Lindelea
· 16 July 2005
· Chapter 2: Part Two: Lost and Found
It was interesting, the way you described Gandalf's perception of the hobbits as sparks in his consciousness.
Whew! I hope there aren't any more of those awful snakes around!
I do hope Pippin is all right!
Poor Merry! Why is the Shadow lying so heavy on him? Did it have something to do with the snake?
Author's reply
I found that part about Gandalf interesting too and I`ve only been waiting for a story to use it in, lol.
Pippin is so brave, isn`t he? I think he`s doing wonderfully in this story, allthough his injuries hurts a lot.
Larner
· 15 July 2005
· Chapter 2: Part Two: Lost and Found
It's always heartening to see the King as healer, serving those who need it.
Author's reply
Yes it is nice to see him like this. Thanks for reading!
Dash
· 15 July 2005
· Chapter 2: Part Two: Lost and Found
Great so far! Update soon!!
Author's reply
Thanks!
Dreamflower
· 14 July 2005
· Chapter 2: Part Two: Lost and Found
Poor Merry and Pippin! I'm so glad they were found! I like your Ranger Fermund very much.
There are so many good details in this: Frodo's growing concern over his missing cousins, Gandalf worrying about their spirits, the search.
And I really loved the alert way that Pippin immediately was on guard when Fermund found them.
And apparently that really was a very dangerous snake. *shudder* I hate snakes.
Looking forward to more Merry comfort and cosseting, as only you can do.
Author's reply
Lol! I do have a knack for Merry h/c, don`t I? Lol. I`m glad you like it. Pippin is so brave, I think. Not caring about his own injuries as long as Merry is hurt.
harrowcat
· 14 July 2005
· Chapter 2: Part Two: Lost and Found
I was very surprised to see only one review Anso as this is good stuff. I am dying to read more. Capable Pippins are a good read and yours seems to capture that balance between child and adult that all tweens suffer with although his experiences have definately shifted the balance.
Author's reply
Thank you! I`m glad you like it. A few more people have reviewed, so you aren`t the only one. :)
Larner
· 5 July 2005
· Chapter 1: PART ONE: A Walk In The Woods
Looking forward to following this one. Excellent beginning. Marigold does like challenges, doesn't she?
Author's reply
Thanks! Yes she does. She has one every month. :) If you write you should join one, it`s great fun!