daw the minstrel
· 9 January 2006
· Chapter 1: Chapter One
You do such a wonderful job with little details like the 1000year old manuscript that Amrothos fans her with. And Eomer proposes! That's so great.
They're really quite different in temperament. She's usually so rational and he's quite physical. He's smart though and careful. And she's capable of passion. They'll be good for one another.
But oh the thought of leaving everything and moving to Rohan where even the language is different! That must be daunting even if it's what she's expected.
Author's reply
I'm addicted to details. I read a lot about Medieval history and pick up many little things, keeping them in mind, hoping I can use them one day. And I love it when the readers pick them up.
Bodkin
· 7 January 2006
· Chapter 1: Chapter One
I do like Amrothos. And Erchirion. Lothiriel has two very bright and likeable brothers there! Although it could be said that Amrothos is typically the youngest son - he doesn't have to be too serious and practical as he is neither heir nor spare. However - he could have let Erchirion get the word in first!
And why couldn't Imrahil pen a brief note to his daughter? Really, telling the big brother to do his dirty work isn't very tactful. (Perhaps that's where Amrothos gets it from!)
Amrothos is right that Lothiriel's tendency to stop breathing when under pressure is a touch worrying - but this must be a pretty big roller coaster. First unexpected feelings for Eomer - then a betrothal - and only then discovering that she has been betrothed to her lust object!
Eomer has done rather a good job with that proposal, though. Simple, direct, honest - and designed by a man with a strong-willed sister, who doesn't want to be on the defensive when he meets his bride. Not gushing. But then, their relationship is hardly at that level.
Such fun!
Author's reply
I don't think that would have been the brightest idea, writing her a letter: "Daughter dearest, I just arranged your betrothal." I suppose Imrahil wanted Erchiron to bring the news to Lothíriel in a sensitive way, but there was one thing he hadn't reckoned with: Amrothos.
That was a grave neglect on his part, indeed. You should always reckon with Amrothos.
Nilmandra
· 7 January 2006
· Chapter 1: Chapter One
I love that Eomer managed to turn her on her head yet again. Such a concept, asking her for her consent! :D
Author's reply
Asking for her consent gives him the feeling he is still in control; and gives her the feeling that her wishes matter. But it is most likely Imrahil who holds all the reins.