No time except to say I've been looking forward to this chapter for the last 24 hrs, and I enjoyed ruthless!Hardorn and Legolas v. much. I think that Aragorn, who has lived for so long as a hunted man, would not have lost his edge, but it's good to have someone in the party thinking about security 24/7.
And still I don't know what Arwen, Melian, and Benai are doing!
Rollicking good fun!
Author's reply
Oh, the queen has things in hand back in the Farozi's palace, along with everyone else there, of course.
Radbooks
· 22 August 2005
· Chapter 24: Arrests
Ah, where to start? It was another wonderful chapter. Having Pippin cooking duck was great and seeing the amusement of the guard while he gave him the list of things he would need was funny and Aragorn knowing he would have the money he had given him. It was great when Hardorn scolded Aragorn for holding something in one hand while he captured someone. I love their relationship, Hardorn is totally honorable and respectful to Aragorn at all times, though he is never afraid to tell his cousin what he thinks in regards to his personal safety and would willingly give his life for Aragorn. I just enjoy the two of them together. Legolas and the spy hole was great too - what a perfect way to catch someone. Then Eomer trying to hold in his laughter when he was told in a very roundabout why he couldn't see the Farozi.
The Farozi is a wiley one and also very kind. It was his kindness years ago that led him to take in so many of his half brothers and sisters and now he is surrounded by his nieces and nephews who stand by him and help protect him. I'm sure he didn't do it for that reason of course, but you never know where kindness will lead you.
You made a comment to my last review when I said that I was surprised that Aragorn didn't rush right back to the palace to protect Arwen and his children that he was trusting of the rohirrim and Gimli and the others there to protect them, while he and his men could go and track down the source of the problem. Yes, you are correct and strictly as a king that would be the thing to do, I was just thinking that as a husband and a father, there would be twinges to want to rush and protect them. But then Aragorn has always had to push those things aside for duty and the greater good. It must have been very difficult to do though - I don't mean just in this case. Anyway, that's what I was thinking when I wrote that in my last review.
Anyway, another wonderful chapter and I can't wait for the next one! Oh, I loved Lord Afraim too! :)
Author's reply
If the Kingdom of Heaven is like a measure of yeast hidden in bread dough to make the whole of the dough to rise, kindness is much the same. You never know where or how the kindness you do will come back to bless you. We reap the benefits of our kindness as well as the destructions of our pettiness doled out to others.
I am so glad that you have put into words what I was envisioning in seeing the nature of Sohrabi, for I'd seen it but not truly described it as you have--just by describing the reactions of those who were saved by him and their children.
A different kind of nobility than Aragorn's, perhaps, but nobility yet the same.
Yes, the husband and father would want to be there to protect his own; but the King, who must also be a political animal and think outside the boundaries of his own desires, must at times to trust to others to see to their own safety and the safety of those he loves so that he can do what only the King can do, which must be, at times, to confound the plans of evildoers
Thank you for responding.
Baggins Babe
· 22 August 2005
· Chapter 24: Arrests
Another fabulous chapter! I love all the detail and you're right, it does fire my imagination I could smell the market place in a previous chapter, with all the spices and the heat.
I agree with your comments about those who follow the path of evil becoming very blinkered. Their minds seem to only work in one way. Aragorn certainly knows this, and it is his ability to think so freely that make him such a formidable opponent. First class interrogator too - don't think I'd like to face his questioning if I'd done something bad.
Can't wait for the next chapter now.
Author's reply
I would think that trying to face down Aragorn would be difficult. He has managed to obtain the equilibrium he must have to manage the King's Gift, and realizes he can then use the freedom and constraints it gives him for the good of all.
For those dedicated only to power or self-advancement, the loss of the ability to empathise in the end becomes a degenerative condition leaving them increasingly impaired in their ability to conceive of how others will react.
Tolkien has Gandalf say it best in his description of Sauron as they discuss the need to march on the Black Gate--malice weighs all in the scales of its own balance, and cannot perceive anyone else can intend differently than itself would do in a particular situation, which was how they were able to overcome Sauron in the end. Sauron would never willingly give up the Ring, and so cannot conceive of anyone else doing so. Those who have not given themselves to power are therefore able to think of, plan, and do, therefore, that which he cannot expect; and that they would rather spend themselves fighting him than simply bowing to what appears to be the inevitable disconcerts him in the end.
Thank you so much for showing how the hints in my story become more manifest in your imagination as you read it.
