The Tenth Walker by Lindelea

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Virtuella · 17 April 2025 · Chapter 84: We contemplate mountains, valleys, and lost and present Elves

[Would we have done better with the Dwarf leading?] That is indeed an interesting question. But on the whole I think not - Gimli would have taken then into Moria, too. They should really have listened to Boromir.

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Was it that Boromir wanted to go through Rohan? I can't quite remember at the moment. We are so spoiled with our instant communications these days. It's hard to imagine a time when news travelled slowly – if it travelled at all! They couldn't know if the Rohirrim had fallen – and, actually, if the Company had passed through Rohan while Saruman still controlled Théoden, things might have gone very badly. After all, Théoden was not released from Saruman's spell until after Gandalf had died and been sent back, long after the decision to climb Caradhras or pass through Moria was made. And ultimately, listening to Boromir would have led to disaster, for he wanted the Ring to go to Minas Tirith. (I still think Gandalf ought to have whistled up Gwaihir, long before the Dark Lord mounted the Nazgûl on winged steeds, and simply sent the Ring to Mt Doom via airmail. But then the story would have been a whole lot shorter, and we wouldn't have all this glorious fanfic to read!)

Virtuella · 17 April 2025 · Chapter 83: We reach the top of a low ridge in the dawning

Oh dear, that song is going to stick in everyone's brain for days now!

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...at least I haven't stumbled across a Shire version of "This is the Song that Never Ends..." LOL! (Of course, if there were such a thing, trust Pippin to know it. Or even to make it up himself!)

Virtuella · 17 April 2025 · Chapter 82: We make a long and stumbling night-march

[‘We started out on one of the longest, darkest nights of the year,’] The LOTR timeline is a puzzle, isn't it? Why did Gandalf tell Frodo to wait till September? Why did they tarry so long in Rivendell - checking the surroundings for nazgul hardly justifies the delay. And then a month's holiday in Lothlorien! Do yuo think Tolkien had some scheme in mind where the times of year are symbolic? Because if Frodo had set out as soon as Gandalf told him about the Ring, the quest could have been sompleted by midsummer!

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I'm not sure Gandalf told Frodo to wait till September? If I'm remembering right, he said to leave no later than September, and Frodo was the one who kept procrastinating until he'd run out of days on the calendar. But I am badly in need of a nap, so speculation is rather beyond me at the moment. I'm not sure about symbolic times of year, except that I seem to remember hearing at one time that he set the date for the destruction of the Ring (or was it the Battle of the Pelannor?) to coincide with some particular time frame from history or mythology or something like that. But with this groggy brain, I can't seem to dredge up any more details than that. Might he have had some underlying motive for having them set out on December 25? I have no idea. I only know that March was significant somehow, even though I don't remember why. Contrariwise, in my "Ferdi and Farry Go to Gondor" story, I have allowed myself some leeway in terms of timing, and so the New Company set off from Bree in midsummer and are likely to come to Caradhras well before autumn arrives, seemingly an ideal time for traversing mountain paths. I'm sure young Faramir would have liked to follow the same timeline as the original Fellowship in his quest for authenticity, but thankfully, the adults in the room put their collective feet down and set a different schedule than the one he proposed. I am definitely rambling now, so I'm going to leave off answering reviews (or even reading fanfic and then writing reviews), and take a nap. Cheers!

Virtuella · 17 April 2025 · Chapter 81: We find rest along the way

I like your weather descriptions! On a recent reread of LOTR I noticed how Tolkien isn't using pathetic fallacy, but is describing weather as the random natural phenomenon it really is. When it's rainy or stormy, it doesn't mean anything, it's just that sometimes it rains! I think this makes the world more convincing, and your weather does the same.

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I have to say that Tolkien's descriptions of weather, for the most part, seem familiar, especially since we have gone camping in miserable rain as often as in pleasant weather. Weather happens, so to speak. Recently, however, I did read (or maybe I heard a recorded interview?) that one of the scenes he wrote about travelling in the mountains (I don't remember if it was in The Hobbit or LOTR) was based on his own experience of (I think) thunder and falling rocks and such while travelling through mountainous country. So in that case, the unnatural weather he described (wasn't there something in The Hobbit about giants battling? and Caradhras had something about fell voices on the air, I think) was taken from reality.

Virtuella · 17 April 2025 · Chapter 80: Another day, another dollop of this and that

Poor Boromir; he gets a bad rep because of one moment of weakness, but on the whole, he is a very sensible and perceptive man. Gandalf made a some foolish decisions on the quest, most of which Boromir opposed. I'm glad you are showing him here to be so pragmatic and considerate.

