Reviews (16)

LisaG · 9 February 2010 · Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Oh my goodness...this was absolutely hysterical!!! You've really taken the characters to new dimensions that are perfectly in keeping with who they are and how they would react. I adored the Aragorn/Eomer talk...these two clearly respect and care for one another, yet Aragorn is much more experienced in life and had some excellent advice for the new young King of Rohan. I was chuckling right along there with Aragorn in his amusement of Eomer's reactions not only to his advice, but most especially to Imrahil's proposal! The scene with Eomer and Eowyn was wonderfully done, too. Clearly, they adore each other and their teasing shows true sibling rivalry. I loved the way Eowyn slowly, sneakily (is that a word?) pushed Eomer to admit his attraction and feelings for Lothíriel...he's a smitten kitten! :)

whitewave · 29 June 2008 · Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Laughed out loud at the line where Eomer actually counts to the last day when he last kissed her, he's so smitten! I loved the line: "she is the only daughter you have . . . at least officially". I also enjoyed Eowyn's advice and reaction to her brother's predicament and her very thorough cross examination. I've said this to another author before and I truly believe she should have been a lawyer. I also enjoyed Eomer's suggestion of having himself blindfolded so he can choose a bride.

whitewave · 29 June 2008 · Chapter 1: Chapter One

As usual, the installment does not disappoint--poor Eomer being besieged from all sides! The first few paragraphs had me thinking just who it was who was touching Eomer so and boy was I surprised when I found out. Loved the uniqueness of Firefoot that Eomer had taught him to glare. Loved what happened to the captain of Aragorn's guard, I like the way Eothain expresses his liking for someone! I like how you assign a more prominent role to Erchirion here.

nautika · 9 August 2007 · Chapter 2: Chapter Two

I'm not sure if I'm reviewing these stories in order. I started reading with the second, third, fourth and then went to the first, I think? But they are each and every one absolutely delightful! In this one, you can see Imrahil's sincereity, but you just *have* to laugh along with Aragorn. How can the input of a King like Eomer be so completely ... overlooked? It's as if he is a child - and of course to Aragorn and Imrahil he is - but still it is wonderful to watch him try to express himself in a way they will heed. :D Aragorn's advice is something we could all learn from: "...do not refuse for the wrong reason; do not reject it because you feel ambushed or pressured by the way the offer was made.” This is my favorite quote in this story (and possibly the entire series) and I think it says wonderful things about Eomer. "When I let another human being into my life, do you not think I should have at least the courtesy to share some of that life with her?" Thank you for sharing your view of these characters with us!

future_oxfordlass · 25 February 2006 · Chapter 2: Chapter Two

one word 4 this chapter: hilarious! absolutely adored this one. favorites file. keep it up!

Lady Saruman · 28 January 2006 · Chapter 1: Chapter One

what a great story!!! i liked the beginning. it's like, Firefoot all tender, caressing Eomer while glaring at Aragorn. well, a horse is a horse, and especially a fierce one. of course Aragorn can't befriend the stallion, because the stallion thinks that Aragorn is the one that has just offended the king of Rohan...sleeping with a horse???!!!!!!!!! YUCK!! it's a wonder that Firefoot doesn't drop a mess all over Eomer (if you know what i mean) And with Imrahil. He's basically a wierd guy... he can still consider marrying his daughter to a horse-sleeping man, no matter how good he may be??? AAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH! good story! -Lady Saruman ^_^ $$$

daw the minstrel · 8 January 2006 · Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Lovely. You really do conversations very well.

daw the minstrel · 8 January 2006 · Chapter 1: Chapter One

One of the best ending lines I've ever read! LOL I enjoyed the fatherly counsel Aragorn gives to Eomer. There's a big difference in their ages that I tend to forget. And the politics of Rohan are very well explained. I can see how they revolve around the king.

ShirePirate · 3 January 2006 · Chapter 2: Chapter Two

I am so glad to have found your stories again. I love them! I hope you will re-post the next story in this saga soon.

Nilmandra · 31 December 2005 · Chapter 2: Chapter Two

I loved Eowyn in this - she is so much like Eomer. I wonder if Faramir and Lothiriel could have had a similar converation and made so much sense as well. And Aragorn seemed to truly enjoy himself. Ah, still laughing. Thank you.

Bodkin · 31 December 2005 · Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Well. He didn't make the first move. Or the second. He hasn't given in to the Council's request or the advice of his friends - but he'll be going to bed with a smile on his face. He is betrothed to the healer who drives him quietly insane. I just love the way he switches off at the mention of her name and fails to hear Imrahil's carefully worded proposal. I'm with Aragorn on this - and so impressed that he managed not to break down into giggles. And Eowyn is lovely. I hope she turns up again later in the story. It's no wonder that Eomer can cope with a Lothiriel who is assured in her healing skills (even if he can't cope with her ... desirability) with a confident and somewhat bossy sister having trained him since his youth. And he may come to be grateful for the Dol Amroth brothers who have trained a determined little sister who can stand up to almost anything. I think the openness of Rohan will make it a good place for Lothiriel.

