“Galadriel’s voice held the bloodstained shadow of Alqualondë; the attrition of the Grinding Ice; the final echo of the screams in Menegroth.” – ooh, that is haunting.
Glorfindel’s little horse was Asfaloth? How wonderful! *g* The twins smiles seem rather creepy to me. I almost feel sorry for Glorfindel. “Elf of mystery...” Then again, Glorfindel needs to learn to laugh at his own golden self.
Perfect conclusion. I really enjoyed this story. ;)
-Kitt
Kitt Otter
· 17 May 2008
· Chapter 10: Excuses
I had to laugh (maybe with some wickedness) at the suggestion of asking Aule the new meaning of their words...
It was sweet when Legolas quoted Gimli.
I loved the moment Celebrian had with her sons, blooming so warmly with their affection.
-Kitt
Kitt Otter
· 16 May 2008
· Chapter 8: Royal Displeasure
Now the twins know they knew! Well, it was fun while it lasted... but Legolas is right. Brave of him to stand up to Galadriel. *g* And the aftereffect - just how many Elves really have been mimicking the twin's vocabulary? I guess this has a long way yet to being resolved.
-Kitt
Kitt Otter
· 15 May 2008
· Chapter 6: Awareness
Good, Gimli told Aragorn; at least he won't embarass himself further. I trully can imagine why Arwen does not want to spoil it for her brothers. "eyes of liquid starlight" - that was good; simple and poetic.
I liked the interaction between Elrond and Celebrian; their happy thought from the long seperation from their sons could only me smile. (As well as the "conversation" they overheard).
-Kitt
Kitt Otter
· 13 May 2008
· Chapter 4: Brothers Beneath the Skin
Poignant scene for Galadriel and Celeborn, tied flawlessly through with the discussion of their grandson’s, uh, battle cries.
Light in dark indeed.
I like the way you expressed how the twins hide their sadness in mirth. At least Gimli is wise enough not to be the one to tell them, and to watch out for his Elf.
And Aragorn does it too! Oh sigh.
-Kitt
Ha! So many knew. It took at least an age for the twins to catch on, did it not? : )
‘Wilier,’ Glorfindel contradicted him. ‘By far.’ - That is my favorite line. Wily is too fitting of a word.
-Kitt
Kitt Otter
· 10 May 2008
· Chapter 1: Discretion
Redheredh directed me to this story and I am not disapointed. This is fun. You have simple, vivid descriptions that I admire. Oh, the revelation in the twins and Legolas's conversation was too funny. How embarrassing for the two Els, though. At least their family is merciful about it. : )
Will read more.
-Kitt
Author's reply
Thank you, Kitt. I'm glad you liked it. I hope you find other stories that you enjoy. Redheredh - and her stories - are great!
Dreamflower
· 11 October 2005
· Chapter 14: The End?
This was utterly delightful! How nice to see those who had to spend millenia intriguing and manipulating simply in order to survive and help their people, now putting that same intelligence and cunning to work on something as harmless as maintaining a little joke.
By far, my favorite parts were Gimli's determination that *his* Elf was not going to be made a fool of, oh no. And Galadriel's amusement being so transparent to Celeborn. Just lovely.
Of course, there are now all those garbled phrases being repeated throughout Arda. And I wonder what other members of the Fellowship besides Aragorn might have picked them up, and if the Great Smials and Brandy Hall occasionally also echo to the desire to be a Dwarven maiden's lap-dog.
And you didn't happen to mention *Gandalf's* reaction. *snerk*
Author's reply
I am so glad you liked it! Elven jokes just never fizzle out - there's always someone there who can revive them!
I love Gimli - and his possessiveness about his elf really amuses me. (I wonder what Legolas thinks of it?) And I'm very attached to the relationship I see between Galadriel and Celeborn - of deep love, infinite understanding and a judicious dose of spice!
The thought of Pippin perpetrating mangled Khuzdul is rather amusing. It is just the sort of thing he would pick up! And Merry - warrior's words. I wonder if Gimli would let them in on the secret and just leave the elves to play with the secret language.
Gandalf. Never thought of him. Now there's an idea!!
harrowcat
· 30 September 2005
· Chapter 14: The End?
Enough of the secret tongue for now ? Never!!!!
Sad this is ended but a brilliant last chapter. Imagining what people are saying about you is worse than actually knowing!