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JRRT called Boromir a noble Man, if I'm remembering right. I wonder if Faramir was able to resist the call of the Ring in part because Boromir was their father's favourite? Did the stress of growing up with that knowledge somehow harden the younger brother? (By "harden", I'm talking about refining like steel under the force of forge and hammer.) Thanks! I have a great deal of respect for Boromir, in part because of some solidly-written fanfic I remember reading.

Virtuella · 17 April 2025 · Chapter 79: Second day of the New Year, same as the first, a little more sleet, weather a little bit worse

[It is near dawning, or at least dawn-smell is in the air, though there are few birds to sing at this time of the year, in this wild place where we wend our cautious way. Sometimes in that dark hour before the dawning, before the sky begins to lighten, the wind will drop to stillness, as if every creature in the world, even the air itself, holds its breath in anticipation.] This is a lovely description, and I have known mornings like this.

Lady Forlong · 16 April 2025 · Chapter 109: An eye-opener, and no mistake

Yes, Gandalf can bestow warmth and courage. A much better power than turning people into toads :)

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Thank you for your thoughtful reviews! I just saw them as I was stumbling off to bed. Will come back tomorrow to read/say more. (((hugs)))

Lady Forlong · 16 April 2025 · Chapter 74: We follow winding paths to sheer falls, and swamps

He keeps saying he's "only a pony," and usually after he's come up with a unique perspective or something very insightful.

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This observation makes me smile. Thanks for sharing your insight!

Lady Forlong · 15 April 2025 · Chapter 73: We follow faithless paths in a windswept wilderness

"How fearsome They would be, if they rode upon winged creatures!" Famous last words.

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Oh that awful thing called foreshadowing! Perhaps it ought to be outlawed...

Lady Forlong · 15 April 2025 · Chapter 66: We reach the Ford, and pause for refreshment

It's heartwarming that he's progressed from "my Sam" to "my hobbits."

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Bill has a big heart, for sure! And being a pony, I think he relates well to hobbits as opposed to taller people.

Lady Forlong · 15 April 2025 · Chapter 65: We leave the Valley behind

So here we see him actually going through the process of thinking up one of his names for someone. The rest of them seem to have come so easy...

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Bill is not quite as comfortable around Men as he is around his Hobbits. That could make him more tentative. (On a personal note, I had trouble telling the difference between Aragorn and Boromir when I first saw FOTR in the theater. I don't know why they looked so indistinguishable to me at first, but they did. I could instantly distinguish one hobbit from another, and of course Gandalf and Legolas and Gimli are completely different from each other and the rest of the Fellowship. But the two Men? They looked alike to me for the longest time.)

Lady Forlong · 15 April 2025 · Chapter 64: We depart and begin a long climb

Your parting words between Bilbo and Sam seem very plausible to me too.

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Oh, good, I appreciate hearing that. Thanks!

Lady Forlong · 15 April 2025 · Chapter 59: I make my wishes known

If Bill only knew what he was getting himself into, he wouldn't be so eager to go with them. PS I still get a kick out of his names for people.

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Poor Bill. And yet, horses have been known to run back into burning buildings. Maybe in the same way, going with them carries with it a level of familiarity that's more attractive to him than staying behind. Thanks!

Lady Forlong · 15 April 2025 · Chapter 31: We meet hope unlooked for, aid unexpected

I love the way the horses talk to each other, and the way Bill refers to Sam as "mine."

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I have read at least one fanfic (maybe two?) that had Asfaloth acting insufferably superior. And I have seen horses in real life establishing and enforcing a pecking order when they're in a field. Still, it makes sense to me that Glorfindel (who is written as kind, gracious, courageous, practical, and a host of other positive qualities) would rub off on his horse, or else he'd choose a horse with a similar outlook. Asfaloth has nothing to prove, and so he can afford to be kind and gracious to poor Bill. Since his Rider is one of the few who can ride openly against the Nazgûl, Asfaloth also has a pretty good idea of what Bill has been up against, and so there's no need for Bill to prove himself – the pony already has done that, all things considered. Thanks for reading and pausing to share your thoughts!

Lady Forlong · 15 April 2025 · Chapter 29: Well-rested, we return to our journey

"natters away in his best brainless manner" LOL He's got Pippin figured out.

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Ah, Pippin. Gotta love that hobbit...

Lady Forlong · 15 April 2025 · Chapter 28: We find a temporary resting place

I still love the names he keeps coming up with for Merry and Pippin. They keep getting better and better.

