periantari
· 30 August 2006
· Chapter 6: Chapter 6
The latest development between Merry and Willow is intriguing--lol. That subplot is quite interestingly written in here. I loved the details of Willow and Merry both kind of admitting that they're not seeing/interested in anyone...(well at least for Merry that is)
The first part with Frodo and Sam---yes, rereading it really melts me once again. :) I love Frodo being there for Sam. There's so much Sam being there for Frodo in LotR, being that Frodo is so burdened down by the Ring that i very much enjoy the rare role reversal that we see. And the added bonus of having them both think about their dead parents and mom is great too. I think that is one thing that brings/bonds them together is the fact that they've lost such close family members.
And i love your detail with the herbs and the cast! Bravo for a job well done in researching the medical parts. :)
I was surprised in sedating Frodo too--i thought that he would be resistant to that, seeing that Frodo would probably want to be at Sam's side all the time. And being as stubborn as Sam is--i doubt that he would like to take in that nasty smelling/tasting concoction that Willow has prepared. :P
And Merry/Willow development is indeed very interesting--how happy Merry is to having Willow exhibit some affection/interest. :)
Can't wait for more. :)
Author's reply
That subplot is quite taking over the story, lol! Merry and Willow are quite hopeless, really. But it will come back to Sam in the next chapter. :)
I also enjoy stories where Frodo can be the supportive and strong one. He's had a rough time of it here so far, but he'll be improving now that he's had a decent sleep and doesn't have Sam crumbling to pieces before his eyes. I don't doubt that Frodo was just as protective and loyal to Sam as Sam is to Frodo. They are both equal in Frodo's eyes and he does whatever he can to help Sam on the rare occasions that Sam needs help.
Though Sam was much younger when he lost his mother and can't really remember her too well, it is the one true way in which he and Frodo are connected. They both know what it is like to miss a parent. Sam still has his father and his older siblings, but he can share that lose with Frodo, something that no one else can really do.
Researching the medicinal plants isn't very hard, since I have a large natural healing book that I use. Researching how to make a surgical cast was much harder (as was researching what lullabyes are supposed to sound like!) A lot of the stuff with the cast was really just guesswork. That stinky concoction is for Sam only. ;) The sedating tea was actually rather pleasant to drink, and both Frodo and Sam know better than to disobey a healer! Frodo wouldn't have won any protests, had he been coherent enough to think of one.
I think flummoxed is the word to describe Merry at the end there! He really thought that putting all his attentions into a 'safe' crush with Willow was the answer to being passed over by Estella. Now he found out that Willow is interested back and he just doesn't know what to do about. :)
(((Peri)))
Althea
· 28 August 2006
· Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I just want you to know how much I am enjoying this story, especially your research into the use of herbs and their medicinal values. It is fascinating to think of how people in earlier times used years and years of collected knowlegde to use in the healing arts.
I am glad that Frodo was away somewhere in draemland when Sam's ankle was reset. Poor Merry didn't know what he was getting into, but he handled the job very well. It seems that the next few weeks and months are going to be hard on everyone, especially Sam. I'm looking forward to finding out how he and his caregivers are going to cope with the cast and his limitations.
Author's reply
We still use years and years of knowledge, we've just gotten away from the natural herbs that have been used for millenia, which is a shame I think. I love learning about natural remedies and trying to fit that into the hobbits' lives in the Shire. I can understand why Merry would find it to be somewhat mystical in origin, when really it's just centuries of trial and error or even accidental discoveries culminating into the 'everyday' knowledge that the healers now use in their trade.
Frodo was nowhere near the mindset needed to endure watching Sam have his ankle reset. Now that he's rested and the current drama is over, he will be his usual self - just in time to help Merry with his drama! Such fun for Frodo. :)
Thanks for reading, Althea!
Bodkin
· 28 August 2006
· Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Merry would make quite a good healer himself! Willow did well to realise that young Merry would make a far better assistant than the mature, but far more emotionally involved Frodo. And knocking Frodo out was a very sensible option!