Author's reply
Well - Elrond thinks he's got off easily. And he doesn't want any boats rocking just now. Maybe in a few centuries they'll all find it funny.
Who would have thought that Glorfindel would be so sensitive! I don't think he likes feeling that the balance of power might have shifted a little - but I'm sure he'll be getting his own back.
It had to end - but I had tremendous fun with this and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for coming along for the ride!
Kitty
· 30 September 2005
· Chapter 14: The End?
*LOL* Another hilarious chapter! *wipes eyes*
Glorfindel considered her point and rejected it. ‘Do you think I appreciate hearing words casually dropped about the stuffed toy I took into the bath with me?’ Well, why not? It is so cute to imagine the mighty elf-lord as a little elfling! Anyway, probably everyone did this as child, elf or man, then why is it so bad? There could be much worser stories! *thinks of some my mother tells about me*
There were times, she thought, when Glorfindel’s delight in being an elf of mystery was a little overdone Coming from *Galadriel*, the mysterious Lady of the Golden Wood, that's funny!
I am left constantly suspecting that I am the butt of their amusement. And that is bothering the mighty balrog-slayer? *eg*
Elrond smirked, his friend decided resentfully. There was no other word for it. However he tried to shield it, the half-elf was enjoying watching him squirm. Perhaps, he thought, a word with Elwing was required. She had not spent long with her sons, but enough, surely, to be able to provide him with some barbed arrows. *Then* this game will be going out of hand completely. But the image of all these elf-lords, looking for embarassing childhood stories about each other ... *rofl*
Elrond rested an affectionate hand on his friend’s shoulder. ‘It would seem that we all want what we cannot have,’ he remarked. ‘I would like the chance to hear tales of my youth from those who cared for me.’ That is a bit sad. Poor Elrond, he'd lost so much in his life and so early on top of everything!
‘And a defeat that does not appear to be a defeat is a form of victory, is it not? And a victory that seems to be a defeat is still a victory.’ Now, that I would call 'blandishing'!
Uh, I should quit this, else I quote the whole chapter ...
I am sad this story has come to an end, Bodkin. (Well, at last this time is will seem so!) Thank you for a lot of fun! I'm still grinning every time I think about it and will re-read it repeatedly. It was so wonderful and funny and I enjoyed it so much!
Author's reply
I don't think Glorfindel wants to be cute. Cool. Sophisticated. Skilled. Powerful. But not cute! (Galadriel was very selective in choosing who should meet the twins. I'm sure there are some rather more saucy stories out there.)
Elves of mystery - well, it takes one drama queen to appreciate another fully! And people who enjoy their own mystique don't much like being laughed at. (Not that either of them really take themselves that seriously.)
They have a very very long time to play these games. And somehow I can just imagine them taking great pleasure in seeking out embarrassing stories. Celeborn, of course, can sit back smugly. His closest family hasn't yet been rehoused - at last, a reason for him to be glad of that! I always feel for Elrond. But he has more family restored to him than he expected - and grandchildren. But he will always miss those who are not there. And he will always have missed out on the childhood he could have expected - nothing can change that.
Glorfindel is being rather jesuitical here. The same outcome - different spin. Still, if it makes him happy and they come to some agreement.
Thank you - I am so glad you enjoyed it. It has been such a fun story and virtually written itself. I'm sorry to end it really, but it would have got too rambling if it had lasted any longer. Still - there's always the curse of the sequel! Maybe.
elliska
· 29 September 2005
· Chapter 14: The End?
So Glrofindel managed to find a way to at least partially save face?! Why does that not surprise me. :-)
‘You would rather be suspected of bewitching the Aftercomers’ young in order to devour them than be known to have wandered into Lord Finwë’s council in your night shift demanding that he take you to the privy,’ Glorfindel said with certainty. ‘You have a reputation to maintain.’ ROTFL! Hilarious image, that is!
‘It would seem that we all want what we cannot have,’ he remarked. ‘I would like the chance to hear tales of my youth from those who cared for me.’ And this was very moving...very sad. Poor Elrond. But you give him that in Earendil's Tale. :-)
This was wonderful, Bodkin!
Author's reply
Well - I think he was wise enough to see that this was a battle that could go on indefinitely. Better to concede - while knowing that he was really winning - and make peace.
If Galadriel has been forced to listen to too many of those sorts of stories, it's not surprising she feels that Glorfindel has got off lightly.