Tigger
· 21 August 2005
· Chapter 24: Arrests
Oooh....The plot thickens. Loved Legolas'interception of the spy and then the "explaination" to Eomer. I can so clearly see Eomer's face as he tried not to laugh as he figured out what had happened. I see another disappearance is about to take place. I'm guessing that he will not give up the Lesser Ring. A pity, as he's more of a slave than the one who told Aragorn, Hardorn and the Haradrim noble the plans of the attack about to take place on the Farozi's palace.
You're weaving the various threads of a palace coup as excellently as Arwen would w/her loom and threads. This is so very well done mellon nin. Looking forward as always to seeing what happens next.
Author's reply
Power is one of the most addictive agents in the world; but as with most addictions it destroys the ones who become addicted to it from the inside out, and enslaves them to it. Yes, Merdirion is more enslaved than his slave is.
Thank you so much for the great compliment you have given me. It is what makes it worthwhile to write. And am so glad you enjoy the little moments as much as the taking of Merdirion.
Dreamflower
· 21 August 2005
· Chapter 24: Arrests
Another brilliant chapter!
I would like to say something about the way you write action and intrigue: chapters like this are almost like watching an episode of Mission:Impossible; each move is given in enough detail that the reader can follow the action, and not become lost. You never seem to lose track of who is where, or what they are/were doing. You account for everyone and every possiblity. Many writers skimp on these kinds of details, and the result is that the suspense is lost as the reader tries to play catch up. I noticed it first in "The King's Commission", and then in some of your other stories, but in this one, perhaps because it is so action oriented, you have really come into your own with this technique.
Just thought I would say that. And as always, looking forward to more.
Author's reply
Oh, thank you for noting that. I hate it when I read a book and realize a character has gotten lost along the way, as it were. It happens to me, too, at times, but I try to take care of that. And you are correct--in an action adventure such as this one one needs to feel everyone is working toward his assigned goal somehow.
Thanks so much for the feedback--it is so appreciated.
grumpy
· 21 August 2005
· Chapter 23: A Hunt
Aragorn hunt went very well, he has cuptured a whole mess a bad guys. I like that part about he still has his old leathers, but Arwin will not let him wear them. Alsothat his bow, was once his fathers. looking forward to more
Author's reply
Ah, what wives will insist on regarding comfortable and still-useful clothes! And I think he'd be proud to carry what had been his father's bow. And, yes, he's caught some baddies, and I'm glad, too!
Thanks for the feedback!
Baggins Babe
· 20 August 2005
· Chapter 23: A Hunt
Well, Sherfiramun won't be making sneery remarks about Pip's abilities as a warrior from now on, will he! Great to see our favourite Took showing his mettle.
I really feel as though I'm there - I can feel the heat and the prickle of the grasses in the marsh. Great writing, as usual, and wonderful to see Aragorn outwit the bad guys again. They never learn, do they? I suspected that guard from the docks would turn up again!
Also loved Aragorn's remark in a previous chapter, about hobbits not lying unless mushrooms are involved. *snert* I wanted to review that chapter but my dial-up connection decided to play up. Grrrr!
Author's reply
Oh, I am so glad someone appreciated that comment on the mushrooms! And evidently my writing was enough to get your own imagination supplying details I hadn't even written there! I am honored!
As for outwitting bad guys--a great part of becoming a bad guy is surrendering some of your ability to see things truly, for in becoming a villain you are tying yourself to a particularly narrow point of view--your own. It becomes easier and easier all the time to outwit such as those who are honest with themselves have more leeway for thinking clearly.
Thanks so for the feedback!
Radbooks
· 20 August 2005
· Chapter 23: A Hunt
Wow! What an exciting chapter. I had to read it twice! :) Pippin cutting off fingers... quite the picture there - I'm always amazed at his courage. That's one of the things I enjoy about your stories - getting to see him all grown up so to speak! Love the accuracy of elves - though maybe Mablung shot one of those too. I've always liked him. :) And he did a great job leading them to the ambush - perfectly sneaky guy - and a great writer to describe it. Of course then all of the great Aragorn stuff - being aware of everything going on around him, hunting (2 different things!), healing, questioning prisoners - I especially loved how he could tell that one of the guys was really clever. I was sort of surprised that Aragorn didn't leave right away to get back over to the palace where Arwen and his children were. But I know they'll be all right - I have confidence in them and in you! :)
Author's reply
I always liked Mablung in TTT, and had to make certain he and Damrod continued on somehow, which is how they have ended up in The King's Commission and here. But where Damrod had chosen to continue to follow Faramir primarily, Mablung's more tied to Gondor itself. And I suspect he got the shoulder, myself.