The flirtatiousness, on the other hand ... Well - we'll have to see where that goes!
Author's reply
Emotionally involved and sleep deprived. Under ordinary circumstances, Frodo would have been far more in control of himself but the shocking news followed by Sam's unprecedented meltdown was more than he could take at the moment. It was best that he take a little nap. ;)
And really, it was almost too much for Merry also but he had the lovely healer to distract him from his worries. The flirting is getting rather out of hand at this point! Those two crazy kids are getting quite beyond my control. ;)
Dreamflower
· 26 August 2006
· Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Oh this was a lovely chapter! You must have done a **LOT** of research for it! I love the way you show Merry's burgeoning fascination with herb-lore!
The part with Sam and Frodo, Frodo's lullaby, and the way they spoke of their lost mothers was just lovely. And that lullaby was beautiful--was that your own, dear?
And Miss Willow returns Merry's interest, apparently. Hmmm...
I can't wait for more!
Author's reply
I have an herbal of my own, so much of the research was just looking up sprain treatments. I had to do an internet search for the plaster cast but I could never find any specifics on the plaster is actually made after the gypsum is a powder, so I just took a best guess and hoped that it would sound plausible. The box is more or less my own creation also. I found one little line that mentioned broken limbs being placed in a box and the plaster poured in, but again, nothing as to the specifics. So a lot of guess work here - I'm glad it sounds authentic!
I figure that after Merry's first unsuccessful attempts to grow his own herbs, he would have shied away from it but always remained partially interested. This is an excellent opportunity for that interest to be reignited, and it certainly helps having a lovely healer explaining it all!
That lullaby tormented me. I knew I wanted one and at first I was just going to find one that was serviceable because I didn't know the first thing about lullabyes. My own mother never sang them to us and I'm really only familiar with a couple of the more silly ones. I finally found a sight that had audio links to some lullabyes and once I had a tune to go by and an idea of the sorts of things that lullabyes are usually about, it wasn't too difficult coming up with the verse. That is one of the reasons it took me so long to post this chapter, as I wanted to wait a few days before going back and rereading it so I would be better able to know what needed tweaking. Between that and the cast, this chapter *was* very research-heavy!
The lose of their mothers is the one real thing that Frodo and Sam have in common and is really what cemented their relationship from the very beginning. Even though Sam was much younger than Frodo and doesn't really remember his mother, he still feels that void from time to time. Sam at least had older sisters to fill that role for him but it still isn't the same.
Miss Willow does appear to have some sort of interest in Merry, which Merry was not expecting. Expect some Merry angst in the next chapter! :D
I love the way Merry settled Frodo down in this chapter and helped him to realize that he wasn't responsible for Sam's accident. The dinner talk was very entertaining too! This is an excellent story and I love the way it fits with your other wonderful tales.
Author's reply
Merry does know how to handle Frodo and would be able to get to the heart of the problem quickly. Once he knew what was truly bothering Frodo, it was only a matter of making Frodo see that he wasn't at fault - a very hard job indeed! As Merry points out, Frodo has this tendency to blame himself.
Dinner talk is always entertaining with Frodo and Merry, and Sam adding his own unique perspective just makes it that much more so.
I loved this bit.
(“Would I lie to you?”
“Yes.”
Frodo strummed his fingers on the table and pretended to weigh this option before nodding. “All right. You have a deal.”
They reached across the table and shook on it. )
So very like both of them and I did enjoy the wheeling and dealing. I'm glad Sam made it inside and that they are taking care of him. You know, sometimes he is actually stubborn enough to be a Baggins. LOL
Author's reply
Frodo's sweet and innocent act might work on other hobbits, but Merry knows better! ;) Let's just hope that they don't forget their deal in all the excitement over Sam. I think that the Gamgees have the Bagginses beat on stubbornness. At least, it's safe to say that it's a draw!
harrowcat
· 26 August 2006
· Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Ooh, Merry! I don't think she is out to spare your blushes. He has learned a lot in a short space of time hasn't he? And I don't just mean about healing! Great chapter GF.
