Feet by Endaewen

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SlightlyTookish · 25 May 2006 · Chapter 3: Frostbitten

Oh poor Pippin! I can definitely imagine that the hobbits would have suffered from frostbite. Caradhras must have been so difficult for them. It's good to see him get the care he needs, and I really liked Merry's generosity of offering up his scarf.

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Glad you liked it. Thanks for the review

pipspebble · 24 May 2006 · Chapter 3: Frostbitten

Poor Pippin! This is a very good start to what promises to be a very good story. Do continue and share with the rest of us. I am already hooked. :-)

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Thanks for the review.

Andrea · 12 February 2006 · Chapter 3: Frostbitten

[...] as the young hobbit had quite a bit of pride and didn't want to ask for help. That's certainly true, and not only for Pippin! I wonder how much persuasion it took the rest of the Fellowship to make the hobbits wear boots, though ;-)

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Thank you for the comment.

harrowcat · 12 February 2006 · Chapter 3: Frostbitten

Aw poor Pippin. The thought of three hobbits trying to peer over Strider's shoulder gave me a grin though!

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Thanks for the review.

Dreamflower · 11 February 2006 · Chapter 3: Frostbitten

Aw, poor Pip! Caradhras had to have been dreadful for our lads! The idea that one or more of them might have suffered frostbite had occured to me--I'm glad to see it in a fic!

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Thanks for the review.

Larner · 11 February 2006 · Chapter 3: Frostbitten

Poor lad. It's not a pleasant experience, although I've known only the mildest forms of it.

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Andrea · 9 February 2006 · Chapter 2: Slivers

[...] it went against my instincts and training to leave anyone in unnecessary pain when I have a chance to try and help, especially someone who was becoming a friend. That's Aragorn in "healer mode" as we love him! I like Dreamflower's word creations :) Frodo was the first one to begin to trust Strider. Maybe, this little episode helped the others to overcome their suspicions.

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Thanks for the wonderful review. Glad you liked the story.

Dreamflower · 9 February 2006 · Chapter 2: Slivers

And here we get to see Aragorn in healer mode, something I always love. I really like the realism of this, especially his observation that travelling through the marshes might have softened the hobbits' feet up. Very well done'

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Thanks for the review.

Dreamflower · 9 February 2006 · Chapter 1: Burrs

Ah, burrs, stickers, brambles--all a hazard to a race with furry feet that habitually goes barefoot! I like seeing this from Strider's POV. He's going to be interested for several reasons: as an observation on hobbits in general, as a healer who might have to deal with the aftermath if it got too bad, and as their guide, who might have to watch out for anything that would slow them down.

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Thanks for the review.

Grey Wonderer · 8 February 2006 · Chapter 1: Burrs

Very sweet the way Sam insisted on taking care of Bill first. The discriptions in this are wonderful.

Larner · 8 February 2006 · Chapter 2: Slivers

Another situation with which I, as one who went barefoot much of the summer, was well experienced as a child.

Larner · 8 February 2006 · Chapter 1: Burrs

An interesting dilemma I can certainly empathise with, from a momma to innumerable pomeranians over the years! Heh!

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Thanks. The burrs were bad enough on a German Shepherd. I never want to find out what they're like on a horses' tail. LOL

harrowcat · 8 February 2006 · Chapter 2: Slivers

Liked this a lot Endawen! But now there is a conundrum. How do you keep that part of a hobbit's foot clean enough for it to heal? I know the problems I have in the Summer when I wear sandals a lot and suffer from cracked heels!

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Thanks for the review.

Indigo Bunting · 30 January 2006 · Chapter 1: Burrs

This is a clever idea for a story. I am curious as to what else you have in mind for the hobbits' feet. This installment certainly brought a chuckle. Your writing is very clean - very smooth and natural. Good work.

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Thank you for the review. I have a few things planned.