As for Aragorn hurrying back--the longer the rebels don't know where anyone from the hunting party is, the easier it is to sneak up on them at the proper time, don't you think? And between the Rohirrim (including Eowyn as well as Eomer, Elfhelm, and Haleth) and those of the Northern and Southern Dunedain (including Benai as well) remaining there, as well as Gimli and those skills Arwen and Avrieth possess, they are safe enough, I think .
I'm honored you read it twice! That is a nice thing to note!
Thanks so much for all the feedback!
Amy
· 19 August 2005
· Chapter 23: A Hunt
Crocodiles await the unwary!
I'm hoping for disguises in the next chapter, and poss. another fainting spell?
Great pacing: I can hardly keep from bouncing with excitement!
Author's reply
Oh, but they can't ALL faint, Amy!
Am glad you are enjoying it. May take a day or two to post the next one, as the revisions aren't finished yet.
But, yes, I think there will be disguises.
Mum's the Word
· 19 August 2005
· Chapter 23: A Hunt
I'm enjoying this story very much. It continues the quality of your previous stories. I'm especially enjoying the pre-Egyptian culture of Harad, and of course the newfound Numenorean descendants, as well as the intrigue in this story.
A question, if I may, about a name: Pelseti. If 'Seti' is Haradrim for Sauron, and 'pel' is Sindarin for 'fenced field' -- did you name this guy 'Mordor' in mixture of Haradrim and Sindarin? Or does 'pel' mean something else in Haradrim? Certainly he's a servant of darkness, and Aragorn was wise to recommend a close watch on him.
I like the names you've come up with, many of which sound 'nearly familiar,' as you've adapted them from Egyptian.
Well done, Larner! I look forward impatiently to the next chapters.
Mum
Author's reply
Oh, dear--if we are looking at mixing Haradrim and Sindarin, we do have an interesting situation. Actually, the equivalent of Seti is Morgoth; so in that case you'd have perhaps Angband, but not strictly Mordor.
That being said, I'll admit my knowledge of Sindarin or Quenya is fairly rudimentary at best, and when I deliberately try to name something or someone with a particular meaning I've always had to ask others who have educated themselved more deeply than I. But it's fascinating how some coincidences turn out, as I'd simply not thought of that connection at all.
I try to mix known Egyptian with some imaginary elements together to make plausible names for my characters within Harad.
And finding ways to use information from modern-day documentaries and scientific studies into Middle Earth is always interesting.
Thanks so much for such a positive response.
Dreamflower
· 19 August 2005
· Chapter 23: A Hunt
*great big grin*
This was *so* exciting! I could just see it all unfolding before me, as though I were watching it happen!
I am so glad that they got in at least a *little* hunting before the Bad Guys screwed everything up. Don't you just hate it when that happens? Here they were hoping for a nice morning's hunt--but, being Aragorn, of course, he's *prepared* for a good deal more!
And thank you! thank you! for letting Pippin show his mettle! I loved his sword at Shefiramun's belly, and then cutting off the fingers of the other villian! Whoo-hoo, Go Pip!
I hope we soon see how those left at the palace are dealing with things. I have a feeling the Bad Guys have been out manuevered there, too!
Author's reply
Glad you appreciate it, Dreamflower! Yes, letting Pippin show he has now earned the rank of Captain is always satisfying, as is seeing that Aragorn is thinking several steps ahead of his foes.
One person commented they liked the fact that a crocodile got one of the baddies, and in this case I think I agree.
And that you felt you were there is a great compliment, as that is part of what I think those of us who love the movies feel--that we are there alongside our heroes as we watch it, such as when WE ride up the steep streets of Minas Tirith with Gandalf and Pippin.
Thanks so much for the feedback.
lindahoyland
· 19 August 2005
· Chapter 23: A Hunt
This was just so exciting !You had me on the edge of my seat ! Great to see that Aragorn has lost none of his old ranger skills and I just love to see him in Healer mode as you write him so beautifully.
I would not like to get on the wrong side of Aragorn as I actually ended up feeling sorry for the villains !
Many thanks for your kind review.I tried to write the scene as much in the spirit of Tolkien as I could.