Author's reply
No, she was probably keeping track of his blushes, counting every one! I wouldn't be surprised if she had a quota. ;) Merry is finding this little accident of Sam's to be very educational, in ways he would never have begun to imagine or think possible.
Andrea
· 26 August 2006
· Chapter 6: Chapter 6
That was great, GamgeeFest!
I still can't stop giggling from that last "flirtatious" situation.
Willow is wonderful!!!
And poor Merry just doesn't know what to do with himself, LOL ;-)
I loved the conversation between Frodo and Sam, and the singing of that lullaby.
He was surprised to find that he had all but forgotten how lovely was Frodo’s voice, like a cool summer’s breeze, refreshing and carrying the memory of the warm, lazy day.
Beautiful! I can hear him singing!
But did he really stole that watch from Old Rory? Cheeky Baggins! And wise Rory!
However, I think it was also wise of Willow to give that tea to Frodo. I don't know what he would have done, if he had seen how the healer manipulated Sam's leg.
I'm looking forward to reading more, especially about Merry and the beautiful healer :)
Author's reply
Willow is a charmer, and what's more, she knows it and knows how to use it! Merry better think quick if he wants to get out of this in one piece, key phrase there being 'if he wants to'. ;) My Merry always seems to be flummoxed by all these pretty lasses. He's completely cock-sure until he finds out that they return his interest, then he gets all tongue-tied and nervous. Silly Merry. :D
I always enjoy quiet Frodo-Sam moments, especially when they talk about their mothers. It's the one thing they really have in common and is one of the reasons they have the friendship that they do. I'm glad you enjoyed the lullabye, as I was quite nervous about it. I've never attempted a lullabye before and know very little of them. I think I probably researched that just as much as I did the plaster cast!
Yep, Frodo really did steal that watch. It seems Bilbo wasn't the last Baggins to steal a pocket watch (if you remember, he confesses doing so in "The Usual Suspects"). It's common for foster children to steal from their foster parents or other responsible guardians. It's some sort of internal reverse psychology. They're always afraid that they will be cast off, so they steal something, hoping to find out if their guardians are going to toss them onto the next caretaker or rather attempt to reassure them and keep them in their home. Rory was very wise to have done what he did, even though there was no way he could have known what was going through Frodo's mind.
Willow's a competent healer and part of that is to be observant of all the people around her, not just the patient. She could see how exhausted Frodo was and that was first and foremost on her mind. She also knew that having to reset the foot, even just a little, would be painful and that it would only disturb Frodo further. As it was, Merry was nearly done in by it. While Frodo would have understood the need to do it and would have handled it well under normal circumstances, he was not in the head space needed to endure that.
Periantari
· 22 August 2006
· Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Sam would have been hobbling around this smial as soon as he thought he could get away with it, and your cousin is too soft-hearted and too fond of him to tell him no. If he’s had a shock, then all the better for both him and Frodo in the long run. A little bit of fear now is better than a lifetime of regret. Do you agree with that?”
lol now i know why the Ms. Willow said it like she did.
I look forward to more.
And i like Merry in this story a lot--certainly with the way things are going there is much room for Sam and Merry friendship bits to be integrated along with the "c" part of things in the story. :)
Yes, i like rereading. :)
Author's reply
Willow wouldn't have said what she did just to scare Sam into behaving himself, though that certainly was a very large part of it. Sprains can be very nasty and they can take forever to heal. One of the guys I went to massage school with had sprained his ankle a *year* earlier and he was *still* wearing a walking brace.
Merry is really showing his true colors here. Without Pippin around, he really can be quite well-behaved! And with Sam down and out, there will be tons of opportunities for them to chat and get familiar with each other's ways.
