Yours to command by Lialathuveril
Larner · 26 February 2007 · Chapter 18: Aftermath
Poor Eomer--when he finds out what the dear butterfly has done he's going to be totally livid, and I think ready to slice HER into little pieces. Very likely!
Author's reply
I'm not sure if you can slice butterflies into pieces ;-) But I agree, Eomer is going to be tempted to do so! Unfortunately it will take him a while to get in possession of all the facts... Lia
Eilenach · 25 February 2007 · Chapter 18: Aftermath
Now here's a perfect example of how vague communication gets couples in trouble. When Lothiriel says, "How can you ask such a thing after what you did last night?" she is thinking of his supposed betrothal to Wilwarin, while Eomer is thinking of his very forward actions with Lothiriel at the river. It is just maddening to see where this is taking each of them!
Author's reply
Oh yes, and that's only the beginning of it! And the funny thing about it is that each of them thinks they're being perfectly clear - it happens in real life all the time. It just goes to show that not what is said is important, but how we interpret it. You might find the next chapter frustrating...
Unheard Chime · 24 February 2007 · Chapter 18: Aftermath
I am one of those lurking readers that has been following this story carefully for a few weeks now but hasn't ever reviewed. But I have to tell you, I really am enjoying your story. It is very creative and original, and well-written. I'm really looking forward to finding out what happens next; hopefully Eomer and Lothiriel will get this whole mess sorted out soon, since I don't think Wilwarin will be able to keep her deception hidden for much longer :) You should have Wilwarin eaten by a warg... except that would be a terrible thing to do to the warg.
Author's reply
Well, congratulations on un-lurking ;-) It's always nice to hear from a new reader and I'm pleased to hear you're enjoying the ride. But I'm afraid the whole mess will get even more tangled up, before things get better (a lot better though). I like animals, even wargs, so it looks like Wilwarin will survive the experience! Lia
Cornelia · 24 February 2007 · Chapter 18: Aftermath
That´s great! Eomer has finally realized who´s the right one for him, but he still has some reservations. As soon as he finds out what Wilwarin (a really poisonous butterfly!) has done he will be as steaming mad as Imrahil already is. I don´t want to be in Wilwarin´s shoes when he confronts her! And I hope he does it in public! Please update soon, I´m waiting! *jumps up and down*
Author's reply
Hello Cornelia, yes, I think he would be steaming mad. Unfortunately it will take him a while to figure things out - nothing like a few misunderstandings to add excitement to your life! The butterfly will eventually get her comeuppance, though, I promise. Lia
Alison H · 24 February 2007 · Chapter 18: Aftermath
Ahh, poor Eomer, to have Lothiriel turn on him like that! Poor Lothiriel, to have her hopes dashed.I know both Imrahil and Amorothos are steaming mad at Eomer.....but mad will not be the word to describe Eomer's mood when he finds out the sordid truth! Wilwarin better make herself scarce if she doesn't want to be on the receiving end of Eomer's wrath! Oh, but I WANT her to receive her just deserts.I want her to be completely humiliated...and I'm sure you'll deliver that scene soon.Wilwarin better avoid Eowyn, too! I can't wait to read more of this wonderful story.Update soon, Lia.
Author's reply
Yes, there is an uncomfortable time ahead for everybody concerned. But Lothiriel's reaction might not be quite what 'Lady' Wilwarin had in mind - no doubt she expected her to slink away quietly. And Eomer is not one to give up easily either! I'm not sure about Wilwarin getting her just deserts soon, but she will get them eventually, I promise! Off to do more writing... ;-) Lia
Cuthalion · 24 February 2007 · Chapter 18: Aftermath
“How can you ask such a thing after what you did last night,” she snapped, withdrawing her hand from his and taking a step back. “Don’t touch me!” Oh dear. And of course he must misinterpret this. Poor man. And poor Lothiriel! *still wants to murder Wilwarin* Cúthalion
Author's reply
yes, poor Eomer - he's too honourable and considerate for his own good really. And things can actually get worse... Lia
daw the minstrel · 24 February 2007 · Chapter 18: Aftermath
What a nasty misunderstanding, and not an accidental one, of course. Wilwarin did her work well. But what is Eomer to think? This is completely puzzling for him.
Author's reply
No, it's not an accidental misunderstanding - I did my work well ;-) And it will be a while until Eomer comes to the right conclusion...I'm having fun with this! Lia
mistry89 · 21 February 2007 · Chapter 17: Of Butterflies
Having stumbled across, and being captivated by one of Lady Bluejay's Eomer and Lothiriel stories (thence to the rest), this week, I have been looking for more, and found this one. Again, I am captivated. Thank you for this very different (although perhaps I have read too small a sample to be qualified to comment?) look at this marriage/romance/alliance/thing. Looking forward to more (sorry, I am rotten at fb). Cheers!