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I'm glad to hear that! I have known ponies with a sense of humour, and I think Bill could be one of them.

Lady Forlong · 14 April 2025 · Chapter 4: We share and share alike

It gets better. Now we have "Mr. Not-So-Merry" LOL This is delightful.

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LOL, and Merry's name will keep changing with his moods. Bill's names for people will hopefully show that he's closest to the hobbits out of everyone he meets, which makes sense to me, at least. Thanks for coming along on the journey! I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Lady Forlong · 14 April 2025 · Chapter 3: We enter the pathless wilderness, no longer on solid ground

I love the way Bill is referring to "my Sam" and "Mr. Apples-and-Mischief."

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Interestingly, Frodo is always Master in Bill's thoughts, and Sam is always "my Sam", but Merry's name confuses him because the hobbit is definitely *not* merry much of the time. Pippin must make quite an impression on the pony, I think. Thanks for reading and pausing to leave a good word.

Lady Forlong · 14 April 2025 · Chapter 1: We take our leave of Bree

I love that bit about the apple LOL

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It was so much fun to build on what was in the original text! (Thanks!)

Virtuella · 14 April 2025 · Chapter 78: We stumble over rough paths through the darkness

Ah, well done Merry for being able to tell just by the sound!

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I love hearing people appreciate Merry! (My favourite hobbit...) Thanks!

Virtuella · 14 April 2025 · Chapter 77: We have a celebration of our own

Well, the first footer is supposed to be a tall, dark man, but I suppose under the circumstances, a hobbit will suffice. ;-)

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Hmm, then it would make sense for a Hobbit first-footer to be either tall (for a hobbit) and dark, or short and fair? (Actually, Ferdibrand Took as I write him is dark-haired and tall for a hobbit, which sort of fits with his first-footing story. LOL!)

Virtuella · 14 April 2025 · Chapter 76: We remember past celebrations

Ooooh, first-footing! What a very Scottish thing to do! :) :) :)

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When I heard about first-footing, it sounded so hobbity to me... I must admit to borrowing freely from and blending together various Celtic customs and turns of phrase in shaping Shire life. (Hopefully the blend is pleasant and not jarring!)

Virtuella · 5 April 2025 · Chapter 75: Disaster nearly strikes

I can so relate to that. I have fallen in the water many times as a child...

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Someone close to me recently suffered a severe case of hypothermia while hiking, and I sent them the link to this chapter to read in hospital. They were quite amused and said, 'Yup. Pretty much.' Thanks for dropping a note! I can certainly empathize with the whole miserable business of falling in water and being cold and wet while travelling between places of shelter.

Virtuella · 5 April 2025 · Chapter 74: We follow winding paths to sheer falls, and swamps

Yeah, I do wonder about Aragorn as well... What did the pony smell? Was it the swamp? Or a hint of Saruman's influence, of orcs or wargs?

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Looking back at the chapter, I think Bill was smelling a swamp or bog, and it reminded him of the Midgewater Marshes. And, yeah, one might wonder about Aragorn and his familiarity with travel in this area, considering how much backtracking they seemed to have done – and not all that far from Rivendell! "The paths were little known to anyone except to the people of Rivendell" the text says. And Aragorn lived a fair number of years in Rivendell, so did he never explore these paths? Inquiring minds would like to know. One part of JRRT's admittedly brief (two paragraphs!) description of the first fortnight of walking includes this sentence: Paths were few and winding, and led them often only to the edge of some sheer fall, or down into treacherous swamps.

Virtuella · 5 April 2025 · Chapter 73: We follow faithless paths in a windswept wilderness

[I try to imagine what it might be like, to be small and afraid, with larger creatures blundering past…] Yes, I guess the world holds many terrors for small creatures. :( [How fearsome They would be, if they rode upon winged creatures!] Nice foreshadowing! In the book, very little happens between Rivendell and Moria, so I am looking forward to finding out what you have done to fill the gap.

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I hope it works! There is so little description, and yet they were travelling miles and miles through pretty rough country! I'm sure it wasn't just monotonous put-one-foot-in-front-of-the-other trudging along for the whole time! (Of course, I've read so many gapfillers over the years, it's equally improbable that so many things happened along the way – but certainly fun to read!) I anticipated the same problem with the continuation, Bill's journey back to Bree. So I'll just have to see how well it sits with the reader when I finally start posting chapters. Hopefully, it won't stretch people's incredulity too much. Thanks for reading and taking the time to share your thoughts!