Periantari
· 22 August 2006
· Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Omg so love the latest chapter... oh the angst! Poor Sam!!! What a
horrible sprain he got. :( I hope the healer is just a bit exaggerating
though... oh dear... The part with Sam crying though--aww really got to me. ::goes to comfort him:: =)
I love all your details ..Merry helping Willow was funny and i liked
the details of Frodo being there for Sam too. And it's great that Merry
volunteered to go fetch the healer.
But yeah, all i was thinking rereading this, was "poor Sam!" ::goes to hug him and try to heal his ankle quickly::
And eek! casts are no fun to be in...my sister was in one last year and
she itched pretty badly in one, so Sam's not going to be that
comfortable in one... Also i liked all your details of the healer doing
a thorough exam and such--very credible and real and yes, i so snuggle
this fic. Thank you so so so so much!
Author's reply
Yes, poor Sam! He wasn't expecting to have that bombshell dropped on him and the shock of it put him completely out of his wits. Healers rarely exaggerate in my experience. If anything, they have the tendency to gloss things over so they don't look quite so bad. Thank goodness that Willow isn't prone to such behavior. Sam needed to hear it straight for it to sink in how careful he needs to be. But yes, poor Sam. He very much appreciates your comfort!
Merry is such a dope around Willow. *snickers* But he really was the only one who could have gone for the healer. Had Frodo attempted, it would have taken him even longer, being unfamiliar with those clunky shoes.
Sam won't be enjoying the cast. Just having something *on* his foot, covering it almost entirely, will be enough to irritate him. The itching will only make it that much more unbearable. He'll be glad when those three weeks are over. :)
I'm so glad you're enjoying this!! It's growing more with each chapter, so it might wind up being a few chapters more than my last projection, though I'm sure you won't mind. ;) *hugs*
Periantari
· 22 August 2006
· Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Something about stern!Frodo that i really love from this story.
“You never let me get away with evading questions when I’m ill. I’m not about to let you tell me you’re fine when I know you aren’t. Now did the tea help or not?”
Yep! let Frodo help you, Sam lad! =)
And i really like the part about them playing board games and especially loved the fact that Frodo read a nonsense poem to Sam as he fell asleep... love the image.
And the details you put in this chapter is very well-written as well. =)
Nice job--::rushing to the other chapter fro i think the healer comes, right?:: =)
Author's reply
Frodo needs to be stern every once in awhile, especially when it comes to stubborn!Sam. He knows how to get his point across too, which is very important. Sam couldn't possibly remain evasive after that argument. ;)
Board games are always good for passing the time, and the nonsense poem was so very Sam, just like something he would enjoy. Since he wrote that troll poem that he recites in FOTR, I imagine that even if he does like the more lyrical tomes, that he is drawn more to the silly poems. They do suit his carefree nature.
*hugs*
harrowcat
· 21 August 2006
· Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I am sure that two to four months sounds like a life-time sentence to poor Sam. But for Frodo to suggest an interim gardener! Not the most diplomatic thing he could do!
Author's reply
Well, four to six months really, and for someone whose never been off his feet for more than a week at the most (and then only once at that), it is quite a long time. Frodo's timing could have been better, but he wasn't exactly thinking clearly himself either. He was just answering the question with the first thing that popped into his head.
Thanks for reading!!
Andrea
· 20 August 2006
· Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I know the Gamgee fellows. They’re all stubborn to a fault. Sam would have been hobbling around this smial as soon as he thought he could get away with it, and your cousin is too soft-hearted and too fond of him to tell him no. If he’s had a shock, then all the better for both him and Frodo in the long run. A little bit of fear now is better than a lifetime of regret. Do you agree with that?
How very clever of Miss Willow! I'm deeply impressed of that healer!
Of course Sam would have tried to get up as soon as possible. But with the prospect of being crippled he will remain in bed, as long as Willow tells him. And Frodo will have an eye (or two) on him all the time ;-) Poor Sam!