Author's reply
Sorry for the villains? Oh, dear, now there is something new! Yes, being Aragorn's prisoner doesn't appear to be a very healthy role to take unless he feels some level of respect for your integrity, it seems.
And am so glad you like how I write his way of healing. That is a compliment, as that is your especially favorite factor to write about.
Tigger
· 19 August 2005
· Chapter 23: A Hunt
Well, after this, that and the other, I'm all caught up w/this incredable story. Hmmm...So another hunt nearly became more than just a hunt for duck. Trust Aragorn to lead them all on a merry chase and then prove to them just how foolish it was to try an assination attempt. And another of the Lesser Rings has surfaced. Looking forward to seeing Aragorn's reaction to that.
The past three chapters have had me literally on the edge of my seat. Am I wrong in thinking we might see Eowyn and/or Arwen showing the Haradi what can happen when you take on a trained Shieldmaiden and the Granddaughter of the Lady of Light? Especially when their children are in danger? Hmmm?
I know, I'll have to wait and see. Patience in this case is *not* a virtue. ;o)
Looking forward to see how all of this is resolved. :oD
Author's reply
What will happen will unfold as it does, I think we will find. Am still working on the next two chapters, doing the final revisions, in fact.
But it's fun to see how Aragorn's loosely planned defense worked in this case, to the ends of having twelve prisoners now, and learning more fully of the intended coup.
Intrigue is always fun to watch unfold, particularly when we don't like those doing the planning, and we are happily watching the counterplots take shape!
I'm so glad folk appear to be enjoying this chapter, as it was a good deal of fun to write.
Kitty
· 19 August 2005
· Chapter 23: A Hunt
*grinning widely*
Obviously I was quite correct in my foretelling yesterday - that was exact what I had expected!
I don't know where to start - it was a long and very exciting chapter! I was so glad to see Aragorn sensed there was something to happen and took precautions! It was truly amusing to read how they set their guard and trap.
As for Merdirion (which seems to be the one I thought), he has thought out this very nice, how he could become the new tyrant, but he has underestimated the Northerners badly, if he thought they are foolish to come to Harad all at once. Well, maybe he himself isn't used to get his hands dirty because he sends his servants to do the work, so he can't imagine the Northern Lords are quite capable to defend themselves! And he is an uncle to Landrion and wears another ring? That explains a lot! And I have the distinct feeling Merdirion is about to share his nephew's fate in being captured in his own estate.
At least Aragorn had an opportunity to see the use of throwing sticks, although the traitors seem to be very bad in their use - or are they too distracted? Anyway, I loved it that it was Pippin who blocked the attack on the Haradri noble, although I'd not mind in the least if it had been Sherfiramun who lost the fingers. It was only a pity the traitors managed to injure Ankhrabi, and I am so very glad Aragorn was able to suck out much of the poison immediately and then to treat and safe him. No doubt, after this day the Haradrim will be more respectful of Aragorn than ever - how he handled the attack and healed Ankhrabi was quite impressive.
Now I look forward to how they capture Merdirion and to hear more about what happens to Merdirion's men who wait to attack the palace. It will be fun to see how they run in another trap, I suppose, because they have underestimated An'Sohrabi as well *rubs hands*. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's reply
Yes, you'd reasoned a good bit of it out.
I thought of Sherfiramun being the one who tried to attack another--but he kept ending up with one of Legolas's arrows in his hand, so I finally left it at that, as apparently one of his troopers was meant to face Pippin. Legolas just appears to have had it in for Sherfiramun, somehow.
It is not only An'Sohrabi they have underestimated--Afraim is the leader of the desert legions, and had the assassination attempt worked, he'd probably be dead, now, too. Getting such a man angry with you isn't a good idea, particularly if you intend to have your own troops assault the palace of the Farozi tomorrow. I think that Merdirion is going to be much surprised at how things turn out, not to mention those who have backed him to now.
Landrion's family seems apt to troubles, doesn't it?
utfrog98
· 19 August 2005
· Chapter 23: A Hunt
One of the best chapters yet - great story
Author's reply
I am thrilled you approve! Glad you are enjoying it!
lindahoyland
· 18 August 2005
· Chapter 22: Birthdays and Policies
I loved the desciptions of the beautiful clothes, Aragorn admitting that the ring tempted him and you insight into Boromir's death which was very moving.
Thank you so much for your comments and kind review. I think be both see Aragorn in a similiar light and I admit when I wrote todays chapter, I found myself wondering what Your Aragorn would do !
