In the Dark by White Wolf
Tiari Clovis · 1 March 2007 · Chapter 1
Ohhhh, very creepy! You should do another one! Makes me wonder if they'll ever get out...?
Author's reply
I didn't receive a notification of this review, so I'm very late on the response. I just might do another one. I left it to the reader to decide that. :o)
Tithenmamiwhen · 13 November 2006 · Chapter 1
Great story! Loved how you linked the beginnig ang ending together. Are you going to do a sequel to this story though?
Author's reply
Please forgive the long delay in responding. This site no longer informs me of a new review. Thank you. I think the link between the beginning and the end adds to the mystery and also the horror of the situation. Glad you liked it. No, there is no sequesl planned. I left it to the reader to decide how things turned out.
iteralday · 9 December 2005 · Chapter 1
I dont understand!!!,was it like a dwarven door, that is invisible when closed,and did they both go into different rooms without realizing it?
Author's reply
Sorry for the delay in answering. The review notification feature doesn't always work. I wrote this story to create a scary atmosphere. I left it to the readers' imagination to come up with their own answers. However you choose to see it, is how it is for you. Others may see it differently, and that is perfectly fine, as well.
pippinrocks · 14 November 2005 · Chapter 1
very nice story but was the scraping noise
Author's reply
Thank you. I think one of the things that makes the story scary is that no one knews what's making the scraping noise.
Nightwing · 11 November 2005 · Chapter 1
Aaaaiiieee!!! The stuff of nightmare.
Author's reply
Yes indeed. I'd be terrified in their place.
docmon · 9 November 2005 · Chapter 1
wow, that was a spooky tale. I love the cliffhanger, knowing Aragorn's about to go through the same thing. And with no ending, no answer - completely evil! Well done!
Author's reply
You are one of the few who liked the ending. Most want to know what happened to Legolas and Aragorn. Leaving that up to the reader is evil, isn't it?
harrowcat · 9 November 2005 · Chapter 1
Woo, scarey stuff and not to be read at 1am!
Author's reply
That's the best time to read it, especially with the room lights out. :o)
Jay of Lasgalen · 9 November 2005 · Chapter 1
Ooh! Very eerie and creepy - I like this. BUT WHAT HAPPENED TO THEM?? Jay
Author's reply
Eerie and creepy were my goals. I'm glad you like it. As for what happened to them, I know it's wicked, but I left that to the reader. :o)