And Merry? Well, Merry is just wonderful :)
Great chapter, GamgeeFest! I'm eagerly awaiting more.
Author's reply
Willow has had much experience with the Gamgees, the Gaffer most noteably. As such, she's come to learn that being stern and forthcoming is the best way to deal with them, and she's right. Good thing Frodo hadn't caved and given Sam the crutches! I'd hate to imagine what her reaction to that would be!
Sam is too helpful sometimes. He really needs to learn to let others do the work from time to time. He'll still regret that Frodo and Merry are having to do for him, but he won't be attempting to bribe his way out of bed anymore either.
Merry really is beginning to shine in this story, even when he's acting like a hormonally-charged tween!
Thank you so much for reading and for such a lovely review!
cookiefleck
· 20 August 2006
· Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Oooh, I love how you ramped up the angst. Glad it's not all resolving too easily. Poor, hurting/frightened Sam! Dear Frodo and Merry!
Author's reply
Well, I couldn't let Sam off the hook *that* easily, otherwise the comfort would have to end. ;) Poor Sam indeed. He's never been so seriously injured before and the thought of possibly being crippled is beyond frightening to him. Thank goodness he has Frodo and Merry there to help distract him from his circumstance.
Dreamflower
· 20 August 2006
· Chapter 5: Chapter 5
This was an absolutely marvelous chapter, GF!
Merry almost forgot where he was, so transformed was the land around him by the blankets of snow. He looked around and recognized nothing, saw no one, no sign or whisper of life beside himself. Not even a bird call could be heard in the Party Tree. Only the vague, moving plumes of chimney smoke rising from below him in the distance told him where Bagshot Row was. The smoke and the Party Tree reassured him that he was still in his beloved Shire and not somehow magically transported to another land where talking wolves carrying goblins might jump out at him at any moment.
What a beautiful piece of prose that was! I could so easily see and feel what Merry was seeing and feeling.
Merry was wonderful in this chapter--his tweenaged self-consciousness coming inconveniently to the fore when faced with Marigold, and with the prospect of seeing the Twofoot lads! *grin* And also when he saw the healer. He's intelligent enough to realize that his crush is just that--a crush, and somewhere safe to put his heart while Estella is seemingly "off-limits". Yet even so, it's still enough to rattle him.
I like Miss Willow--a very competent healer indeed. She knows that she *has* to make Sam fear for his livelihood in order to keep him down. Yet she is observant enough to realize Merry's own concerns.
I also appreciated Merry's anger in this--even though he *does* have a little crush on Miss Willow, Sam comes first--yet once he understands her reasons he realizes she is absolutely right.
Although she may have underestimated Frodo. He may be soft-hearted where Sam's concerned, but he's not soft-headed enough to let Sam do anything that will hurt him.
You have got a wonderful handle on the relationships here. I am so impressed.
Can't wait for more. I dread to see the Gaffer's and Marigold's reactions to this news!
Author's reply
That paragraph was a last-minute addition. I just realized as I was getting ready to post it that the Shire would look transformed with that much snow covering it and the familiar landmarks that Merry has come to take advantage of. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Merry develops a little crush on every pretty lass he sees! He just has the good sense to keep the majority of his crushes unknown to his cousins. The lad would never get a moment's rest otherwise. The big crush is Willow though and if there's anyone who can get through his otherwise cool facade, it's her. I wonder though, how 'safe' she really is. *grins*
Willow knows that the only way to make Sam take care of himself is to tell him the point-blank truth. She may have underestimated Frodo, but I can't say she's too far off the mark there either. Frodo would be taking an awful lot of baths, or letting Merry take over the charge, to keep himself from giving in to Sam. Now, he won't have any qualms with telling Sam no, which will be very good practice for him. :)
She has quite the handle on Merry too, in more ways than one! She understands why he was angry and she is as observant as all good healers must be. She can see that he's just as much in shock as the others, and that she has more than just one patient at Bag End, for this visit at any rate.
