coonzalas · 11 June 2004 · Chapter 1: A Forgotten Casualty
Excellent! Your descriptions were wonderful! I don't usually show a lot of emotion physically when reading, but the Nazgûl scene made me cringe. Great job! Namàrië! coon
Author's reply
Glad I made you cringe! And I'm especially glad you liked the descriptions, because that's essentially what this story was. No dialogue, just a lot of narrative. Which makes it harder to write because you can't break the action apart by inserting dialogue bits. Pacing becomes far more important than it normally does. Anyway, thanks again!