Twin Mischief by Cierah

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pipinheart · 18 July 2005 · Chapter 13: Epilogue

This is very well written,you have the twinns just right...Poor Elladan and his dreams,I wonder if it is a future even. Elrohir dream of purple fields is so different, a contrast to them both. Poor Elrohir,he got the finishing touch of Legolas's prank.... Covered in honey,then in mud.... Gandalph is coming...Can't wait to hear what else kind of trouble they can get into... Please continue...

pipinheart · 1 July 2005 · Chapter 12: Farewells & Nightmares

I love this more and more each time you write... So lovely...Elledan has nightmares and Elrohir seems to bring him some comfort... Please update soon...Great writing

pipinheart · 1 July 2005 · Chapter 11: An Understanding

Very well done... You can feel the twinns personality come pouring out. The may be twins but are different as well. The closeness you can feel right here. Thier childhood adventures I am curious of,what is the dreams Elladan has? Love to hear more...

Pipinheart · 28 June 2005 · Chapter 1: Plans

This shows the closeness of the twinns as the oldest is being punished for trying to go into the woods...Then they are having guest and plan to fool them... Very enjoyable reading...

pipinheart · 28 June 2005 · Chapter 2: Confused Introductions

The twinns were imbarrased that they were caught in rumppled clothes. And thier father even confussed who they were.... Nice work

pipinheart · 28 June 2005 · Chapter 3: A Switch

The twinns are reading themselves to have fun at thier new guest expense...They are having fun in this game of thiers...amuzing... Love this...

pipinheart · 28 June 2005 · Chapter 6: Let the Games Begin

It is very interesting to find Elrond and King of Mirkwood used to be good friends...I am curious as to what broke thier friendship up..and can it be rekindled... Keep it up

Pipinheart · 28 June 2005 · Chapter 10: Rescue

Very nice...The Prince of Mirkwood,is he really dead...What a tragidy,even if he was a jerk... Those words are dangerouys,and should be avoided...Legolas saving the Twinns,he should be trained now that he proved himself... Love to hear more....Update soon...

pipinheart · 28 June 2005 · Chapter 9: Evil Revealed

I love this story,so great! The fighting with the banshee was a very vivid scene,there is such detail it was as if you breathe this story...Nice job can't wait to hear more... Keep up the writting...

pipinheart · 25 June 2005 · Chapter 8: Gur Woods

This is Great! You had me on the edge offf my seat... I love the twinns,but wonder will they excape those dreader woods and what is the secret that lies behind... Please continue soon......

LaughingBrook · 20 June 2005 · Chapter 7: Adventures Planned

Oohhh... *shivers* I really didn't expect this. I'm not sure if it's a trick or not, either. Elrond's sense of foreboding gave me the idea that it wasn't all fun and games, though. Thank you for the update. More? Please?

harrowcat · 20 June 2005 · Chapter 7: Adventures Planned

You don't seem to be getting many reviews for this Cierah but please don't give up on it as I am enjoying it and I am sure others are as well.

LaughingBrook · 19 June 2005 · Chapter 5: Tables Turned

LOL< :oD Great job, Cierah. I can't wait for the next chapter!

LaughingBrook · 17 June 2005 · Chapter 4: Dinner & Twins Revealed

I am so loving this!