Yikes! Seems it was all going so well and now Sam is in trouble. I wonder how long it will be before Frodo or Merry think to look for him? I liked the way Frodo showed Merry how to approach Sam without actually explaining anything. I do wonder how things might have been different if only the Shire hadn't had different classes and different ways of behaving. I think that is why I find it so hard to write Sam. I have trouble remembering that he was actually a servant in some ways. I love your Sam. You know exactly how to write him!
Author's reply
Yes, poor Sam did have to go and get hurt, didn't he? A single misstep can change everything. Merry has yet to figure out the most important thing Frodo was trying to show him, but he will shortly. :)
No matter what society or culture, there's some sort of social structure or class system. Coming from a blue collar family, and being by nature quite rustic and practical myself, and having grown up to believe myself to be somehow lesser than those around me, I would say I understand Sam's position quite well. I connect more with him than any other character. And then there's the Gaffer, who reminds me so much of my own father. Then I come from a large family, so all hobbits in general are very familiar to me. The hardest for me to write are the Elves. They're just so... aloof, for lack of a better word.
Dreamflower
· 16 August 2006
· Chapter 4: Chapter 4
What a wonderful chapter!
I love all the details of what they are doing, how they are doing it, and what they are using to do it with--you make everything sound very likely and plausible.
You nearly had me in tears when Frodo was searching among Bilbo's clothes, and was thinking of Bilbo.
And I just loved the description of Merry all bundled up like a faunt.
The last couple of paragraphs, with Sam using his wiles on Frodo were really amusing, but I wonder now if Sam's not going to forget to stay in bed, once Frodo does go to take some rest?
And I am a bit worried about Merry's little trip. While it might help to have a bit more in common, I don't think being laid up alongside Sam with a matching sprained ankle is the best way to go about it. I hope he is careful.
Author's reply
Thank you for mentioning that little section about Bilbo! As the years pass and Frodo's wanderlust begins to grow, he would think more and more of Bilbo and wish that he had gone with him. And I'm glad you enjoyed Merry looking like a faunt, because I don't think Merry was very pleased about it! It was just what Frodo needed to shake off any lingering nostalgia for Bilbo though.
Sam might be disappointed that he didn't get those crutches but he did still promise Frodo that he would only get up to use the chamber pot. Without any assistance, he won't be attempting that on his own. He'll behave himself, now that Frodo's agreed to take some rest.
You can count on Merry to be careful. He does know how to use those shoes better than Frodo does and he'll be able to get up and down the hill without too much trouble.
harrowcat
· 16 August 2006
· Chapter 4: Chapter 4
That he had never noticed before is quite a tribute to Sam. This foot does sound more than just sprained. And the idea that Merry may carry the healer to Bag End made me grin. Loved the conversation between Merry and Sam.
Author's reply
Sam's usual 'manipulations' are much more subtle than that desperate pout. Frodo would hardly think twice about Sam commenting on the chill night air and wouldn't Frodo be more comfortable in a jacket or sweater set? Why, Frodo probably even thinks that he would have gone ahead and donned the jacket anyway even though he just walked right past it seconds earlier. ;)
Sprains can be a very nasty business, even without further complications. The healer's arrival is bound to shake up the peaceful atmosphere of Bag End, even if Merry's dithering after her doesn't! ;)
It was far past time for Merry and Sam to have a serious heart-to-heart. They needed to clear the air between them and start over fresh. This was the perfect opportunity for them to do that and they didn't waste it.
Larner
· 16 August 2006
· Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Merry's doing well at making himself properly useful, and Sam is revealing just how well he's managed his Master for the last several years.
Lovely writing, and excellent characterizations.
