Armariel · 16 December 2005 · Chapter 1: A Liminal Patience
Wonderful writing. The imagery is so solid, so detailed, striking, poetic and poignant, sensuous without being at all improper, and beautifully restrained...well, I almost feel sorry for Grima! This is perfection. Keep it up!
Author's reply
Thank you so much! I'd hoped to express his longing evocatively, but also have a bit of a creepy edge of foreshadowing… Many thanks for reading and sharing your comments.