Author's reply
That's funny because Lady Bluejay is of course my beta-reader. She's got about six different scenarios of how they met, I'm onto my third here! The beautiful thing is that Tolkien only mentioned Lothiriel in a single sentence, so you're free to imagine her in whatever way you like. It gives the imagination much more scope than the other canonical couples like Arwen and Aragorn. Cheers! Lia
Bodkin · 20 February 2007 · Chapter 17: Of Butterflies
Butterfly! I can think of various other comparisons for that lying Wilwarin - who is not even ashamed to admit her perfidy to her equally nasty mother and sister. Poor Lothiriel - even her father is determined to tell her of the impossibility of any interest from Eomer and try to shield her. Incidentally reinforcing every word the vicious woman later uttered! I'm looking for Cupid to be the one to untangle this! Although I rather hope that he kidnaps Wilwarin along the way, if only to torture her.
Author's reply
Yes, poor Lothiriel. Still everybody underestimates her! She will eventually get the opportunity to show her mettle, but it will be a while. First she's in for a bit more misery, I'm afraid. Cupid kidnapping Wilwarin - it's a thought. Maybe they could finish each other off, and Eomer and Lothiriel can enjoy their happy ending. But that would be way too easy of course ;-) Lia
obsidianj · 19 February 2007 · Chapter 17: Of Butterflies
I never liked "Lady" Wilwarin, but now I'm positively hostile towards her. Poor Lothiriel. Between her overbearing father and the nasty Lady Wilwarin, she has a hard time. I hope she figures out for herself what a nasty women Wilwarin is and trusts her instincts when it comes to Eomer. That would be a boost to her self esteem, which I think is a bit crushed at the moment. Unfortunately, that will take time and Eomer will be in for a confusing experience at Lord Girion's party.
Author's reply
I agree Lothiriel is having a hard time. Unfortunately things won't look up for her for a while yet. I hope to make it up to her eventually, though! Eomer...yes, 'confusing' might be a good word to describe what he's in for. I'm starting to feel guilty just thinking about it. More next weekend! Lia
Episcopal Witch · 18 February 2007 · Chapter 17: Of Butterflies
Nooooo!!!! Poor Lothiriel. And she is, as the story says, so inexperienced, and Wilwarin knows just how to push her buttons. I felt some sympathy for Wilwarin when she first came into the story, but bit by bit she has shed her pretty crysalis and now is thoroughly revealed not as a butterfly at all! I liked the father-daughter interaction--Lothiriel showing some new maturity, Imrahil full only of concern and love but not quite knowing how to handle the situation.
Author's reply
Yes, it's not easy for Imrahil. His little girl is growing up and he finds it difficult to cope with. Being a parent myself I feel sorry for him - and things will (of course) get worse. It's true Wilwarin has come out on top for the moment, but things won't always go quite according to plan for her. Fortunately!
ponypetter · 17 February 2007 · Chapter 17: Of Butterflies
Oh the plot thickens. I have to agree it's awfully risky of Wilwarin to tell Lothiriel that. She runs the risk of Lothiriel confronting Eomer, which would probably force a conversation between them on the subject. What a nasty, scheming girl she is, but it's nice considering how it's probably going to backfire on her. Poor Lothiriel has been hit from all sides in this chapter. Hopefully she'll trust her instincts and realize that Eomer certainly doesn't see her as a sister!
Author's reply
Yes, I agree it's risky for Wilwarin. But she saw her aspirations of becoming Queen of Rohan doomed and decided to take steps. Also she probably underestimates both Eomer and Lothiriel and also what they have between them. Lothiriel. Hmm, I think she knows Eomer doesn't see her as a sister, but that doesn't necessarily make things any better. He, he! Lia
BM · 16 February 2007 · Chapter 17: Of Butterflies
Oooooh, that little b****! How dare she! I hope when Eowyn finds out Wilwaren's interference in all her hard won plans for Eomer's happiness, that Eowyn cuts her to pieces and feeds her to the dogs! :) And I'm already groaning envisioning Eomer's confusion when he comes for Lothliriel and her sudden coolness toward him. How can all of this be worked out for the best? Don't leave me hanging for long, please!
Author's reply
That's a thought. While I don't think Eomer would become physical, Eowyn might not have the same scruples. I'll keep it in mind in case the dogs are hungry ;-) And yes, Eomer might just be a tiny little bit confused at Lothiriel's reaction. It will take a while for this complication to get sorted out. More next week, I promise! Lia
Eilenach · 16 February 2007 · Chapter 17: Of Butterflies
Argh! That nasty Wilwarin! I fear that Lothiriel will suffer even more heartache before things are finally settled.