And Elrond has probably - almost definitely - gained more than he has lost there in the West. At least he has Celebrian and his sons - and their families. And his parents and paternal grandparents are there. (But I think he wants Maglor and Gil-galad.)
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it - this has been a lot of fun.
Dot
· 29 September 2005
· Chapter 14: The End?
Am I the only one who howled with laughter at the idea of Galadriel thinking that Glorfindel’s delight in being an elf of mystery was a little overdone??? I imagine that ellyth will think such stories of his childhood sweet, though. And it’s rather touching to think that he’s still a nervous elfling beneath everything. Maybe it was easier to create a persona in M-e than back here in the Blessed Realm.
‘You could,’ she acknowledged amiably. ‘But can they really say anything worse of me than many of the stories that have been repeated over the yeni?’ Uuhhh, well some childhood tales would still be interesting. Especially to her husband, I imagine.
See, I get the point about Elrond not being as much at fault as Glorfindel because Glorfindel allowed it to happen in the first place, but Elrond didn’t actually know that Glorfindel knew for a long time, so he probably should have said something. But if Glorfindel is the one chosen for revenge, then so be it!
‘It would seem that we all want what we cannot have,’ he remarked. ‘I would like the chance to hear tales of my youth from those who cared for me.’ Bodkin! I was grinning away at this chapter and then I welled up at this point! Not that it gave Glorfindel much perspective…
‘your apparent concession will frighten them at least as much as their smiles worried you.' Yes! That’s what I was thinking. If Glorfindel apologises, it might seem like he’s giving in, and then the twins will be completely convinced that he has something up his sleeve – the perfect revenge!!
‘And a defeat that does not appear to be a defeat is a form of victory, is it not? And a victory that seems to be a defeat is still a victory.’ Um, absolutely. However you need to convince yourself, Glorfindel.
So is that it? Is that really it?! Anyway, great ending – or should I say “ending”? – and thank you for such a fun story that brightened up my day on many occasions :-)
Author's reply
Maybe it takes one drama queen to know another! I imagine Galadriel and Glorfindel stepping round each other quite carefully - each knowing far too much about how the other's brain works.
If I were an elleth I would find the elfling tales very appealing. Even the tales of youthful misdemeanour. Perhaps that's one of the reasons that Glorfindel doesn't want them spread. He might have to go off and explore more of the distant forest in order to escape the squads of drooling maidens.
H'mm. Perhaps Celeborn should have gone off on a quest for Galadriel's childhood tales rather than to bond with the forest.
The Elrond / Glorfindel discovery scene happened quite soon after the event, I think - while the twins were still pretty young. But I think Elladan and Elrohir's respect for the natural order of things - Elrond as Adar and lord - might incline them to pick on Glorfindel rather than him. And maybe Elrond did talk to them - I just couldn't have too many apology scenes without getting boring. Maybe Elrond and Celeborn and the twins and Legolas shared a few bottles of wines and talked about Legolas's impressive performance against Galadriel and mourned the absence of A & A.
It seems impossible to write a whole elf story without banging into some piece of melancholy. But Elrond is happier now than he has been in a long time. He would, I think, just like to gather together all those people who are important to him and protect them.
If I were the twins I would be scared if Glorfindel smiled back and appeared to give in. A perfect retaliation to a perfect revenge!
This is it. For now. Any more twists will be part of another tale. Thank you - I am so pleased you enjoyed it.
Redheredh
· 29 September 2005
· Chapter 14: The End?
Delightful ending! A wonderful tale you have told!
But that remark... the nervous elfling still persisted under the disguise of a great elf-lord returned to defend his king's House. Interesting choice of word: disguise over guise. So, you do not think that the Valar sent Glorfindel back to keep Elrond safe? Did they know he would face the Witch-King and warn against the folly of trying to destroy this creature? Did they know he would help save Frodo's life and foil the return of the Ring to Sauron? Did the Valar even send him back? Hmmm... Perhaps there is something more in his past he does not wish laid bare.
However, Elrond wishing that there was someone there who could embarass him with his childhood foilables was really touching.
Like everyone, I am sorry to see this end. But, it was a fun trip and it means you will be getting back to your other stories and we can be glad about that. ;D
Thank you again for being so kind as to write this very amusing story!
Author's reply
I hadn't spent any time pondering over the difference between guise / disguise. Glorfindel - to me - is unquestionably a great elf-lord. Whether he always is to himself - is probably a different matter. People often see themselves quite differently. Maybe he finds being a legend a little difficult to cope with at times. For a reason? Dunno. What do you think?
