Till Death Us Do Part by Jay of Lasgalen

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Celebwen · 1 May 2005 · Chapter 1: Till Death Us Do Part

Jay! My goodness! How heartbreaking can you possibly be????? =D Goodness, I was actually crying through this. I can't wait for more. I loved the part about 'Ro losing his memory for a bit, as my good friend recently got hit in the jaw during one of our softball games and couldn't remember any of the whole day when she got to school the next day. =) I had to fill her in a bit...*eg* Well, indescribˎly wonderful job once again. POST MORE SOON!!!!

Author's reply

Is it horrible of me to say that I'm glad it made you cry? I'm glad it was so effective - but poor Elladan! The story about Elrohir losing his memory comes in 'With Friends Like These' (as does the one about the spider). There will be a short epilogue to go with this.

daw the minstrel · 1 May 2005 · Chapter 1: Till Death Us Do Part

I particularly liked the opening of this, Jay, with Elladan feeling Elrohir's pain and only gradually realizing what had happened. I'm glad he was comforted by the memories of his brother, memories we readers share!

Author's reply

Poor Elladan. I can't believe I wrote a story where one of the twins survives the death of the other :( I think that for elves, the grieving process would take much longer, before they finally come to that acceptance and can remember without pain. There will be a short epilogue to follow this, which is already half written.