Author's reply
Yes, I fear so to. On the other hand, it might both of them realize just what they have in each other. Lia
Lyrelle · 16 February 2007 · Chapter 17: Of Butterflies
*squeaks in embarrassment* I meant Annarima, sorry!
Lyrelle · 16 February 2007 · Chapter 17: Of Butterflies
This is heartbreaking, even though I know it ends well. Update soon - I don't care so much about Wilwarin getting her comeuppance (though did I detect that Annamaria has perhaps a part to play?) but I don't like seeing Lothiriel so unhappy, which will doubtless make Eomer unhappy . . .
Author's reply
Yes, you're right that Annarima might have a role to play yet. Perhaps her sister doesn't know her quite as well as she thinks. More about Eomer's feelings is coming up in the next chapter. Lia
Cuthalion · 16 February 2007 · Chapter 17: Of Butterflies
Lothíriel enjoyed the sensation of firm muscles under her hands, pent-up power temporarily quiescent, but ready to burst forth at any moment. Whispering endearments, she ran exploratory fingers along the strong back. She wanted to know every inch of the great body next to her. Velvety soft, yet permeated with solid strength, it radiated heat. At the very first touch, two days ago, a piece of her heart had been taken, exchanged for a promise of freedom and laughter. She stroked the wide, powerful chest. Warm breath caressed her cheek and she reached up to bury her fingers in the long hair. “You’re so beautiful,” she sighed. Hrm. If that had been written by me... *laughs* Okay, it was the horse. And now give me a knife to cut the throat of that woman, will you...? Poor Lothiriel - but I could kill Imrahil, too. *fumes* I can only hope Éomer will find out about this in time and put things right! Cúthalion
Author's reply
Did I fool you? Knowing me, you can probably imagine how I enjoyed writing that. A shame I'd made Winterbreath a mare, otherwise I would have had even more opportunity for innuendo. Eomer will find out eventually, of course, but not before putting his foot in. I know, I'm so evil!
Larner · 16 February 2007 · Chapter 17: Of Butterflies
That sneaky, horrid woman! That insignificant worm of a woman! I suspect she's not a butterfly so much as a dragonfly, myself, going after what she sees as mosquitoes! It will be satisfying when she gets what she deserves, and she sees Lothiriel indeed becoming the Queen of Rohan. Now, to see how Eomer manages to dismiss Lothiriel's concerns. And loved the beginning of the chapter, of course. Heh!
Author's reply
Well, I've been told that some butterflies are considerable pests, eating crops etc. Maybe she's one of that sort! And you'll see how Eomer copes with Lothiriel's concerns in the next few chapters, for while the end is certain, the way there is anything but... Lia
daw the minstrel · 16 February 2007 · Chapter 17: Of Butterflies
I can think of few women more badly suited to Eomer King than Wilwarin. There's a match made in hell for both of them. Fortunately, she's deluded.
Author's reply
Deluded but dangerous! We'll see in the next chapters how well her scheme succeeds. Lia
Alison H · 16 February 2007 · Chapter 17: Of Butterflies
Wilwarin---my new least favourite character in this story.What a conniving, cold witch! I want to get hold of her and give her a good smack but I will leave that to Eomer when he finds out just what she has done.Eomer, of course, is too much of a gentleman to ever hit a woman, even one so nasty as Wilwarin, so I think the best revenge for both of them is to become man and wife :D Poor Lothiriel, she's trying not to be broken-hearted but she can't help it.I love this portrayal of Lothiriel: she is strong, but vulnerable, because of her lack of sight but she is not one to sit back and be mollicoddled.She has an independant spirit, which I like.Eomer likes it,too! I was very angry with her father, telling Lothiriel that she could not be Queen of Rohan because of her blindness.He was only trying to protect her but it was a terrible blow to her confidence.Imrahil probably doesn't want to lose his only daughter but becoming Queen of Rohan could be the best thing to ever happen to her. So, there is plenty of intrigue and heartache to come and this story is very compelling.I can't wait for the nect chapter.Could Lothiriel be in danger soon? Oh, and I enjoyed your opening paragraph VERY much, you wicked lady! More please, and with Eomer in place of the horse ;D Update soon! Ali.