I just can't help it with Elrond - there are so many parts of his life where you just wish you could take away the pain. But he has Celebrian back and the twins and Earendil and Elwing are around. And he has learnt better than most to deal with the absences.
Thank you - I have enjoyed writing this. But it had to end before it lost momentum. Still there's always the possibility of a sequel of some kind!
I think maybe a chapter of Arwen next - since it's sitting there already finished! The C&G one is seeking inspiration!
Ellie
· 29 September 2005
· Chapter 14: The End?
Oh, that was wonderful! I like your suggestion that Glorfindel is a bit shy and vulnerable beneath his lordly, powerful exterior. Too cute!
Author's reply
If he was really as shiny perfect as he seems, it might make him a little less attractive. And we wouldn't want that! A touch of insecurity - and a few elfling stories - and the ellyth will be swarming.
Thank you. This has been such a fun story to write.
Larner
· 29 September 2005
· Chapter 14: The End?
Galadriel in her nightshift, wishing to be taken to the privy? Lovely image there, I must say.
Now, to see if the story will let you be....
Author's reply
She's a character it's hard to imagine as a child. Though I think she could have been quite . . . challenging, even then.
This is it. On this one anyway.
A sequel, on the other hand . . .
perelleth
· 29 September 2005
· Chapter 14: The End?
LOL This detached bantering had me snickering all the way! Now Glorfindel is at the same stage the twins were when they trying to pretend nothing had happened.
But I'm really appaled by ELrond's cheek! :-)HE'sat least as guilty as Glrofindel! PIty this is getting to and end, bodkin, it's very amusing! :-)
Author's reply
It can't go on for ever. Although I was thinking in the car that Indiscretion would be a good title for a sequel . . .
Elrond isn't quite as guilty as Glorfindel - Glorfindel was there when it happened. He was the one tacitly encouraging the sons of Elrond to pick up a more interesting and versatile vocabulary. Elrond just . . . didn't do anything to discourage them later, after they'd already picked up the bad habits.
And who taught the twins their skills? I can't imagine they learned from their adar how best to torment their associates. No. Glorfindel is reaping what he has sown. (Good thing they all love each other dearly. They're FAMILY.)
Thank you for enjoying the journey.
And so it ends.
daw the minstrel
· 29 September 2005
· Chapter 14: The End?
I saw that you boldly stamped this story "complete." We'll see!
Elrond is right. If Glorfindel apologized, the twins will relent. They're much too fine to torment someone who's said he's sorry.
And Galadriel is right. There's no one like our parents for trotting out stories (and pictures) that make us want to moan and cry.
Author's reply
This is complete. Line drawn. Of course it doesn't mean there can't be a sequel. It occurred to me that Indiscretion would make a good title. Now all it needs is a story!
I think Glorfindel will be encouraged to talk to the twins. On a non-threatening basis - and they will all agree that the water has long since passed under the bridge. Won't stop either side teasing though. They enjoy it too much.
Imagine coming back to your parents after over 6000 years of independence - only to find they're still telling that story about the potty and goldfish. Enough to make you want to set sail again.
Thank you. This was a fun ride - but it is complete. It is.
Jay of Lasgalen
· 29 September 2005
· Chapter 14: The End?
Glorfindel is still twitchy, isn't he? Every time the twins laugh, he thinks he's the subject. There's more than a touch of vanity there - or paranoia.
I rather liked this exchange: ‘It is not so much the childhood memories,’ Galadriel remarked with detachment, ‘as what might follow them.’
‘Just because your life is an open book, Eärendilion,’ Glorfindel said in a low voice, ‘does not mean that we all wish our past laid bare.’
Hmm. One might almost think the perfect Glorfindel had something to hide! (Oh, look - is that another plot bunny escaping into the undergrowth?)
Author's reply
It was suggested to me (!!!) that Glorfindel might have some stories he was a little more nervous about making public knowledge - and it seemed such a good idea. I don't know what they are though - he wouldn't tell me - just stood with his arms folded looking quizzical. But it would explain why a few tales of his childhood have got him twitchy. I think that for his own peace of mind he needs to come to an agreement with Elladan and Elrohir.
When he thinks about it, he'll know that Galadriel could have revealed much more. Of course, when they think about it, the twins will know that too!
