A Magical Day by shirebound
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PSW
· 28 November 2015
· Chapter 1
I love the little para near the end from the trees' POV. :-) So cute, I can just picture the three of them having a fantastic camping trip...
Thanks for writing!
Author's reply
Thank you! I have many happy memories of camping, and knew that hobbit lads would enjoy it.
Pearl Took
· 13 May 2006
· Chapter 1
I love this! There is indeed magic all around us, everyday. And it is great to get to share it with people we love. Wonderful!
Author's reply
Thank you, Pearl. *magical hugs*
Mysterious Jedi
· 13 May 2006
· Chapter 1
I like hobbit fluff a lot! Thanks for writing this.
Author's reply
I can never get enough hobbit fluff! Thank you, MJ.
:D
Baggins Babe
· 12 May 2006
· Chapter 1
A lovely, lovely Shirebound story! The magic of the trees - and magic can be found anywhere - and the fun these three have were so wonderful. I love Pip's nervousness over the 'hobbit-snacking goblins'! And Frodo's love for his cousins is perfect.
Thanks for this - I meant to review earlier but dratted real life kept getting in the way.
Author's reply
Awww, thank you, BB! You know I can never get enough of happy, fun-loving, hobbity... hobbits!
:D
Andrea
· 11 May 2006
· Chapter 1
Bilbo had opened his eyes to a larger world than he ever imagined. And now he could share it.
So that was *your* story? I loved it from the first moment on. It's really beautiful!
In particular I liked the bit about the trees. Magic everywhere, indeed :)
Author's reply
Thank you, Andrea! I loved writing it. (I do seem to be writing rather a lot about trees these days. :D)
demeter d
· 11 May 2006
· Chapter 1
A Shirebound story, indeed. Full of Love and Light. People who grew to be strong, loving, confident adults who faced such challenges as they did had to have had strong foundations, nurtured through loving childhoods. thank you for sharing some of the moments that built them.
Author's reply
Oh my, thank you! What a lovely thing to say.
Love and Light... *sniff* *hugs you*
Elemmírë
· 10 May 2006
· Chapter 1
I simply love Frodo's imagination--he truly creates a magical world for his little cousins & he is just so good in entertaining & keeping watch over them (along with gently teasing them, as well).
Pippin is so very cute! I just want to cuddle him right up (although I suspect I'd have to wait in a very long line to do so)!
I also liked how you presented Frodo & Merry's relationship with each other & the importance of Frodo's happiness. It's a very mature realization for Merry to see & understand that his Frodo is much happier living with Bilbo at Bag End then he was in Brandy Hall ... & yet that Frodo still loves him & misses him just as much.
'Merry looked into Frodo’s sparkling, happy face. “You really do like living with Cousin Bilbo, don’t you?”
“Very much,” Frodo said softly.
“Good,” Merry said, smiling bravely. “I miss you awfully, though,” he whispered in Frodo’s ear.
“I miss you awfully, too,” Frodo whispered back.'
What I enjoyed the most was how you had Frodo himself realize just how much he enjoys learning all the things Bilbo shows him & that he wants to pass all of that along to Merry & Pippin. Also that through that realization, Frodo comes to understand the deep meaning it has for Bilbo, to be able to have someone to share his wisdom with, finally, who not only will listen, but _wants_ to.
Well done!
Author's reply
Thank you so much. I do th;ink that Bilbo was ever so grateful to have finally found someone (after so many years alone) to appreciate what he could teach. And how could Frodo not pass along everything to his beloved cousins? :D
Larner
· 10 May 2006
· Chapter 1
The calmer kin to the Old Forest realizes that Hobbits are the right folk to have at hand, and may even do their best to protect them.
And glad to see Frodo learning to be happy with Bilbo, and Bilbo finding happiness in teaching Frodo.
Author's reply
Thank you, Larner. I have such a weakness for writing (and reading about) the happy and peaceful moments in Frodo's life.
Budgielover
· 10 May 2006
· Chapter 1
Would you like to know when I was certain this was a Shirebound story? It was just a few words, "his armful of cousins." I had suspected it from the first, because the visual image of little Pippin sitting on Merry was just so immediately heart-warming, and then Frodo scooping him up and growling in his ear. What confirmed this was a Shirebound story was the happy, wistful feeling I had at the end of it, wishing I could be part of their lives.
