Reviews (24)

Antane · 4 June 2006 · Chapter 7: New Beginnings

"I want you both to know that living here has made me happier than I've been since my parents died," he began, then paused. "With the exception of Merry being born, of course. After talking with you, Uncle, I've realized that coming here isn't just a move across the Shire, but it should also be a move towards regaining the life I had before the accident. I've neer had better friends than you, Sam, and you Uncle Bilbo." I must have missed this chapter somehow because I wasn't aware until now it had ended. Love the above, esp. the move towards regaining the life I had before the accident. He's learning joy again, the light we shall see later and I know those two, Sam and Bilbo, and Merry and soon Pippin, are the reasons for that. Best friends, forever, indeed! Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

Queen Galadriel · 6 April 2006 · Chapter 7: New Beginnings

Oh, Ellie, what a perfect way to end this wonderful story! I loved it--just beautiful! Now I'm off to read the one you've just begun! God bless, Galadriel

Frodo Baggins · 6 April 2006 · Chapter 7: New Beginnings

Oh Ellie! I almost had to go for the tissue box on that one...and not for my allergies, either. That was beautiful. It is so hard to move, but it's a wonderful thing when the move means new oppurtunities. Glad you loved teenpact! The classe over here is in May, so no, I haven't gone yet. I'll turn sixteen while at Teenpact. That will be a cool birthday! :) ANyway, thanks for the warm wishes on the term paper! Namarie, mellon nin! God Bless, Frodo Baggins

Arwen of Lorien · 6 April 2006 · Chapter 7: New Beginnings

Oh goodness. Its finished! Should I be happy or sad? I am so glad Frodo is happy,,so I will be too. Great story El! Congrats! Namarie, young Master Baggins and Sam, may your friendship keep growing, (you will need it.) Ohhh I saw another story of yours abouve this one.I must go read it now.... ~Arwen

Larner · 5 April 2006 · Chapter 7: New Beginnings

A restitution of sorts, and an indication Frodo is beyond such childish things now. Lovely.

Frodo Baggins · 4 April 2006 · Chapter 6: Confessions

This was great, Ellie. Poor Frodo...it is so easy to get into trouble when you're out of sorts. And the Bible does say bad company corrupts good character. It's happened to me a few times. I love your characters, and your writing style. Speaking of, I should go and write that term paper...*blusing* Namarie, mell min! God Bless, Frodo Baggins

Arwen of Lorien · 30 March 2006 · Chapter 6: Confessions

Oh yes, pins and needles indeed! How did you know? I came on yesterday but forgot to connect, so I saw your story near top but I did not get to read the next chapter cause it wasnt there! (Elves are easily confused with theses new age internet things. *Heh*) And this chapter! Fro! You little!..you little.. Lets just say I never thought 'little fro' would learn all this stuff and be SUCH a tweenager. Sam is such a cute lil hobbit. ;) Alright! so when does our dear self-sacrificing hobbit grow up? Keep that keyboard going and going and... God bless & namarie mellon-nin! -Arwen @ Lorien

Queen Galadriel · 29 March 2006 · Chapter 6: Confessions

Oh my goodness, yes! Tweens and trouble seem to imply one another. Setting a whole bunch of frogs loose in the hall...LOL! LOL! Oh my goodness gracious, that's hilarious! I like the realistic way you portray Frodo, and I love Bilbo's fatherly love. Keep it up, keep it up! You know we love it! God bless, Galadriel

Larner · 29 March 2006 · Chapter 6: Confessions

Glad you got the publish button pushed at last. So, Frodo deserves the title of rascal of Brandy Hall, does he? And setting the frogs loose at a large party was wonderful. Little Bro once caught a number he put in a gallon mayonnaise bottle, setting the lid loosely on it so they could breathe. He wasn't to bring them in the house but did, and set the jar on the shelves between the chimney and the wall. Mom had a number of ladies from the church coming in, and one of the cats became interested in that jar. Not long after the last of the visitors came in, the cat knocked over the jar, and we outside heard screams as ladies came spilling out of the house and down the hill. It was quite a wonderful show, you see. Glad Bilbo is finding Frodo amenable to correction. He's a nice lad, he is.

