docmon
· 22 May 2005
· Chapter 1: Impediment
This was terrific! A bit of angst, a bit of suspense, a bit of action, and a nice happy ending. Nice way to end the day!
It was nice to see a scenario where not everyone was enamored with aragorn becoming king. Just seems a bit more realistic. I liked how Frodo asked ARagorn to spare the kidnappers in the end. It felt in keeping with Frodo's character.
nice job!
Author's reply
Thank you! And sorry for not replying earlier.
Yes, I think it will be thrilling to see how Aragorn's becoming a king might put his friends in danger. But the ending is actually donated by my beta.
:)
Frodo_Baggins
· 12 May 2005
· Chapter 1: Impediment
I loved it! A wonderfully dark, angsty story accompanied by dark chocolate 'Dark Side' m&ms, all contribute to a truly mysteriously dark mood! now if only it was night, and i had candles burning and a storm was raging outside...i'd be in the medieval times! yes, 1100 AD with a laptop. go figure.
um, only thing is that i kinda felt frodo cried a little too much. i mean, he's Frodo, he doesn't cry all the time, but oh well. at least he devised his own escape. i forgive you. *shakes hand and hands precious m&ms...one, two, three, four, five, six...that's it. one of each color. be happy you got any.* they're mine, i tell you!
Author's reply
Hahaha. You with your M&M dark chocolate. (Hey, I've never seen that before!)
Oh, yeah. Sorry for the whiny Frodo. Will remember not to make him like that again next time.
:)
Daynawayna
· 12 May 2005
· Chapter 1: Impediment
wow.. what a great story! I really enjoyed this, Irohael. Interesting plot and well written. Poor Frodo seems to get the brunt of it in a lot of the stories I read here. :( Good Job. Thanks for sharing this with us!
Author's reply
I can't believe I haven't replied to this! Thank you so much for reading btw.
And sorry for tormenting Frodo. That's actually one of my hobbies. :(
:)