but not naming them yet.
Author's reply
Hantanyel, my dear harrowcat. I originally was going to do this as an expansion of Children of Iluvatar but then it kinda just grew into its own tale. :)
Namarie, God bless, Antane
Althea
· 20 October 2006
· Chapter 1: The First Night
What a great beginning! I like the fact that you have not only Sam, but also Merry and Pippin present as Elrond tries to save Frodo. Sam's comforting Frodo as Elrond begins his work is especially touching. I am looking forward to reading more of this story.
Author's reply
Hannon le, Althea for your kind review! Sam is love itself.
Namarie, God bless, Antane :)
lotrgirl1415
· 20 October 2006
· Chapter 1: The First Night
*feelsstupid* I mean I cant wait till the next UPDATE.
ugh....sorry!:(
--Katie
lotrgirl1415
· 20 October 2006
· Chapter 1: The First Night
I am very excited about this plot!can't wait till the next review!
I heart u Antane!
--Katie
Author's reply
Thank you so much, Katie. Glad you are enjoying! :)
Namarie, God bless, Antane