Author's reply
When pushed to task, Merry can be very useful. ;) While he would ordinarly wait for Frodo to ask for assistance, or offer it only when he thought Frodo might need it, he's showing that he can be self-motivated when the situation calls for it.
Sam really was aiming for those crutches, but he also knew that if Frodo didn't give in, his pouting would be a good way to get some peace and quiet, and encourage Frodo to take a much-needed rest. Frodo might not like the idea that Sam is able to control him so easily when he puts his mind to it, but he'll continue to overlook all the minor ways that Sam 'encourages' him into taking more care of himself than he would normally. :D
Bodkin
· 16 August 2006
· Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Merry is doing very well here. He's being himself - which is more likely to have Sam relax than the rather intensely conciliatory face he has been displaying recently. Thinks too much, does Merry. Needs to take a bit of a lesson from Pippin about being natural.
And Sam is coping - just - with being waited on. Although it had better not go on for too long or he might have a breakdown ... caused by refusing to use the chamber pot.
Merry is the right person to send for the healer (although carrying her back might be going a bit too far!) He doubtless has more recent experience of mud shoes and I imagine they take a bit of getting used to.
Fingers crossed things continue to go smoothly - and that Merry and Sam keep building their understanding.
Author's reply
So long as he doesn't become *too* natural! Pippin can be quite the handful at times and I don't think Sam would want another one of him running about the gardens, pestering him with questions and trying to 'help'. :D Merry has figured out though that he's been over-analyzing everything in regards to Sam. Now that they've both acknowledged that fact, Merry will find that Sam is not so on guard around him anymore and will be more responsive to Merry just 'being himself'. Let's face it, Merry as himself can be rather intense at times. ;)
Sam isn't used to being waited on by anyone other than his sisters, and they don't smother him quite so much! Part of the problem is that he's never been injured or ill around gentlehobbits before and so he doesn't understand that when a child of gentlehobbits is ill, he's never left alone, whereas with the working-class hobbits, there's only so much time a mother or sibling can spare to sit with a sick child. They depend more on the child calling out for assistance when needed, something Sam is much more comfortable doing at home than he is with his master and Merry. This is a very new experience for him and it's going to take him awhile to get used to it.
Merry's trek down to the healer's will be the next chapter, once I have it finished. The revision is taking longer than I thought it would and I might have to wind up cutting the chapter in half if it gets too much longer, but I hope to have it up before the weekend is over. :D
althea
· 15 August 2006
· Chapter 4: Chapter 4
This is a most satisfying chapter. First, there was so much Sam comfort. Next, it really looks as if Sam and Merry have broken the barrier between them and are headed toward true friendship. And finally there is the pouting Sam and Frodo's realization that Sam can maipulate him. This was so much fun to read.
Author's reply
Thank you Althea! It's been a great deal of fun for me to write this story and see Sam, for once, smothered in the same care that he so often heaps upon everyone else.
Merry and Sam are well on their way toward building a true friendship. Now that each of them knows where the other stands, things will be progressing much more smoothly from here on out. If anything, this accident has ensured that they will have to face each other and talk more openly they would have normally if Merry is to help take care of Sam. Likewise, Sam will be able to see that Merry is far from being a lazy guest but that he actually does help Frodo when he is visiting and carries his share of the household chores.
I think I would have reacted the same way to a pouting Sam! lol I don't blame Frodo for getting out of there! If Sam had not decided to use his powers for evil *winks* it's likely that Frodo would have continued to be oblivious to Sam's subtle ways of 'manipulating' his master. Sam would hardly think of it as manipulation though. If you asked him, he would say he was just doing his job, looking after Frodo even while he's the one lying in bed hurt.
Larner
· 14 August 2006
· Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Good to see the opening up amongst the three of them. And to hear all the pranks admitted is hilarious and enlightening.
The poor Cotton boys--sure that the rumors about Baggins instability in the last two Masters of Bag End are true!