Finished this! Any new inspirations will have to find a sequel somewhere. Thank you for coming along for the ride.
Redheredh
· 28 September 2005
· Chapter 13: . . . Is Sweet
Goodness gracious, every line of this chapter is a gem! The writing makes this episode just sparkle.
Glad to hear that Nimloth was not coached and is merely clever. So, it takes the ellyth to be grown-ups and keep things from getting out of hand, does it?
I wonder if Glorfy still uses the thumb-sucking thing as a remedy for insomnia. ;) Hmm, I also wonder if it was an also youthful Idril for whom he demonstrated his budding lingual aplomb? Warriors do have a tendency be unbridled in expressing their admiration of a lady's assets as well as their frustration at unwanted annoyances.
But for now, revenge is theirs and they are happy and that's nice.
Next is last... :(
Author's reply
I'm glad you enjoyed it - I was rather worried that the stories wouldn't be too exciting.
Elrohir wouldn't coach Nimloth - what a bad example that would be for an elfling who can be difficult at the best of times! - but he might have suggested that she greet her Daeradar and Glorfindel. Just in case she came out with something that would nudge Glorfindel into worrying a little.
Ahh - the image of mighty warrior and all-round shiny elf Glorfindel sucking his thumb! Maybe that is why he's never married. Teaching cuss words to an equally young Idril! That would be entertaining. Perhaps he did. And was caught by Elenwe - who was shocked, thus sending Turgon into overdrive.
This is a good moment for the twins. They feel in control. Which is just what they need after the recent revelations.
Thank you. I'm now off to post the last part!
Dot
· 28 September 2005
· Chapter 13: . . . Is Sweet
‘If he did not taste good enough for a Balrog to finish, he will certainly not be tasty enough for us.’ ROTFL!! That has to be one of the best lines I’ve come across. By the way, where does Glorfindel live now? I may have missed that in your stories somewhere…
I knew Nimloth wasn’t coached. Although, I’d say they may have conveniently let her hear just enough that if she let it slip, then… all the better!
Ok, they have to keep Celebrían out of it. I suppose she can’t really help Glorfindel (Valar help them if she did!) after her role in her sons’ embarrassment but she certainly could put a stop to it all.
Legolas is right that Glorfindel will probably presume he’s involved. And they’re probably all a little annoyed at young Thranduilion. Except Celeborn, who’s mightily impressed with the way he spoke to his wife!
The Glorfindel stories are hilarious. It’ll be very odd if he’s ever reunited with his family. Asfaloth!! LOL. Although, I do feel bad about the dreams of fire and cold :-( But these tales are perfect for a night with the family in Elrond’s Hall of Fire/Air/Stories/Family/Whatever.
'We are rank amateurs, my friend. But amateurs with connections in high places.' Amateurs? I think not! But their connections are certainly useful! Still, I imagine it’s only so long that Glorfindel can wait before he has to take matters into his own hands. I’m just wondering who’s going to be most satisfied by the outcome! :-)
Author's reply
Where does Glorfindel live. H'mm. (Smiles blankly.) He's roaming a lot. And he spends quite a lot of time in Elrond's house, which is the place he leaves his possessions. So I suppose that is what he considers his home. But he is also spending a lot of time visiting a variety of people from his past.
Elrohir is not foolhardy enough to coach Nimloth deliberately. But a 'Go and greet your Daeradar', might have crossed his lips - while he hoped that she would come out with what was on her mind. Aewlin probably would have thought twice before speaking. She is more tactful. Usually.
E2 know how far Celebrian would let them go - and they are themselves averse to cruelty. They won't mention Glorfindel's heart-wrenching dreams, for instance, although they will happily talk of the thumb-sucking. And tell piggy stories.
Poor Legolas. He started this with the best of motives and has found himself wallowing in quicksand. But at least he has established himself as an adult in the eyes of Celeborn and Galadriel. Which their grandsons might never achieve.
There's only one more part - so Glorfindel can't do much to get his own back. At least, not here!
Dot
· 28 September 2005
· Chapter 12: Revenge
*grin* Poor Glorfindel. There he was thinking well, it’s all the twins’ own fault really and their family should be giving them a much harder time by rights… and then he discovers that said twins have actually started smiling at him. As though he were at fault. I’m glad he has the sense to realise that they’re not to be dismissed lightly, although the fact that Galadriel has been consulted might have a little something to do with his apprehension! Even Glorfindel might not be a match for that particular lady.