Author's reply
Probably much as yours did, although I think he'd be less likely to be overmodest, and more knowledgable about women's issues, particularly childbirth. But then, my Aragorn oversaw the birth of his first child (and probably the second one as well), and was discussing the need for proper hygeine to maintain the health of both mother and child.
Thank you for appreciating the discussion of Boromir's death. Boromir did realize that a madness had overtaken him and that the Ring had been working on him, and called out for Frodo's forgiveness. I think he felt terribly guilty; but there was no question his actions finally sparked Frodo to do what he'd recognized from Lorien on he needed to do--leave the rest for their own safety.
grumpy
· 18 August 2005
· Chapter 22: Birthdays and Policies
what a lovely chapter, everyone gets to dress up and go to a party, too bad it is so hot out, but one has to expect that in the south. Glad to see that the Farozi remembered about the duck hunting, very interesting about his brother being poisoned. Also very glad to see that Benai has Aragorn's old sword, till he gets one of his own, plus he gets to carry the red bag.
Author's reply
Yes, it is a great honor for Benai, a fact he appreciates. Unfortunately, I suspect even on the hunt Aragorn's not going to get as much experience with throwing sticks as he'd wish.
Am so glad you have continued following the story, and thanks for the review!
Kitty
· 18 August 2005
· Chapter 22: Birthdays and Policies
An interesting discussion about the temptations by the One Ring. The Farozi can be proud they are so open with him - I suppose it is still not always easy for them to talk about some parts of the Quest and the War of the Ring.
I am sorry to hear An'Ma'osiri was poisoned. I loved him. But somehow ... why have I the bad feeling this as yet unnamed former agent of Mordor and Sherfiramun are not only in league but this duck hunt will be disturbed again? The opportunity to try to assassinate Aragorn or something like this is too obvious. And I wonder if the murderer of Ma'osiri could be the guard officer from the docks which Aragorn met at the end of his first visit?
Author's reply
Shall we see what plays out? I, too, fear the hunt won't be all that peaceful--not this time, at least.
Wonderful thoughts on what might be ready to happen.
Dreamflower
· 18 August 2005
· Chapter 22: Birthdays and Policies
Ah ha! So, perhaps another "lesser ring" is hanging around?
As always I love this story--every time you bring out more details of the Quest to those who did not know, you bring more insight into them in the way they take their knowledge.
I liked the way you described Boromir's fall into the Ring's trap. I, too, believe he was able to break away from its influence as Frodo fled, proving that its hold on him was tenuous.
And a duck hunt will be interesting, as the last time you never did get to describe those throwing sticks.
Author's reply
You think another one might be in play, do you? Interesting guess.
As to whether or not Aragorn gets the chance to learn properly to use throwing sticks this time either--that is yet to be revealed.
Radbooks
· 17 August 2005
· Chapter 21: A Pipe in the Night
Yikes! You just know something is going to happen... of course, I knew it was going to, but still. :) I'm anxious to see what you have planned. Once you lose trust it is so hard to regain it and that's even if you want to regain it and you work really, really hard at it! I feel bad for Ankhrabi for even having this guy in his family, but you can't always choose your relatives - especially the distantly related ones! :) I do hope that some of these Haradric people get to go to Gondor sometime - that would be fun to read about. *hint hint*
Author's reply
Yes, once trust is lost it is difficult to earn once more. And, yes, something again is ready to happen.
As for a trip to Gondor by the Haradrim--may happen, but am not certain it will happen in this specific story. I still have to offer closure on Benai and his people, of course.
lindahoyland
· 17 August 2005
· Chapter 21: A Pipe in the Night
At least someone from Harad is sorry about insulting Pippin !I have a feeling the one who suported Sauron might be plotting something nasty for our heroes next. I am loving this story and ampleased you are enjoying mine too.
Author's reply
I enjoy yours, as it is such a different view of the same people. That's the fun of FanFic--seeing how many different ways the same folks might have developed and the experiences they might have had.
Am so glad you are enjoying this, and things are indeed likely to become more heated soon.
Dreamflower
· 17 August 2005
· Chapter 21: A Pipe in the Night
Just as I thought.
Shefiramun is in for some rude awakenings, I suspect. I don't much imagine they will be welcome, either.
And forgive me if I harbor this teensy little fantasy that when push comes to shove, it's Troll's Bane he finds at his throat. Upsetting Pip like that. Faugh!
