Reviews (112)

PSW · 29 November 2015 · Chapter 7: Letting Go

Interesting conclusion -- very nice. And I loved Elrond's reunion w Elwing... :-)

PSW · 29 November 2015 · Chapter 6: A Gift of Time

Excited Elrond...that's a nice thought... :-)

PSW · 29 November 2015 · Chapter 5: Kindred Spirits

And, yet another thing I would never have thought of -- conversations w Celebrimbor. (Sounds a bit like a talk show when you say it that way, right? :-P) Very intriguing concepts he has...

PSW · 29 November 2015 · Chapter 2: Along the Shore

Hmm...yes, I can kind of see being a little creeped out by the concept of Ulmo being in all the waters watching all the time -- but I guess it's really no different than in any other water, since Ulmo always remained w the water even in ME... It's so random to think of just scattering jewels in the sand. I know it's canon....but just so far away from how we think...

PSW · 29 November 2015 · Chapter 1: In the Meadow

That's so great! :-) Where do you come up w these things -- I never would have thought of something like this, but how wonderful! I could just picture her, your descriptions were so very realistic (inching forward, tail wagging). It's like seeing a housecat in the movements of the lion you're watching on TV...

Siiw · 2 December 2013 · Chapter 7: Letting Go

Why haven't I found this story before? This was wonderful and sweet, and the descriptions of the Blessed Realm were lovely, as in all your other stories from the West. Seeing all this from a Mortal viewpoint makes it so easy to imagine, I could almost smell the flowers and the Sea!

Holbytla · 11 November 2011 · Chapter 7: Letting Go

I love this story. It made me feel very joyful and peaceful, and reminded me of some things and people in my own life I love. :D

Kara's Aunty · 21 November 2008 · Chapter 7: Letting Go

Hello Shirebound, Hah! I knew it - Mummy time! It was almost as wonderful to read Bilbo's excitement as it was to read of the family reunion. And touching to read that Frodo and Celebrimbor gave each other the strength to release the Rings. Success at last for them both, I hope they found their peace (I'm sure they did!). This was a delightful tale of Frodo and Bilbo's first months/years in Tol Eressea. Your descriptions of the place gave it an ethereal quality that I imagine the realm to have (were it real). The characters were sympathetic, the story engaging - and I really love that dog! Great work!! M ;)

Kara's Aunty · 21 November 2008 · Chapter 6: A Gift of Time

Hello Shirebound, I'm smiling at the thought of Elrond bursting into song. And at the delightful surprise to come! M ;)

Kara's Aunty · 21 November 2008 · Chapter 5: Kindred Spirits

Hello Shirebound, It's very fitting that the Ringbearer and the Ring(s)forger seek healing in this manner. A second chance for both of them! Lovely work (as always). M ;)

Kara's Aunty · 21 November 2008 · Chapter 4: A Gift of Friendship

Hello Shirebound, Oh, I loved the reference to Sam in this. There truly is nothing quite like his 'plain hobbit sense'! And now, on to meet another Very Ancient Elf! (Bilbo must be beside himself with glee - it's not difficult to see which form his healing is taking!) M ;)

Kara's Aunty · 21 November 2008 · Chapter 3: Among the Trees

Hello Shirebound, 'enspelled' - what a great word! And delightful to see the proud Galadriel shed her regal ways and run to her mother's embrace! This was a poignant chapter, with its hints of the Elves' grief at knowing they would never see Undomiel. But Eärwen is a very gracious Lady to humble herself when she has seen the error of her ways. Great work! M ;)

Kara's Aunty · 21 November 2008 · Chapter 2: Along the Shore

Hello Shirebound, How beautifully you brought Frodo to the realisation that he has never truly been alone - and never shall be. To see him filled with such understanding and hope is heartwarming indeed. If only we could all know such peace. And I really love that dog! She reminds me of Sam... M ;)

Kara's Aunty · 21 November 2008 · Chapter 1: In the Meadow

Hello Shirebound, what a sweet story! How lovely to see Bilbo and Frodo reunited again - and in such a wondrous place. Frodo certainly deserves the joy he is experiencing and what a great idea to give him a dog (I love dogs)! Enjoying this already! M :)

Elanor Silmariën · 13 December 2006 · Chapter 3: Among the Trees

Ah, I'm so behind on this story! Very lovely chapter! I just finished reading the Silmarillian so I understood more what they were talking about! It may take me a while to finish this, but I am liking it very much! God bless, Ellie