Queen Galadriel · 28 March 2006 · Chapter 5: Stories... and more hellos

Awww! What a sweet chapter! I love young Sam, already so protective of his Mr. Frodo, and I love the way you write Bell. Keep it up! God bless, Galadriel

Larner · 25 March 2006 · Chapter 5: Stories... and more hellos

Lovely images here. And of course Bilbo would spot the signs of the beating from Maggot. And we see the beginning of Sam's loyalty.

Larner · 25 March 2006 · Chapter 4: Goodbyes.....and Hellos!

It's always fun imagining that first meeting.

Arwen of Lorien · 25 March 2006 · Chapter 5: Stories... and more hellos

Yah! I am connected again! So happy to see new chapters, this is making into a great pre-lort story for Fro and Sam, I love the Way you show how Frodo made such good relationships with his favorite hobbits'es. Who is he going to meet next? Talk later El! BBAACCOONN!;) Namarie! God bless,Arwen

Queen Galadriel · 22 March 2006 · Chapter 3: Plans Gone Awry

Right! Pretend you're fine and no one will notice! Uh-huh, that will really work. *sigh* Ooooh, I can't wait for the next chapter! God bless, Galadriel

Queen Galadriel · 22 March 2006 · Chapter 2: Plans

Goodness, I've gotten behind already! Oh dear, oh dear. Frodo, you're about to take it one step too far. Love the hat LOL! Very cute! :) God bless, Galadriel

Frodo Baggins · 18 March 2006 · Chapter 3: Plans Gone Awry

Oh, my dear Ellie! This is only getting better and better! But poor Frodo! I know he probably deserved it, but still! Keep up the good work! Namarie! GOd Bless, Frodo Baggins

Arwen of Lorien · 17 March 2006 · Chapter 3: Plans Gone Awry

OOhh! Farmer Maggots some hobbit! I know why Frodo didn't really want to meet him again in the book. Poor lad, but thats what you get when you annoy someone like that old farmer who loves his mushrooms even more than the young rascals I think. Bilbo! Will Frodo be sad to leave his family and friends? Or is he to much like his uncle and loves adventure? About time there was another chapter! How long must your fans wait for the next? He He ;) Have fun on your trip El! Namarie & God bless! QL Arwen

Larner · 17 March 2006 · Chapter 3: Plans Gone Awry

Yes, pretend you're fine. Like he could truly get away with it! Poor Frodo--just did himself in, didn't he?

Larner · 13 March 2006 · Chapter 2: Plans

Yes, it's about time for Bilbo to take Frodo in hand, I think. Silly lads; and I love the hat!

Larner · 13 March 2006 · Chapter 1: Mushrooms and Carrots

Interesting foreshadowing moment there with the fiery eye. Poor Frodo. "You're gonna get caught, just you wait and see!" "Why is everybody always pickin' on me?" Sorry--Charlie Brown crept in there.

Arwen of Lorien · 11 March 2006 · Chapter 2: Plans

Elli! I logged on, read a story, got off that story, and then saw two new storys by your name! I was pleased. This was a great next chapter girl! I loved the way you wrote out the Maggot lines, sounds just like them! And the Gandalf hat..LOL! Bacon's Predictions! Namarie,God Bless, Arwen

Frodo Baggins · 9 March 2006 · Chapter 1: Mushrooms and Carrots

This is great. I know Frodo must have gotten into trouble when he was that age. But what tween doesn't, right? I can't wait to see what happens next! God Bless, Frodo Baggins

Arwen of Lorian · 8 March 2006 · Chapter 1: Mushrooms and Carrots

What a cute hobbit story El! Glad you got another one on here. I wonder if it is the first tale here involving Frodos mushroom-snatching days? Talk later! Smiles and God bless! (lorain)Nammarie,Arwen

Queen Galadriel · 8 March 2006 · Chapter 1: Mushrooms and Carrots

Uh-oh, not good. You show Frodo's rascally side very well. :) I quite enjoy your depiction of Saradoc as the softer father-type: "Oh, it's no harm. All lads do it when they're tweens." *grin* Poor Esme! And I like it that the older lads agree to go frog-hunting with Merry and don't shun him. Just one thing, and this is up to you. You might change "okay" for "all right," as in this genre of fanfic modern words will sometimes throw people out of the story. Are you planning on posting the first story in the series here? If not, can you give me the web address? Can't wait to see more of this! God bless, Galadriel