Reviews (12)

Aranel of the Golden Flower · 2 October 2006 · Chapter 7: The Slave Trade

Is there any more of this?

pipinheart · 16 July 2005 · Chapter 7: The Slave Trade

This is great....I have read this straight through,and love it...Poor Elrohir has had a hard time,though he has tried to excape. And now him and his brother sold into slaver...Oh,my how will they find ech other again.... Please update this soon.....

Viresse · 28 June 2005 · Chapter 7: The Slave Trade

oh no, the men who got Elladan are not nice at all, while Elladan is already seriously wounded, taking more hits on his head is just getting worse. Is Elrond coming to save them? Which son will Elrond first find and save? Your description about Elladan's suffering is so vivid. Even in such a weakened state, Elladan's desperation on finding his twin is unmatching and it's sad to know that they're now separated. Hope you'll update soon.

Viresse · 28 June 2005 · Chapter 6: Altering Realities

I like how you describe the drug effects on Elrohir. Where are they leading Elrohir?

Lassiel · 20 June 2005 · Chapter 7: The Slave Trade

I really like this story! I hope the twins aren't seperated and that they find each other. It will probably make being a slave even more horrible if they are seperated. :(

Jay of Lasgalen · 6 June 2005 · Chapter 6: Altering Realities

Hallucinogenic drugs? Not good for poor Elrohir. And where is Elladan during all this? Has he regained consciousness yet? *sigh* We love to torture the twins. Jay

Viresse · 6 June 2005 · Chapter 5: Escape

Bravo fighting scene! Unfortunately Elrohir is now hurt also. Can Elladan wake? Would it be possible for him help Elrohir in turn? how about Imrid? Can he gets out with the kids? Please keep up the good work and update soon.

Viresse · 6 June 2005 · Chapter 4: Horrifying Reality

Did Elrohir manage to leave some signs for Elrond to find? Elladan is seriously wounded and it may not be wise to move him. While the man roughly picking up and roughly dropping him down on the ground is just making matter worse...oh dear...

Viresse · 6 June 2005 · Chapter 3: Helpless

What an evil leader! I can't stop shivering when such a merciless leader touch Elladan - not sure if the leader will hurt him more. A good chapter.

Viresse · 6 June 2005 · Chapter 1: A Lost Sense

I like how you describe Elrohir's reaction when he met his twin and knew his serious injuries. The action that Elrohir rush down the hill is great, it shows just how clever Elrohir is.

viresse · 6 June 2005 · Chapter 1: The Terror Begins

One twin saving the other - it's classic! And write well! I always love to read this kind of story. Being the eldest, I think it's natural that Elladan will try to keep Elrohir from harm. I like how you describe Elrohir's reaction when he lost Elladan and when Elladan's chest hurt.

Firestar · 3 June 2005 · Chapter 4: Horrifying Reality

I can't believe you haven't received a review yet at this site! I'm glad that hasn't kept you from posting as much as you have. I hope another chapter comes quickly so we can find out what happens. I can't wait to see the mens' reactions when they find out just what the twins really are. I also really like your characterization of Elrohir. I can definately imagine him acting as such, especially when Elladan is in danger. Keep up the good work. -Firestar