Author's reply
Yes, I can't see Eomer doing bodily harm to a woman, although he might enjoy the thought. However, I think you're right. Seeing Lothiriel happily married is probably the worst thing that could happen to Wilwarin. Imrahil - I think for any parent it's always a difficult decision to know how much to protect your children and when to trust in their abilities. And in his eyes, Lothiriel is still very much a child, he can only see her vulnerabilities, not her strengths. Eomer, of course, might have rather a different view of her... And yes, there are still plenty of twists left to this story - pleased to hear you're enjoying it! But you'll have to wait a long while until Eomer takes Winterbreath's place ;-) Lia
ponypetter · 11 February 2007 · Chapter 16: Fire
I suspect Eomer's going to have some difficulty spending time with Lothiriel in the near future, now that Imrahil is on to him! At least her brothers seem to like the idea.
Author's reply
Yes, I guess so too. (Well, in fact I know...) But there are other people, naming no names, not too well pleased with this recent development either. More next week!
Elena Tiriel · 9 February 2007 · Chapter 16: Fire
Oh, my! Did I just read 16 chapters in one setting, forgetting to go to bed when I should have? Yep. This is a delightful story, Lialathuveril, and I truly can't wait to find out what happens next. Your Éomer and Lothiríel characters are truly interesting and three-dimensional... and I especially like the personal touch of a quotation from "literature" at the top of each chapter... especially Mardil Voronwë as Machiavelli -- imagine that! ;-D - Barbara
Author's reply
You've made me a happy woman! Someone at last noticed that allusion to Machiavelli (or at least commented on it). It's quite difficult at times to come up with a meaningful quotation for each chapter, but I enjoy playing round with it. And to hear that you had to read it all in one setting is good as well, of course! There will be more next week I hope. Thanks for leaving a review! Lia
Larner · 8 February 2007 · Chapter 16: Fire
I fear Mugash will find death, but not for the one he wishes it for. And love Eomer realizing he loves Lothiriel, just as she is, wishing her to not give up on life as yet. And seeing Imrahil being protective of her is so amusing.
Author's reply
Ah yes. It is of course always a good idea to be extremely specific when dealing with gods, especially when they're not even your own. And Imrahil will have a bit more to say about Eomer's behaviour in the chapter! Lia
daw the minstrel · 7 February 2007 · Chapter 16: Fire
I'm finally caught up and back to where I started. This is nicely done, with good characterizations and some unexpected turns. I'm have a good time reading it.
Author's reply
You're quick! There should be some more unexpected turns coming up shortly, I hope you'll enjoy them. Lia
Episcopal Witch · 7 February 2007 · Chapter 15: Tokens
Just delightful! Poor Eomer. His emotions are sending him messages in all caps, from his escalating annoyance at all those blue ribbons, to his flash of imagining that Lothiriel is cradling a baby of his and hers! But he's such a straightforward person, he doesn't get it. But Eowyn knows, or at least subconsciously intuits, exactly what's going on between Eomer and Lothiriel. I can't imagine she won't be on Lothiriel's side. She wants her brother to have true love, and she can recognize true courage. Lady Wilwarin is exactly the sort of woman best calculated to get on Eowyn's nerves. I'm reminded of a good moment from "Batman and Robin" (a dreadful movie I ended up watching far too often because of my sons' inexplicable love for it), when the brave and intelligent Batgirl says to the sexually manipulative Poison Ivy, "Chicks like you give women a bad name!" Love the brother-sister dynamic: "Éomer took a deep breath, reminding himself how much he really loved his sister. Besides, Faramir might object to him strangling her just before the wedding." "Faramir slid a possessive arm around Éowyn’s waist when they joined him. 'Any problems?' 'No,' both of them replied at the same time. They exchanged a grin." And Faramir shows his wisdom by not pursuing it! Aragorn certainly has figured things out, and approves. I'm not sure why Imrahil would be so upset. Fatherly over-protectiveness? Fear that Eomer couldn't be doing but trifling with his daughter, because of her blindness? Wonder how he'll react to an out-and-out proposal of marriage. I suspect that the most resistance to an Eomer/Lothiriel match will come from Lothiriel herself, afraid that her blindness will make her unfit to be Queen no matter how much her heart wants Eomer. It'll take something dramatic to push these two into what's meant to be--and you've got it waiting in the wings (shiver!): "He had no delusions of being immortal. A single orc arrow, a poisoned Southron blade, could deprive his country of her king, throwing the Mark into disarray with no clear heir defined."
Author's reply
Yes, Eomer will probably be the last to get it! Eowyn is much more in the know and so is Aragorn. And you are of course right about the kind of woman Eowyn would like her brother to marry. Certainly not somebody like Lady Wilwarin. Some of Imrahil's misgivings will be revealed in the chapter after this one, but basically he thinks Lothiriel is too young and wouldn't be able to cope as Queen of the Mark in any case. You should also find out in that chapter what Lothiriel makes of recent developments. And yes, there will be no shortage of complications and dramatic twists in the story! Lia