Author's reply
From the bad comes the good. Sam might be kicking himself for falling but he'll come to look upon this experience quite favorably once all is said and done. This is truly the beginning of a true friendship between Sam and Merry and it's not so hard to see why Sam would be willing to later spy on Frodo at Merry's request and trust in Merry to organize the Conspiracy.
hehe Frodo truly can be quite the devious little hobbit at times. I always love it when I can remind the readers of that. He's so often too serious for his own good. :)
LOL Tom and Jolly have been scarred for life by that dinner experience. They'll come around eventually but that won't be for a few more years. :D
Thank you for reading!!
Periantari
· 13 August 2006
· Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I really like the Frodo and Sam bit with the resolution and the dialogue.
“Dearest Sam,” Frodo muttered and shook his head. He dropped his hand to cover Sam’s, which was resting on the coverlet. “You know I don’t like to give orders, so I want you to promise me that you won’t hesitate to ask for my help when you need it. I want you to understand that you can rely on me.”
“I know I can, sir,” Sam said then nodded. “I promise I’ll not do something so foolish as this ever again. I never meant to hurt your feelings, Mr. Frodo, honest.”
I thought Frodo is depicted as very kind and caring and obviously this builds into why Sam thinks so highly and respects Frodo so much too.
“It’s not often that we have you at our mercy Sam, and we fully intend to take advantage of the situation to smother you with comfort and care.
Yes! I like smothering Sam with comfort and care. :D
And the hobbity banter/conversation at the last third of the chapter is very Gamgeefest-like fluff-ish type of loveliness that i like a lot as well. :)
I can't wait for the healer to come... Since i remember there was a "pop" before, i hope it's not a dislocation or anything, right? or maybe i just want to healer to prescribe more so that Sam can be smothered in more comfort and care ;)
Great job! and Thank you! =)
Author's reply
Sam should always be smothered with comfort and care, but darn him - he just doesn't allow it to happen very often. :D He has no choice now and so he'll be getting all kinds of comfort, whether he likes it or not. ;) But he's a sneaky one. Notice he didn't actually promise to ask for *Frodo's* help, just that he wouldn't do anything so foolish again. He'll be asking for help when he needs it, but he'll be asking from his friends and neighbors first.
LOL My fluffy cousinly banter does tend to get away from me, and usually for the better. :D It really livens up a chapter and lets us see the hobbits in their truest nature. And Frodo and Merry can never resist a competition of wits.
The healer will be making life very interesting in Bag End hehehe Sam will be getting some bad news though I'm afraid but take heart - it could have been much worse. :)
I'm so glad you're enjoying your present! :D
cookiefleck
· 13 August 2006
· Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Awww, Sam sniffling just about broke my heart! Glad things are put to rights now. I'm impressed with Merry's attitude and insightfulness.
Author's reply
In a perfect world, Sam would never be made to cry and however idealistic the Shire may be, it's not perfect. But thankfully, Sam's sadness was short-lived. :)
Merry's really starting to show his maturity and he's becoming more and more the future Master every year. When it comes to Frodo, he's always known just what to say to cheer him up, but now he's learning to use that to help mend rifts and heal harsh words.
althea
· 13 August 2006
· Chapter 3: Chapter 3
This is such a warm chapter. I'm glad that Frodo and Sam have patched things up. It was a pleasure to read of the cozy comforts of Bag End. I'm glad Sam is being taken care of so well, even if he might find being fussed over by his betters a bit hard to take. I loved the homey conversations.
Author's reply
After all the angst and drama of the last chapter, it was nice to get to the 'comfort' part of this h/c.
Sam finds being fussed over by *anyone* to be somewhat uncomfortable, but that is increased doubly when its his 'betters'. He's going to have to swallow his pride a little bit here and just learn to live with it. :D
If Sam had to fall and hurt himself, he certainly couldn't have done so at a better place than Bag End! It's far more comfortable than his own home and it would be much easier to treat him there also, for all that he might wish he was in his own bed.