Raksha The Demon
· 15 September 2005
· Chapter 9: Cushions and Contractions
Sweat-streaked sparring Dunedain - and then they start stripping off shirts! I think a Faramir/Aragorn sparring scene should be regularly featured in your stories. Nice humorous bits about Aragorn's disheveled hair.
Aragorn's pleasure at Faramir's good state of health and relaxed emotional state seems strangely ominous...I keep hearing the shark theme from the movie JAWS in my head...
Author's reply
Thank you for sending my first review of this for several days !I'm pleased you liked the sparring scene.It was fun to write and a theme Imay return to in future. I had them change their shirts for several reasons, to please their wives,also to please my readers and then to show how comfortable Faramir now was with Aragorn after being so shy in Shadow and Thought.
You are quite right,cue ominous music !
Bodkin
· 12 September 2005
I'm glad to see Eowyn and Arwen getting on so well.
And Hanna has escaped and seized Elbeth? That doesn't sound good. It's not as if she was good at looking after the kid before.
Elf/human pregnancy - imagine an extra three months of expecting a baby! Arwen should keep her fingers crossed for a simple nine months.
Raksha The Demon
· 12 September 2005
· Chapter 5: The Merry Wives of Gondor
Very funny - it was lovely to see Arwen and Eowyn written with a sense of humor.
harrowcat
· 11 September 2005
· Chapter 5: The Merry Wives of Gondor
I am enjoying a re-read of this story on this site. Thanks for putting it here.
Bodkin
· 11 September 2005
· Chapter 5: The Merry Wives of Gondor
This is a wicked story. Of the kind much appreciated by wives. Who know just when to hint at it with a knowing twinkle - and subdue their husbands.
Poor perfect elf. He's not accustomed to such humiliation.
A very funny incident.
Larner
· 9 September 2005
· Chapter 0: The King and the Steward
Am glad to see this one posted here as well. It's been a wonderful tale to follow, I must say, and I was glad to read it to the end. Won't read the whole thing here, but am very glad it is gracing this site.
Author's reply
Thank you so much for your kind words,it is thanks to your encouragement that I am posting my story here.
Bodkin
· 9 September 2005
· Chapter 0: The King and the Steward
I haven't had a moment to read it yet - but I'm glad to see this starting. (And to know the ending!!)
Author's reply
I'm honoured you are interested in reading it here too !I Expect to change a few minor details to make it suitable for this site.