Author's reply
I really did try to 'disguise' myself when I started writing this, but gave up about halfway through. Armfuls, scooping, blankets, happy endings... ah well! *grins* Thank you, Budgie!
Tigger
· 10 May 2006
· Chapter 1
Sigh...How I needed a sweet, lovely and fluffy story like that tonight. Magic really is all around us if we know where to look for it. Just a lovely, lovely story shirebound dear.
Now...Do you know where I could find my own version of Snips? He sounds delightful!! :o)
Author's reply
I'm glad this fluffyness was there for you today, Tigger!
*Snips and hobbits hug and snuggle with you*
Queen Galadriel
· 10 May 2006
· Chapter 1
Aaawww! How sweet! I just adore little Pippin! :) And Frodo is such a wonderful big cousin! I've been saving this for the end of the day, because I knew I'd want a nice fluffy little fic then, and I wasn't disappointed!
God bless,
Galadriel
Author's reply
There's something SO snuggly about little Pippin! Thank you so much. I'm happy to be able to give you a fluff-fix when you need it!
:D
PIppinfan1988
· 10 May 2006
· Chapter 1
The magic of it all...and so true! The smoke from the camp fire...the fresh aroma of spring...and three wonderful lads to make it all complete. :-) I so enjoyed this little tale--I was sorry to see it end. I also loved the touch of awareness with the trees. Excellent. :-)
Pippinfan
Author's reply
Thank you, Pippinfan. Magic *is* where we find it... and think to look for it.
:D
Elanor Silmariën
· 10 May 2006
· Chapter 1
Awww, how cute! Love love love little hobbits!
God bless,
Ellie
Author's reply
Me too! Wee!hobbits!!
:D
Antane
· 10 May 2006
· Chapter 1
Sweet! Anytime I can see Frodo happy is fine with me and Pippin is so cute! I love Merry not warning him that their beloved cousin is coming up behind him.
What love between these three!
Namarie, God bless, Antane :)
Author's reply
Thank you, Antane. When hobbits are happy, I'm happy, too!
Hobbits = Love
:D
Dreamflower
· 10 May 2006
· Chapter 1
Just popped in to say: She made this for meeeee!! Wheee!
Author's reply
*hugs and snuggles*
Auntiemeesh
· 10 May 2006
· Chapter 1
What a sweet little adventure for Pippin! And for Merry, although he tries to be too grown up to really believe the magic, lol.
I loved this; “Will we really have an adventure, Frodo?” Pippin asked hopefully. “Will there be scary things that don’t eat us, and lots of magic?”
What a perfect wee Pippin moment. :D
Author's reply
Prof. Tolkien does say that Frodo's best friends were his cousins, Merry and Pippin. The three of them just had to have had a lot of "sweet adventures" over the years.
I love that line, too! Thank you for highlighting it, and for enjoying this story.
:D
harrowcat
· 10 May 2006
· Chapter 1
Bilbo had opened his eyes to a larger world than he ever imagined. And now he could share it.
And thank YOU for sharing your larger vision of Tolkien's world with all of us. This is so sweet.
Author's reply
Awwww. *blush* Thank you.
lbilover
· 10 May 2006
· Chapter 1
*squee* I adored this story- Frodo's care for Pippin, the way he is able to make the day magical for him; Paladin's perceptive comment about Frodo quoting Bilbo so often; Frodo speaking to the trees, and laying his hand on the bark, calling to mind the Quest and Lorien. Lovely and loving and gentle.
Author's reply
Oh my, thank you. I think you highlighted all of *my* favorite parts! :D
SlightlyTookish
· 10 May 2006
· Chapter 1
Eeeee, this is absolutely charming! Pippin is the most adorable little lad ever! I love Frodo's story at the end, it's a wonderful thought, being able to find magic in anything. And oh! WHen you said it was a deserted Ranger camp I thought for sure we'd catch a glimpse of oen or two. You didn't write about the rest of their camping trip. Maybe a Ranger does appear, or is just hidden in the woods, watching and protecting...maybe it's even Estel! *bounces* :D
Author's reply
Maybe *you* will write about the rest of their camping trip! That would be so cool. *evil grin*
I'm happy you enjoyed this!