Author's reply
Well, perhaps more likely at his belly than at his throat--but you are right the confrontation is coming. Am trying to keep ahead in the writing, although now and then I find I have to go back and do a few revisions when I find I've made an error or two.
Kitty
· 17 August 2005
· Chapter 21: A Pipe in the Night
How thoughtful and courteous of them to go out to smoke! (I'm myself not fond of smoking at all and appreciate this behaviour!)
Oh yes, I remember this bit about the forces of Harad and thought of it when it was mentioned Sherfiramun fought for Mordor! Another reason to distrust him heavily, and I am glad they all think so. Hopefully they are able to prevent harm if they are cautious.
I loved Rustovrid's comment at the end - it is obvious *he* knows very well what respect and trust or distrust of Aragorn and his friends mean and can appreciate the trust they show to all who are worthy of it. And it is somehow relieving to see he can confide in Ankhrabi in this and that Ankhrabi is of the same mind.
Author's reply
I agree about Ankhrabi and Rustovrid, and the meaning of trust from those of Gondor and its allies. To lose the trust of Aragorn is to lose a treasure of great value. Sherfiramun does not as yet realize just how much in jeopardy he has put himself by his actions and words, or how much of his nature and motivations he has revealed.
Author Reply: PS--I have proven to be highly sensitive to tobacco smoke, so my home is now a smoke-free zone. I tried smoking once, at the tender age of three or four; I've not done so again, but grew up in a family of smokers, and my husband smoked most of his life, then suddenly gave it up one day. After he did that, I stopped getting such frequent colds and all; that's when we realized just how sensitive I really was to second-hand smoke. And so, just as in The King's Commission, I've made Aragorn a thoughtful smoker.
Kitty
· 17 August 2005
· Chapter 20: The Tale of the Ringbearers
They did make Benai's new status quite clear. Good. And I'm glad even the Haradrim obviously accept him as guard to the Queen.
It was nice how they told the tale of the Quest together. And Pippin was very brave, to show his scars in front of so many people.
But Sherfiramun ... he does not only not believe anything, he doesn't *want* to believe it, I suppose. By now I'm quite suspicious of him. He has very bad manners, to insult all the guests of the Farozi, most of all Pippin, so publicly. And to say You are no warrior for all you carry a sword. ... *shakes head*. Maybe he needs to sparr with Pippin himself to learn better, and I would'nt be surprised if it were in earnest. Or Eowyn should give him a good thrashing with her own sword. Preferably both. I don't trust him an inch more than I can throw him, and that is not very far. He has not even answered the question of the Farozi if he is satisfied. *looks even more suspicious* I hope the Farozi and, maybe even more important, the guests from the North have an eye on him.
In all this solemnity some of the remarks were funny: Pippin's explanation of the one not so honourable scar and Aragorn's about lying Hobbits and mushrooms *grins*
Author's reply
Sherfiramun will shortly see the extent of Pippin's abilities; and you are right, the man is not to be trusted. Remember how he served in the forces of Harad, and to which services he'd been assigned.
As for the not-so-honorable scar and Hobbits and mushrooms--well, I felt a bit of real Hobbit life needed to be interjected here. After all, farm raids and mushrooms are a big part of what is expected of Hobbits!
lindahoyland
· 16 August 2005
· Chapter 20: The Tale of the Ringbearers
There was so much in this chapter I hardly know where to start ! I loved the description of Benai looking so magnificent and the way they all told part of the Ring story.
I don't think from what Tolkien says,that Pippin would be scarred by the orc whips( maybe on the legs only) as he was wearing several layers of clothing and said nothing when the others turned up,but that is a matter of interpreatation.
I felt realy angry on his behalf that he was douted and had to show his scars and liked the way Aragorn reacted.
I would love to read a story from you about Aragorn saving Faramir and the hobbits as I feel you would do that so beautifully,
I admire the way you weave your diferent stories together.
Thank you for answering my questions, I am learning a lot from you !
Author's reply
Glad you enjoy the glimpse of Benai in his finery. Decided that to move him immediately from new-bought slave to guard status in such exotic duds would impress all.
I've already described all four hobbits as being physically as well as emotionally scarred by their experiences, but agree I ramped up the seriousness of the wounds a bit. But a whip weal can be pretty blamed nasty, while the scars from having been bound would probably have been visible for a time, at least.
Aragorn would want to protect his own from indignity, I'm certain; yet would honor the decision to bare the scars.
Thanks for appreciating how my stories try to remain consistent.
As for answering questions--that's just natural.