Reviews (4)

Hampstead · 6 December 2005 · Chapter 1: This is Not Our Farewell

Oh, dear, NEVER write in the present tense unless it's a screenplay!

Andrea · 30 November 2005 · Chapter 1: This is Not Our Farewell

Now, this is a completely new idea for me! Bilbo offered Frodo to come and live with him at Bag End just a week after the funeral. But Frodo was not ready to part from his parents, not yet! It's different from a lot of other stories I've read so far, but it's absolutely believable! I would really like to know how things develop in the following years. Is there a chance for a sequel? Please?

Larner · 30 November 2005 · Chapter 1: This is Not Our Farewell

Sadness and grief can be overwhelming. I'm sorry Frodo didn't take Bilbo up on the offer then, really, but can certainly understand.

Dreamflower · 29 November 2005 · Chapter 1: This is Not Our Farewell

I'm so glad you got this posted! I keep thinking about the song--it really is so Frodo. You did a very good job with this, Nina dear.