I get the impression Elrond is rather enjoying this! Although, he’d want to be careful that they don’t decide to get a little revenge on him too. But for now he can sit back and enjoy the suspense. I wonder how quickly the twins will realise that they don’t really need much of a plan – all they have to do is smile!!
Nimloth is brilliant! There’s no way she could have been coached that well! Hilarious. She’d make a fine politician. I can’t wait to see what comes of this :-)
Author's reply
Smiling - what a revenge! And there is so little he can do to counter it. And I would imagine that he has enough secret moments to wonder what they have found out. Galadriel (at her age!) must have more knowledge of Glorfindel's past than most.
Elrond is entertained. I think he feels fairly safe - at the moment. After all, who is there from whom the secrets of his past can be discovered?
Ah, Nimloth. So like her own dear andaernaneth. If she can get over her bull-headed honesty, politics would suit her very well!
elliska
· 28 September 2005
· Chapter 13: . . . Is Sweet
Oh they are not amateurs--they are evil! They may not have coached Nimloth, but they know exactly what she was going to do and they set her up to dit it. And those smiles to make Glorfindel suffer--truly the best thing to do because you look crazy complaining that someone is smiling at you. And Legolas's dry-humour reaction to all this just kills me.
How long did he leave us in ignorance of the meaning of that Khuzdul nonsense he consented to our learning? Some three millennia, was it not? An age of the sun? Do you not think that calls for rather more than a week or two of torment?’
Ignorance is not a state to be envied,’ Great lines!
And their retelling of the stories they heard! Very well told. This was hilarious, Bodkin. I almost feel sorry for Glorfindel. Almost. ;-)
Author's reply
How do you fight back against someone who is smiling at you? It's such a clever way to work. Not that it will work for ever - but I don't think the twins have got it in them to hold a grudge for too long. Except against orcs, of course, but that's understandable.
Elrohir was delighted with Nimloth - but too wary to let Sirithiel see it. And he doesn't want Glorfindel thinking that his daughter is fair game.
I wonder if the twins have noticed that the only stories they have learned are childhood follies . . . and if it will occur to them that there might be so much more to know.
Thank you. This is drawing to an end now - just one more part.
perelleth
· 28 September 2005
· Chapter 13: . . . Is Sweet
A simple smile. HAd the Balrog known! They´re evil indeed. Now the High Command's overseeing the operations! And they dare say they "twisted" their grandmother´s arm....
Anyway, Legolas is,again, at the worst available position... A vacation is in order for him....
Author's reply
I can just imagine a squad of Balrogs, defeating their elven opponents with the knowing flash of several sets of sharp teeth. Perhaps the High Command would have been better known as the Court of Appeal. Celebrian will frown disapprovingly at her sons if she thinks they are being cruel - and they will listen.
If anyone can display bravado in the face of the Lady of the Golden Wood, (apart from Celeborn), it has to be her grandsons. She won't have let her daughter get away with it - but grandchildren have a very special position in their grandparents' affections.
Poor Legolas. And he started this off with the very best of motives!
Nearly finished now.
Kitty
· 28 September 2005
· Chapter 13: . . . Is Sweet
*LOL*
Yes, that's it! How unsettling a simple smile can be! And it is *so* good to know a bit about Glorfindels not so glorious moments! What a fun!
Author's reply
Very disconcerting to be smiled at. And how can anyone take exception to people appearing delighted to see you?
Glorfindel's not so sure that he wants to have less glorious moments seen - but then he has a much better idea than anyone else of just how many inglorious moments he has endured.
Glad you are enjoying it. Nearly finished now!
TithenFeredir
· 28 September 2005
· Chapter 13: . . . Is Sweet
This is all the better for me since I was sure Glorfindel would make short work of the twins if they tried anything. Instead you have them worrying him to a shadow of himself wondering exactly what it is they've got on him. It's an elegant scheme. I think maybe right now Glorfindel could do with a nice glass of strong wine and his "Asfaloth". This was fun, Bodkin! Thanks for a good read. ~TF
Author's reply
Does the fact that he's worried suggest that there is something he wouldn't want revealed? Other than his thumb-sucking, of course? Glorfindel thinks the suggestion of a bottle or two of New World Dorwinion would be just the job. Although he's not so sure about the other suggestion.
I'm glad you're enjoying it - only one more part to go!