Elemmírë · 2 December 2006 · Chapter 7: Letting Go

Sorry for such a late review, Shirebound, but I wanted to let you know how very much I enjoyed this tale. It was absolutely terrific from beginning to end! I can very easily see this as being one plausible experience Frodo in the West. And Celebrimbor was excellently written ... I really liked the whole concept of giving up something of power of one's own free will in order to dispell the hurt of when the One Ring was taken. I also really enjoyed how you incorporated Elwing and Eärendil into the story as well. Frodo saw Bilbo smiling at him. Through the years, he had often wondered where Bilbo found the strength, on his own, to give up the Ring... and had regretted faltering, where Bilbo had not. But now a new thought occurred to him: Bilbo had not been totally on his own, after all. Gandalf had been there to encourage, and aid him in his decision. Frodo was slowly accepting the fact that he could not have relinquished the One Ring freely, so close to the place of its making; and its strength had overcome him only at the last. “Ride with me, Frodo,” Gandalf said, mounting Shadowfax. “I would not wish you to fall from Mellon’s back halfway home.” *sighs happily* I always LOVE those little special scenes with Gandalf caring for Frodo ... and you always write them so very well. And I just can't say enough about the way you began Frodo on his path to healing of all his wounds. It was a very unique approach, but like I already said, one that is one of the most plausible ways I've read. I too, hope tremendously that you will continue to write more with Mellon and Frodo in the future. :D ~Elemmírë~ p.s. From Chapter 1:“You may ride her, if you wish,” Galadriel informed the astounded hobbit. “She honors you greatly by allowing this, Frodo; I doubt she will let anyone else on her back – even Bilbo – unless there is great need.” I'm quite curious--what great need could there be on the Blessed Isle in which Bilbo would have to be the one to ride Mellon? Something that happens to Frodo while he and Mellon are out exploring maybe? *grins*

Antane · 2 December 2006 · Chapter 7: Letting Go

A great ending, shirebound, indeed healing. I hope the muse does entertain you and us with a sequel - there's much more to tell! Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

Queen Galadriel · 1 December 2006 · Chapter 7: Letting Go

Finally I caught up! Oh, Shirebound, I love it, I love it!!!!! *jubilant* I can't even pick out all the things I love. The meeting with Galadriel's mother (sorry, don't remember how to spell), all the bounty of gifts, Frodo learning to swim freely again. But best of all was the talk with Celebrimbor in the garden and the beautiful end. Frodo did it! He gave up another ring of his own free will and was not hurt but healed! *hugs him* Thank you for this sweet and fulfilling tale, Shirebound! God bless, Galadriel

Baggins Babe · 30 November 2006 · Chapter 7: Letting Go

This was an utterly perfect chapter, Shirebound. The Rings of Power returning to their elements, Elwing appearing, and Gandalf holding Frodo before him on Shadowfax. Of course Mellon was there beside him too, and how lovely to see Frodo begin to heal. *melts into soggy puddle*

Andrea · 29 November 2006 · Chapter 7: Letting Go

“It was hard giving up your ring, Gandalf,” Frodo admitted. “I am very proud of you, my boy; hobbits are amazing creatures, as I have often said. How do you feel?” “Very peaceful.” Frodo yawned again. That was a wonderful ending! Like Celebrimbor, Frodo needed the experience of letting go of a Ring of Power of his own free will to believe in his strenght. Both helped the other to accomplish their task. And both found peace at last! That's the best ending one could wish for :) Thank you!

harrowcat · 29 November 2006 · Chapter 7: Letting Go

Oh this is just so lovely and gentle. And sleepy Frodo and Bilbo! Ooh... *melts into a gooey puddle* But.... I was also concerned. Bilbo seemed so suddenly sleepy that I wondered whether he felt that it was time to go on now that his Frodo was at peace. I am glad that you finished with the hopeful thought that maybe he would still be there to greet Sam.

Grey Wonderer · 28 November 2006 · Chapter 7: Letting Go

Beautiful! I would like to think that Bilbo was still around when Sam arrived. It is a lovely thought. I enjoyed this very much and hope that Mellon is in future stories.

Dreamflower · 28 November 2006 · Chapter 7: Letting Go

How wonderful! Yes, I can see this--this is not only very plausible, but very *fitting*--that by giving up *a* Ring, of his own free will, though with the encouragement of others, he can feel better about the Ring he could not give up. You know, you made me wonder about something--Gandalf's encouragement of Bilbo, to help him in his own decision to give over his Ring--I wonder if Gandalf had the aid of Narya in that? Not that there would have been anything coercive in it, but Narya *did* have the power to kindle spirits... In which case, that means that one of the Three actually helped in destroying the One... This fic is really making me think!

Cuthalion · 28 November 2006 · Chapter 7: Letting Go

That was beautiful, Janet. I thoroughly enjoyed every single chapter - and the idea of somehow giving the rings back to the elements was marvelous. Very, very well done. Thank you very much. *hugs* Mona

Cuthalion · 28 November 2006 · Chapter 6: A Gift of Time

He suddenly became aware that Elrond was gazing north, his expression hopeful and filled with longing. “She comes,” Elrond whispered. Frodo followed his gaze, but at first saw nothing. Then, a small white speck appeared in the sky, growing closer and larger. At last he could see that it was a bird, white as snow and graceful in its flight. Oh - his mother? (BTW - this is exquisite. Of course. *smiles*) Mona