Kitty · 31 December 2005 · Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Natürlich ist das Zitat von Friedrich dem Großen wahr, aber ich habe trotzdem ein gewisses Mitgefühl mit Éomer. Er ist ziemlich Hals über Kopf in eine Situation bzw. Position gestoßen worden, auf die er nicht oder nur sehr wenig vorbereitet war – immerhin hätte die etwas zweifelhafte Ehre ja Théodred gebührt. Jetzt ist er vollauf damit beschäftigt, sein Volk über den Winter und die Kriegsschäden zu bringen, und zum Dank lassen sie ihn keinen Moment in Ruhe! Und ich fange an, mich zu fragen, was eigentlich Lothíriel und Arwen darüber denken, daß man sie offenbar quasi als Zuchtvieh sieht, das so schnell wie möglich einen Erben zu produzieren hat ... sind die so pflichtbewußt, daß sie das einfach hinnehmen? So, Imrahil bedauert, daß Éomer seine Tochter nicht näher kennenlernen konnte? Jetzt frag ich mich, wieviel er weiß *gg* A woman of strength who has a mind of her own does not bother you. You can accept somebody strong at your side. Nicht nur das – man könnte auch sagen, Éomer braucht so jemand, der ihm notfalls auch mal Paroli bieten kann! Danach klingt auch Imrahils andere Bemerkung: “In any quarrel between my children, that I can remember, she was always the last one standing.” Why doesn’t *that* surprise me? Éowyn ist ein Schatz! Ich glaube, sie war genau das, was ihr Bruder in diesem Moment brauchte – jemand, dem er vertraut, mit dem er reden kann, der ihn aber nicht mit aller Gewalt in eine bestimmte Richtung drängt, der ihm zuhört und hilft, seine Gedanken und Gefühle zu ordnen. Oh, eine kleine Frage: Als Imrahil das Zimmer verläßt, heißt es: ... but only until the door had barely shut behind the retreating Dúnadan. Sollte das nicht vielleicht eher der Fürst von Dol Amroth sein? Der Dúnadan ist doch eigentlich Aragorn?

Alison H · 29 December 2005 · Chapter 1: Chapter One

I have already read this finished story elsewhere but I couldn't resist reading this chapter again as it's one of my favourite's.The dialogue between Eomer and Aragorn is just delicious! I loved every word, every nuance and then read it all again.You certainly have a talent for witty repartee! The Eomer you have created is both heroic and vulnerable and he knows his weaknesses but being compared to his Grandmother was certainly not what he was expecting from Aragorn.Also, Aragorn's concern for Eomer's well being is very, very touching--even though he would like to give him a slap! That Eomer regards Aragorn with almost hero-worship but responds to him as a brother is also very endearing.I love their relationship in this story. Well done for a wonderful chapter and I hope to see an update of your current story soon. Happy New Year to you! Ali.

Bodkin · 29 December 2005 · Chapter 1: Chapter One

I love the start. It takes several sentences before the identity of Eomer's bedmate is apparent - and then you just think 'typical'! Eomer is so determinedly un-king-like - and yet, at the same time, he has the disregard of convention that shows how confident he is in his position. And he was able to disconcert Aragorn with his unexpected knowledge of Sindarin! I love Aragorn's response to him throughout this chapter - both his irritation and his amusement. And Imrahil! What a moment to recommence discussion of the subject that is driving Eomer wild! Poor Eomer doesn't stand a chance here. Good thing he is hormonally incapable of resisting the word 'Lothiriel'!

Kitty · 28 December 2005 · Chapter 1: Chapter One

“I swear,” Aragorn declared, “that he is the only horse I have ever come across who is actually able to glare.” “I trained him myself,” Éomer murmured Muß sehr erfolgreich gewesen sein. Éomers Fähigkeiten in der Hinsicht wurden ja auch schon von Imrahil bewundert *gg* Wenn Firefoot auf dem Pferd Deiner Schwester basiert, dann hoffe ich aber sehr, das ist auch so nett zu ihr wie Firefoot zu seinem Herrn! Läßt ihr Friese eigentlich Schmied, Tierarzt etc. an sich ran, oder werden die zum Dessert verspeist? Was soll ich zu diesem Kapitel sagen? Einerseits kann ich all diejenigen verstehen, die sich um Éomers Sicherheit sorgen bzw. auf einen Erben drängen. Andererseits kann ich nur zu gut verstehen, daß dieses ständige Einmischen in seine Privatsphäre Éomer zur Weißglut treibt und eher Trotzreaktionen hervorruft. Würde mir auch nicht anders gehen! Er hat sich beeindruckend gut in der Gewalt, wenn er noch keinen seiner Ratgeber attackiert oder zumindest rausgeschmissen hat. Und der Schluß ist ja wieder mal ein richtiger Knalleffekt! Armer Éomer, nach all der Zeit des Totschweigens muß das jetzt ein dicker Schock sein!

Nilmandra · 27 December 2005 · Chapter 1: Chapter One

I like fiery, hot tempered Eomer... and I love equally the idea that graceful, articulate Imrahil wants to discuss his headstrong, unconventional daughter with this man who just slept with his horse!